After Transmigrating to the Wilderness, I Picked Up an Ancient General

The writing is quite good, but some scenes are repeatedly described. I think it can be deleted a little bit.

In fact, the setting is quite attractive to me, and the story is quite clear, but is it a bit too much to repeat some sentences more than ten times? And some descriptions are actually not very necessary for the whole. Now that I see it, I feel that the emotional drama is still okay, it is gradual and smooth, and the emotional transition is very smooth because of the sufficient foreshadowing in the early plot. My feeling now is that it's okay, but the language aspect is relatively lacking.

It's really good to read, very warm, and my body feels warm after reading it. Personally, I like the plot of farming novels with only two protagonists. This book perfectly suits my preferences. The author's writing style is also very good. I highly recommend it.

I loved watching Robinson Crusoe when I was a child. At that time, I always felt that the survival skills and the feeling of building a home bit by bit were very amazing. To this day, reading this book reminds me of that feeling.

The plot setting is very novel, the two protagonists have very charming personalities, and the way they get along is also very interesting. A simple and cheerful high school student with a crispy skin is brave and strong in the face of danger, and a resolute and cold-faced general always has tenderness hidden inside when facing young people. In the desolate and dangerous wilderness, each other redeems each other and becomes each other's reliance.

Very good, I hope it won't be unfinished, please update, update, update! And if the tiger skin has not been sold, why did the tiger skin mattress come out again after the house was built in the back?

It's beautiful, the two of them are so sweet together 😳😳

It looks pretty good, maybe because it was just released, the traffic is not that good.

It's quite interesting, but now that I've seen it, I'm a little curious as to how the author will round it out in the end. Should I let this high school boy go home or what? I'm curious, curious, curious, curious, curious, curious, curious, curious, curious, curious.

Delicious😋, the author's writing is very good, the daily descriptions are very detailed, and the emotional descriptions are also very delicate.