(The scores have just been opened, so the scores are a bit low. They will go up later)
(I didn't expect to write it for so long, but ended up writing about 200,000 words. I'll give you a brief introduction to this novel.)
(Currently going to the world, cyberpunk, Marvel, Jackie Chan Adventures, Naruto.
The follow-up will include NieR Automata, Pitch Black Bullet, Pirates, and Demon Slayer may be written, but that's all for now anyway.
You may have noticed that the worlds we visited have a very bad world view)
(Harem story, multiple female protagonists, good at splitting CP, more daily life, pure invincible story, absolutely cool story, not a little bit of trouble, that is, the protagonist fully knows what will happen next. If he knows that there is an unbeatable enemy behind, he will develop enough to defeat him, then meet him, and then kill him instantly)
Also, many people complain that there are no characteristics of Night City. In fact, there are some, but very few. The first point is that I am afraid of being blocked. The second point can actually be explained. The girls around the protagonist are familiar with each other and will not use these dirty words. And then, I won't give them a picture. Am I even invincible, and I still let them scold me?
Another thing is that there will be no world correction. For example, if the protagonist comes here, he will follow the development of the original plot. There will not be that situation. The fourth natural disaster has come here. Do I still have to follow the development of the original plot?
Reader comments
I finally met someone who dismantled CPs, opened a harem, and even received cool articles from David's mother [Adoration]
It's a very interesting novel, although occasionally the world view is a bit off-kilter and the characters understand extraordinary things too easily and quickly, but overall, it's still very comfortable to read. Come on [like]
Save money: Invincible novels, multiple heroines, making dumplings, Zhutian. The protagonist has MC ability and can travel to different worlds to save different people and pick up different beauties. Overall, it is non-toxic. Recommended.
——Separating line——
In fact, there are still some shortcomings. For example, the plot of Jackie Chan's Adventures is purely speed-running, with almost no plot. Other worlds are not so fast, the plot is more daily, and there are battles but not many.
I read some of the negative reviews, and some of them are just embarrassing, but I still recommend them [laughs]
Cao Mao: Wei Tong ruled for four generations, but now he is surrounded by jackals. You actually want to eat my flesh and blood. I am a descendant of Taizu and the king of the Wei Dynasty. How can I sit back and suffer humiliation? I would rather fight to the death than the traitor can dare to fight! The powerful ministers shocked the lord and regarded the emperor as nothing! If Sima is kept outside, the imperial power may be taken away, and loyal men are secretly waiting for the opportunity to break the situation. I will make a decision. Even if you die, there is nothing to fear. I would rather die than die. I am also the descendant of Taizu and the king of the Wei Dynasty.
It's good, A+, but the author didn't pay much attention to typing, and the writing and narrative are quite smooth. Some places jump too fast, but that's not a problem. The important thing is that there are loli! There is maternal love! There is a royal sister! You can also hug a girl to sleep and just give it to a demon king. I hope the author pays attention to not making the Golgok story too messy. The current Jackie Chan and cyberpunk are actually a little messy because of frequent time travel, but it is acceptable. I hope the author will continue to work hard
NB, this is the best novel I have read recently, bar none. However, there are also disadvantages. For example, in terms of food ingredients and seasonings, why not purchase them directly from Jackie Chan's world? If you want to write, you can explain it. If you don't want to, just write it off (unless it is polished by AI, which is difficult to change). There are no big problems with the pacing, everything is pretty good. To be honest, when I wrote Jackie Chan in The Second World, I thought it was just about the functions of food and clothing, and I didn't write about the results. 2077 When the main world emm... How to put it, this world is too small. It may not even be as big as the Japan in Jackie Chan's world that has been wiped out. I feel like there will be no place to put all the little lolita back when I go to Pitch Black Bullet. Or as more and more worlds are visited, more heroines are brought back. Not to mention other things, the Marvel universe, DC world, Resident Evil, Japanese comics and so on. There should be
Sigh😮💨The Adventures of Jackie Chan... I thought it was Marvel or Pokémon or Black Bullets...
I hope you won't write to me Tuo Da [punch out]
You can update more. If there is a Lucy plot, please give it a thumbs up.
I think we can try to take Lucy with us to travel through various worlds (don't go to high-intensity worlds such as Dragon Ball). After all, Lucy's wish is to go to the moon and stay with the hero forever, so that we can slowly become stronger together. I really want to see Chainsaw Man or Guilty Crown. Lesse and Yuqi both need to be saved (there are many anime that can be written).
You can eat it but don't use your brain. After all, these are tomatoes, what else do you want to do? [Think]
Really pretty! It can be seen that the author's writing is really delicate and not obtrusive at all. It's a pity that I discovered this book too early and read it all in one go. Come on, author, the writing is so good [Blow a kiss]
It's quite good. It took me an hour or two to read it. The author should update it soon [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Work hard on the writing~ But it's good and I love watching it~ Work on more!
The idea is fine, but the writing style needs to be adjusted.
It's quite enjoyable to read. As long as you don't hate smart writing, it's good.
It's also "too much." When I listen to it, I keep saying "that's too much."
It's a pity that there is no fun for Johnny. My suggestion is that Johnny becomes a woman, then resurrects Ultra as a man, and then the protagonist watches Johnny's fun.
Very satisfied, nice looking
What a shame, make up for the regrets
Very well written!
Come on, stop being a eunuch.
It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly.
I still like Wuwei's daily novels, please give it a try, the author
It's also very good. Come and try it.
Not bad. At least it looks like a cool article.
It's pretty good, doesn't look too poisonous and feels good.
It's exactly the kind of fanfic I want to read, to make up for my regrets.
It's a bit white, but it eats very quickly. Good reviews
I like the author's writing style, it's very in line with my personal taste. Good review, keep it up! Quick update.
It's beautiful, no need to say more, this is a really cool article
I finally met someone who dismantled CPs, opened a harem, and even received cool articles from David's mother [Adoration]
It's a very interesting novel, although occasionally the world view is a bit off-kilter and the characters understand extraordinary things too easily and quickly, but overall, it's still very comfortable to read. Come on [like]
Save money: Invincible novels, multiple heroines, making dumplings, Zhutian. The protagonist has MC ability and can travel to different worlds to save different people and pick up different beauties. Overall, it is non-toxic. Recommended. ——Separating line—— In fact, there are still some shortcomings. For example, the plot of Jackie Chan's Adventures is purely speed-running, with almost no plot. Other worlds are not so fast, the plot is more daily, and there are battles but not many. I read some of the negative reviews, and some of them are just embarrassing, but I still recommend them [laughs]
Cao Mao: Wei Tong ruled for four generations, but now he is surrounded by jackals. You actually want to eat my flesh and blood. I am a descendant of Taizu and the king of the Wei Dynasty. How can I sit back and suffer humiliation? I would rather fight to the death than the traitor can dare to fight! The powerful ministers shocked the lord and regarded the emperor as nothing! If Sima is kept outside, the imperial power may be taken away, and loyal men are secretly waiting for the opportunity to break the situation. I will make a decision. Even if you die, there is nothing to fear. I would rather die than die. I am also the descendant of Taizu and the king of the Wei Dynasty.
It's good, A+, but the author didn't pay much attention to typing, and the writing and narrative are quite smooth. Some places jump too fast, but that's not a problem. The important thing is that there are loli! There is maternal love! There is a royal sister! You can also hug a girl to sleep and just give it to a demon king. I hope the author pays attention to not making the Golgok story too messy. The current Jackie Chan and cyberpunk are actually a little messy because of frequent time travel, but it is acceptable. I hope the author will continue to work hard
NB, this is the best novel I have read recently, bar none. However, there are also disadvantages. For example, in terms of food ingredients and seasonings, why not purchase them directly from Jackie Chan's world? If you want to write, you can explain it. If you don't want to, just write it off (unless it is polished by AI, which is difficult to change). There are no big problems with the pacing, everything is pretty good. To be honest, when I wrote Jackie Chan in The Second World, I thought it was just about the functions of food and clothing, and I didn't write about the results. 2077 When the main world emm... How to put it, this world is too small. It may not even be as big as the Japan in Jackie Chan's world that has been wiped out. I feel like there will be no place to put all the little lolita back when I go to Pitch Black Bullet. Or as more and more worlds are visited, more heroines are brought back. Not to mention other things, the Marvel universe, DC world, Resident Evil, Japanese comics and so on. There should be Sigh😮💨The Adventures of Jackie Chan... I thought it was Marvel or Pokémon or Black Bullets...
I hope you won't write to me Tuo Da [punch out]
You can update more. If there is a Lucy plot, please give it a thumbs up. I think we can try to take Lucy with us to travel through various worlds (don't go to high-intensity worlds such as Dragon Ball). After all, Lucy's wish is to go to the moon and stay with the hero forever, so that we can slowly become stronger together. I really want to see Chainsaw Man or Guilty Crown. Lesse and Yuqi both need to be saved (there are many anime that can be written).
You can eat it but don't use your brain. After all, these are tomatoes, what else do you want to do? [Think]
Really pretty! It can be seen that the author's writing is really delicate and not obtrusive at all. It's a pity that I discovered this book too early and read it all in one go. Come on, author, the writing is so good [Blow a kiss]
It's quite good. It took me an hour or two to read it. The author should update it soon [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Work hard on the writing~ But it's good and I love watching it~ Work on more!
The idea is fine, but the writing style needs to be adjusted.
It's quite enjoyable to read. As long as you don't hate smart writing, it's good.
It's also "too much." When I listen to it, I keep saying "that's too much."
It's a pity that there is no fun for Johnny. My suggestion is that Johnny becomes a woman, then resurrects Ultra as a man, and then the protagonist watches Johnny's fun.
Very satisfied, nice looking
What a shame, make up for the regrets
Very well written!
Come on, stop being a eunuch.
It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly.
I still like Wuwei's daily novels, please give it a try, the author
It's also very good. Come and try it.
Not bad. At least it looks like a cool article.
It's pretty good, doesn't look too poisonous and feels good.
It's exactly the kind of fanfic I want to read, to make up for my regrets.
It's a bit white, but it eats very quickly. Good reviews
I like the author's writing style, it's very in line with my personal taste. Good review, keep it up! Quick update.
It's beautiful, no need to say more, this is a really cool article
Very nice, all I can say is... Good... Very good