Survive in the Desert by Copying a Tree and Raising an Army of Beasts

It's pretty good, but there are some places where the writing isn't very good. I'll give you a suggestion. If you see it, you can change it. Everything else is good. At the beginning, he threw sand at the scorpion, saying that after it hit his face, the attack deflected, and now when his clone scorpion hit the level 5 centipede, he said that the scorpion's compound eyes are naturally resistant to sand [laughter] Saw the latest one. Make a follow-up review It's okay, if there's anything interesting, look behind the author!

I have read 49 chapters so far, which is tied, AI polished, can read, food and grass, author, come on!

Real review⭐⭐⭐ I have read 66 chapters so far, and I have read about 200 chapters. ① Plot · On the surface, it is desert survival, but in essence it is a "pet upgrade flow" framework. · The main plot trend can basically be summarized as follows: explore the map → trigger battle → pets assist → cycle advancement. · The protagonist's own combat power is limited and he relies heavily on pets in battle. Overall, he is not a refreshing hero, with a weak sense of excitement and a slow pace. ② Setting (1) The oasis protective shield is equal to the protagonist's health. If the shield breaks, the protagonist dies. (2) Upgrading the character level does not increase the attribute value, but only expands the backpack capacity; in the later stage, the level system is further diluted and the sense of presence is reduced. (3) A large amount of setting information is vague and general, relying mostly on the protagonist's unilateral speculation; key life and death crises rely on the author's ability to arrange. ③ Protagonist creation and writing style · The protagonist's name is "Chen Mo", and the writing often matches his name - the protagonist often falls into silence or has an inner monologue, which is boring and slow-moving. · The plot advancement relies too much on the protagonist's inner speculation and psychological activities, and the overall writing style is slightly closed, as if the protagonist always lives in his own speculative world. ④ Overall atmosphere and worldview foreshadowing ·The writing is not light-hearted, with a sense of mist and conspiracy. Such as: · All survivors are male, and there are no female characters in the channel; · The essence of survival is the "Trial of the Immortal Kingdom", which is a trial for cultivating immortals; · Set up reversal suspense such as "Fourteen days later, all the living will die and the dead will be resurrected".

I think it's very good-looking, a very standard survival story about collecting pets and upgrading them. The protagonist deserves to be called Chen Mo, he is really silent, Golden Finger is very good, refreshing enough without being too exaggerated...~It is just that the text is too thin.

It's okay, there are some small poison spots, but overall it's not bad, food and grass.

I tied it in one night. I have nothing to say. It is very interesting. The plot rhythm is compact and smooth. The character settings are reasonable. Overall, it looks good. It is just too little. Haha. I hope the author will update it more. The world view is quite large. It depends on how the author writes later. I have never seen this kind of world view. It is very attractive to me.

Surprisingly not bad [full] Good things are in a hurry. I don't know if I can copy them without trying. I have already used several cherished items and props directly.

It took a few hours to tie it up, it looks great! ! ! It's a refreshing novel, and I don't abuse the protagonist. The male protagonist is affectionate and righteous, not a virgin, and his three views are correct. I also like the pets, but I like the wolf the most. It's so kissable, just like a puppy. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Come on, author!

It's a pretty good book, no poisonous points have been found yet, and the language style is concise and efficient. Originally I only gave ratings without writing reviews, but I suddenly thought of this book when I was reading another group lord survival novel, and then the more I thought about it, the more wrong I felt. In my opinion, the underlying design of this book is problematic. Even if the world is set in a desert, the upgradable "facilities" such as fruit trees, defense covers, and grasslands in the book also show that this book is a survival lord book. So the question is, where are the soldiers? In this book, the units appear in the form of pets. In this way, the focus of explosive troops, unit selection and routes is gone. The author's choice is to use the space to describe the evolution of pets and daily plots, which is a bit like a road novel. But the data aspect in this book is not obvious. Take the protagonist as an example. The protagonist takes a strengthening potion and claims to be strengthened, but where is the strengthening? Have no idea. Perhaps it can only be seen from the fact that the protagonist in the book can defeat stronger wild animals. The same goes for those pets, but with an additional appearance change. What's this? Isn't this the cartoon we watched when we were kids? If a pet changes its appearance, it means it is stronger. Since it is a cartoon, is the focus on the plot? Yes, the focus of this book seems to be on exploration and plot (I feel this way after reading about 30 chapters). The author guides readers through the unknown mysteries and truths waiting to be discovered in the desert. But I really want to know, if the author wants to focus on writing these, why did he write a survival lord article...

Why do pets fight alone every time they fight, and they don't help other pets after they kill their opponents?

It looks good so far. There is no big problem with the overall logic of the idea, but there are some details that the author could pay more attention to. 1. The dates planted by the protagonist are physical props that can optimize the attack posture of creatures. After giving them to the first three pets, the protagonist ate them all by himself. The snakes, rats and earthworms he conquered later were not eaten (at least I didn't see it written, the protagonist ate them all by himself). This can be mentioned to make up for the setting. 2. This amount is enough for anyone to see, please add more [laughs] 3. It's best if you can keep writing, but the most important thing about Tomato is that you can't keep writing. I've seen too many writings that were okay but failed in the early stages, so I hope the author can work hard.

To be honest, the previous map was still very nice, but after changing the map later, it didn't look good. I felt dizzy when I saw it, and it felt like a battle of wits. Isn't it a cool article? I was tricked and killed. Goodbye, my third uncle.

If you don't read it because of the one-star review, it's actually quite a pity. It's a very high-quality book. The protagonist exposed his talent because, after the accumulation of original capital, the protagonist has changed from a lone wolf to a team [face covering] It is meaningless to hide talent. In fact, when I saw the protagonist exposing his talent earlier, I also felt shocked... I pinched my nose and read two more chapters, and everything was rationalized.

Overall, it's okay. It's just that there's a bit too much AI. It's better to be more careful.

So far it looks okay, with AI polish, but it's not pure AI. The protagonist's character is also pretty good, cautious and thoughtful. If there is a crisis, I will tell the people in the group. . . But I want to know that the crisis seems to be quite serious. There are only a few hundred people left in this area now. What if they are all dead by then? Will the world channel be opened later?

Although there is no depth, Internet articles are just like fast food, and there is no need for depth. This article has a smooth rhythm, a compact plot, and one link after another. There are cheats but it's not mindless killing, so it's worth watching.

When I heard Chapter 26, I already knew that the combat power was being suppressed... Since you can copy, why not copy the monsters at night? The monsters at night must be better than the monsters during the day, and then use the monsters at night to suppress the monsters during the day.

The book is quite nice, it is about raising pets and fighting. I saw some people saying that the battle strength is overpowered, but as of the latest chapter, only 11 days have passed in the plot, and the protagonist's pets are generally at the same level every day. The author does write that the passage of time is a bit slower, but it can't be considered overwhelming, right?

The rhythm is very comfortable, and it is not a routine. The items obtained are also very interesting and will not make you feel dazzled. It is very interesting, has no poisonous points, and seems to be very relaxing.

It's pretty good-looking, much better than some verbal essays

It's so beautiful, every beast is very interesting. Can you really not update three times a day and ten chapters in one update?

The queen ant hasn't woken up yet? What's the use of keeping it?

Women only affect speed

Okay, okay, okay, okay

Good reviews, I can read it

Okay, I can score an eight or above. I don't know why the score is so low.

Not bad, why is the rating so low?

Okay, little boutique

It looks good, like it, but there are too few updates.

Generally speaking, it's okay to watch now, but it will be hard to say later. The writing was pretty good before chapter 100, but after chapter 100 I lost interest, and I don't know how it was written.