(No AI, the author has more experience, Harmono, gbc, lonely rock, Ming Ke, Hori and Miyamura)
Shinnosuke has now grown into a high school student. Although his grades are not good, the talents he has shown in other aspects since he was a child have allowed him to be admitted to Sobu High School. Whether it is the so-called musical talent or kendo talent, this freshman will attract the attention of many people when he enters school.
Yukinoshita-san, who always uses venomous words to protect himself, is obviously a very gentle person. Goto-san, who keeps his head down every day and dare not look at me, is obviously very good at guitar. Why is this 7-year-old kid named Conan so stinky? He is not at all as low-key and calm as I was when I was in kindergarten.
In such daily life, Shinnosuke, as the new student who was the center of attention after entering school, started out being careless, childish, and flirtatious, but they all saw the gentleness and strength in this bastard's heart.
Reader comments
After catching up to Chapter 19, there is currently a very fatal flaw. Xiaoxin is not cheap enough, and this will cause the connection between him and others to become weaker from the reader's point of view. If Xiaoxin is cheap, the supporting characters will react, giving the audience a memory point, but without this, the character's appearance will not be so strong. , And if Xiaoxin's non-cheeky and funny elements are not so sufficient, combined with the shortcomings of the character's appearance above, the plot will be empty and completely pushed, and the character will not show his memory points, and if it is not funny, it will be obvious. It has to be boring, without the flavor of Xiaoxin, making Xiaoxin more nonsensical and unexpected. For example, in the plot, there is a little boy who was accidentally left behind by his sister. At this time, the little boy should be very vigilant, asking whether you are bad people or something? Then Xiaoxin said with a wicked smile that we are going to sell you. At this time, you can describe the reaction of the little boy and the reactions of other people in the plot, and show the appearance of the supporting characters. In order to make the plot more substantial, Xiaoxin should be temporarily unrecognizable. At this time, you can contact the original work, for example, the left-behind child in the original work who often makes Xiaoxin cheat. The girl from the Children's Help Center can go there at this time and ask Xiaoxin to describe what she did back then in a similar way. For example, she can even lead the little boy bad and ask him to imitate what Xiaoxin did back then. Then he will go through various difficulties and various reasons so that the little boy can't find his parents. Describe the people at the help center in a more miserable way. , As for the next plot, Xiaoxin recognizes it, and then suddenly realizes it. At this time, you can write the reactions of the supporting characters. For example, the people at the help center slumped on the ground and worked for a long time and were abandoned by everyone. The two people next to Xiaoxin apologized, and Xiaoxin turned around and left. After experiencing this incident, the supporting characters also understand Xiaoxin, and the audience also knows other people. I also know the reaction of the supporting characters when encountering things. You can read it while writing, and look at the new period of a small round potato and a big round potato, because you are writing about the childhood after growing up. The early one was too magical, but you can take the funny plot. Anyway, I hope you can write it well. For those of you who love to generate electricity.
After catching up to Chapter 19, there is currently a very fatal flaw. Xiaoxin is not cheap enough, and this will cause the connection between him and others to become weaker from the reader's point of view. If Xiaoxin is cheap, the supporting characters will react, giving the audience a memory point, but without this, the character's appearance will not be so strong. , And if Xiaoxin's non-cheeky and funny elements are not so sufficient, combined with the shortcomings of the character's appearance above, the plot will be empty and completely pushed, and the character will not show his memory points, and if it is not funny, it will be obvious. It has to be boring, without the flavor of Xiaoxin, making Xiaoxin more nonsensical and unexpected. For example, in the plot, there is a little boy who was accidentally left behind by his sister. At this time, the little boy should be very vigilant, asking whether you are bad people or something? Then Xiaoxin said with a wicked smile that we are going to sell you. At this time, you can describe the reaction of the little boy and the reactions of other people in the plot, and show the appearance of the supporting characters. In order to make the plot more substantial, Xiaoxin should be temporarily unrecognizable. At this time, you can contact the original work, for example, the left-behind child in the original work who often makes Xiaoxin cheat. The girl from the Children's Help Center can go there at this time and ask Xiaoxin to describe what she did back then in a similar way. For example, she can even lead the little boy bad and ask him to imitate what Xiaoxin did back then. Then he will go through various difficulties and various reasons so that the little boy can't find his parents. Describe the people at the help center in a more miserable way. , As for the next plot, Xiaoxin recognizes it, and then suddenly realizes it. At this time, you can write the reactions of the supporting characters. For example, the people at the help center slumped on the ground and worked for a long time and were abandoned by everyone. The two people next to Xiaoxin apologized, and Xiaoxin turned around and left. After experiencing this incident, the supporting characters also understand Xiaoxin, and the audience also knows other people. I also know the reaction of the supporting characters when encountering things. You can read it while writing, and look at the new period of a small round potato and a big round potato, because you are writing about the childhood after growing up. The early one was too magical, but you can take the funny plot. Anyway, I hope you can write it well. For those of you who love to generate electricity.
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