Magical Girl: I’m the Primordial Witch, Not a Villain

It can be seen that the author wants to express a fairy tale world. But, to be honest, it is too literary and pedantic, which makes people not want to read it. I hope it can be changed. Everyone comes to Tomato to read novels, not poetry. Moreover, the plot jumps too much and is a depiction of the author's dream. However, this book still shows the author's own conception, and it is full of ingenuity, but I still hope it will be more grounded and the plot coherence will be strengthened. The novel is not like a cartoon. If it is incoherent, it can easily become fragmented and become a drama. The future is promising. It is much better than those AI garbage. At least it has its own new things. Some of the plots made my eyes shine anyway.

I have the same feeling as when I read The Little Prince and the last two books. The pilot gave me a confused feeling of both understanding and not understanding, and it was difficult to read. Moreover, the author's writing has a dreamy feeling, or a dreamlike feeling, just like reading your dream, a hazy feeling. In this fast-paced era, it is difficult for people to read it, or after reading it, they will feel like they are retired. Really, even though there are many Internet hot memes, the atmosphere of the whole book is like a hazy dream. Even if there are memes, it will feel boring, uninteresting, and ordinary. It has a feeling of ordinary daily life. It is recommended to watch it carefully. If you can try to read the first five or six chapters first, you can feel the overall atmosphere first and leave quickly if it is not suitable for you. Well, come on, the author!

After reading for a while, I found that AI is used a bit too much. I can delete most of the descriptions of AI, such as "It's not... It's...", Because it is overemphasized. This sentence pattern can only appear once in a chapter. It smells very strong of AI when used too much. There are also a lot of modifications and adjectives. Because readers read novels for entertainment and relaxation, these things generated by AI can easily focus people's energy at once. It is a bit tiring to read. It will be much better to delete them. However, you can see that even though it was made by AI, it has been roughly edited. Overall, it is okay.

The concept of trivia preservation is probably that if he wants to kill you, then you hit him. If he can't kill you, it doesn't matter as long as he doesn't kill you. Hehehe, because you want to live, so you hit him and he wants to live. That's okay, hehehehe. Isn't it just conceptual hedging? I know a little bit too

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Lao Da's new book, I support it. I've read a few chapters so far and I feel it's okay.

The writing is very good. It's not like a simple novel, it incorporates some thoughts and is very warm [Chigua] This book is more about philosophical thinking than the plot. It is more about daily life and gives people a light feeling.

Why are there so many barefoot people in The Witch? I seem to have discovered the author's little ingenuity 🤔 Could it be because those who are barefoot are not afraid of wearing shoes? 🤓

It looks good, but there are some cracks between chapters, but overall it's good.