
Kaguya Houraisan’s Dungeon Adventure
蓬莱山辉夜的地错冒险
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 345k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
129Chapters
29Reads
2Listens
10.4kReads · all time
In booklists 2
Reader comments 21
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It's okay, although it's not that bad, after all, Kaguya's lazy personality is incompatible with the desperate environment of the land. Then this book can only be published on Tomato. If you post it to a cat or a Lu, you will be sprayed to death. The female protagonist is still the wife of a nerd and ran away to a family of a male god. Those who were sprayed, that is, Tomato basically has no women in their hearts, and they don't care about this.
It feels okay, but it feels a bit strange, and it's a bit deliberately suppressing her combat power. Her ability is innate, not something that comes from taking Penglai medicine. And where are her pop-ups? She just traveled through time and her combat power was not cleared. It feels strange that you wrote it this way. Did you mean it on purpose?
Classic AI article, if you can accept it, you can read it
The description of etiquette and the protagonist's clothes in the early stage was almost half taken up. On the contrary, Kaguya's most famous appearance was not mentioned much, which felt very strange. I had never seen how it was written. Is it AI?
I think the audience would like to see Neet-hime more than Kaguya-hime.
The plot is okay, but the style may not be acceptable to average Tomato readers. One breath, five breaths, etc., Once is okay, but after watching too much, it always feels like a bit of a drama. (The following is my personal opinion, with spoilers The dialogue between the protagonist, the blacksmith, and the god feels so strange. It is clearly said at the beginning that it is not forced and does not go into the protagonist's ability, but what is said later is completely different from the previous one, especially the blacksmith himself reasoning about the protagonist's ability in front of the protagonist. God's words at the back also have a sense of command, which may be due to personal understanding or ambiguity, but I feel that these two people do one thing in front and another in the back, which is a bit hypocritical. Maybe the author's wording is too direct.
Not suitable for tomatoes, should go to hedgehog cats
Come on, come on, come on [laughing][laughing][laughing]
I feel that the smell of AI is so strong, I start to get irritated when I read it, and I find that whenever I read an AI article, I get very irritated. Does anyone know why? I don't quite understand this feeling
Brother, your catchy chapter title is very important.