After an Ordinary Girl Falls in Love at First Sight

(The following is a substitute comment) This book is so good! The writing is smooth and not awkward at all! Because my xp is a tsundere and patriarchal type, I fell in love with Xiao Wu at first sight😋 and I feel that it is very easy to substitute. In addition to no set name, there are no personal settings such as flavors, family, etc. They are all described in a way like "He hands you the food with the flavor you like" (so I personally feel that this book is actually a substitution-oriented text😘). (Off-topic off-topic off-topic: Recently, I feel like there are more and more novels written by Otoyo girls, and there are also many IP Otoyo fans and OC Otsui. Are we Otoyo girls about to rise? (•̀ᴗ•́)و

The sense of immersion is very good! I feel that every type of male protagonist is portrayed very well, whether it is a youthful campus-oriented canine, a restrained and mature young man, or a wet and heavy man who forces love, every relationship is very delicious... And some psychological descriptions are particularly delicate, and the description of the stream of consciousness is also very good. It is delicious. However, it should be noted that this book does not contain female protagonists. Reading the reviews, I saw that sister Baoxiang's comments are a bit outrageous, but overall it is still very delicious👍🏻

The author's novel is very well written, the writing style is very exciting, and it is particularly immersive. However, the strange thing is that I did not bring in the perspective of "you", but the perspective of Wu Qiling. Really weird. I was very jealous when I saw the heroine with another man, but I was not jealous of "you", but jealous of that man. How could he be with "you"? There was a feeling that why was he and not me? I was really convinced. How could I bring myself into Wu Qiling's perspective? I really can't stand it anymore. Seeing "you" and that man so happy in the amusement park makes me irritable. Obviously I am the one who loves you the most. I really can't stand it. Why do I have such strange thoughts. This should obviously be from the perspective of "you". It's so strange. I really can't stand myself. In addition to my own reasons, the author's writing style is really good, and the psychological description is also very good.

The writing is very good, and it feels very immersive because I am also a sensitive person who thinks a lot. Sometimes the perspective of the male protagonist is interspersed, which is not too abrupt. It is very delicious. Originally, I am not very good at getting mature men, but Que Lu is really reliable and a reliable adult. All in all, it's invincible, delicious, beautiful, and very immersive. Be sure to keep writing! If you don't let me substitute, I'll apologize. I don't think I'm very clear-headed at night.

The writing style is quite good and the writing is okay; I like the characters very much. The plot is a bit strange, maybe because there is no outline. I don't know why, but when I watched Wu Hechi's plot, I felt like the heroine was raped... Que's plot seemed like she cared on the surface but was actually taking advantage of her, which was a bit seductive... Not very comfortable.

Although he is a heartthrob, it's really a bit frustrating to watch, especially the artist who directly forced "me" to look at his body. Is this right? In real life, a normal person would have been sentenced to death if he encountered this kind of thing. Well, "I" actually signed the agreement. If he likes money, other male protagonists are not a thousand times better than this artist. I like Que Heheng.

So well written!! Otome is awesome! Every character and the hero's personality has a distinct personality! The author is very good at writing things without being OOC, and he also has a good handle on the psychology of the characters. The plot is smooth and has ups and downs, and it's good in every aspect! Even the heroine's character can completely correspond to the psychology of most ordinary girls. I think this is the most difficult thing to grasp. Because women generally have higher empathy and diversity, it is actually not easy to create a "me" that corresponds to most people. Too much seems pretentious, too little seems cold, and female readers can usually capture these very keenly, but the author did it!! I hold a banner for the author!! Really awesome!! I won't name you the best cook!! (Roaring) (rolling) (roaring)

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I I will never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. I beg you, brother, just one more episode. (Back slowly

It's not bad. The author's writing style is delicate, and the male protagonists who appear are well portrayed and have good taste. Whether they are the sunshine loyal dog, the reliable young man, and the two people, they are all very delicious and delicious😋, but in fact, I don't really like kidnapping these dragons!! I was so lawless that I tied them up directly because I liked kidnapping so much. I took my revenge harshly and just let them be choked and suffocated, but they didn't die, right? Well, overall, the author's writing is great, and a short plot can establish a person's character. It is worthy of encouragement!!! I feel a little frustrated and have a sense of powerlessness, but fortunately the author has made rapid progress. By the way, I heard that there was a person on Tomato who updated 100 chapters and her book became a hit and went straight to the top 🤔

Although it has the framework of a popular girl and a heartthrob, the background is not a refreshing novel, but a sour and painful literature. The author's description of the environment and atmosphere are very brilliant, but from a plot perspective, it feels like neither "I" nor the male protagonists are very happy in love (if it can barely be called a love)... I hope there will be an ending that makes everyone happy 😢