A Tycoon Transmigrates into a Book, Becomes Everyone's Dream Man, and Spends Money Freely

I really like the novels written by the teacher. The long mouth is for talking. In the plot written by the teacher, the chapter where the two recognize each other could take hundreds of chapters in other novels [laughs], but here they recognized each other in less than 30 chapters. I felt so happy reading it, and the rebate is also It's very fast, there is no nonsense at all, and there are no little cannon fodders jumping around. It is very cool to have a small goal and directly achieve financial freedom in less than 15 chapters. You can rush to [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] [Already Planted] [Bookshelf Plus One] [Top Post] Courtesy submission: One box, two boxes, three boxes, four boxes, five boxes, six boxes, seven boxes, eight boxes, nine boxes, ten boxes Then, Fa faint, Fa confusion, Fa stiffness, Fa paralysis, Fa numbness, Fa pain, Fa soreness, Fa swelling, Fa stuffiness, Fa blockage, Fa fatigue, Fa fatigue, Fa sleepiness, Fa fatigue, Fa irritability, Fa annoyance, Fa panic, Fa palpitation, Fa timidity, Fa fear, Dharma fear, Dharma sorrow, Dharma sadness, Dharma sorrow, Dharma worry, Dharma anger, Dharma annoyance, Dharma hate, Dharma resentment, Dharma regret, Dharma shame, Dharma shame, Dharma astringency, Dharma stagnation, Dharma sinking, Dharma heavy, Dharma empty, Dharma weak, Dharma decline, Dharma 4😋😋😋

The plot is good but a bit bland. If you read it for a long time, it will feel a bit boring. If you like the long flow, you can read it. However, I feel that this book has a lot of detailed descriptions. The descriptions of food, questions, etc. Are very detailed... After reading it for a long time, it will feel very realistic. I doubt that the author has personal experience (.) I personally feel that the ratio is a bit 50% plot and 50% description. There are really too many descriptions. I always feel like I have been writing about how this dish is like, how that thing is like, and even the specifics of some exam questions. It is all possible, but it feels that it is unnecessary to put it in a novel. It is a bit laborious and invalid.

It's so beautiful that it makes men menstruate and women go crazy just looking at it. It is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. She was so beautiful that the five-guarantee household in the village missed and loved the widow. She was so handsome that tears flowed from the corners of her mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. It was God who was my rose and illuminated the dark life. I ran and jumped on the balcony of the 20th floor to dance the tango. I realized that God does exist. I was so beautiful that tears flowed from my eyes. From then on, the world no longer lacked water.

Nice! I really like the character of the protagonist. He is very calm in everything he encounters. It was so exciting to see him filling the game and drawing cards at first, and I really wanted to enjoy it all at once. Zhu Zhu also hopes to get a physical skin in the future, such as turning into a kitten or a little fox. Han Dundun is also very cute, what a contrast

The early stage is progressing very quickly, there are no strange misunderstandings, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. However, the main plot is not clear at the moment. Those who like plots should be cautious. The author's writing is very detailed. There are many descriptions of the food the protagonist eats, the movies he watches, and the games he plays. It has a sense of life, but it can easily become boring if it is too much. I hope the author can control the length. Overall, it's okay. This star is mainly due to the plot arrangement. I hope the author can pay attention to it. What I mean is that there doesn't need to be too much description about dishes and the like.

The emotional scenes between the male protagonists are very interesting. Looking at the previous photos, I thought the emotional line would be very slow and need to be stretched. I didn't expect that I would be able to identify myself in just a few photos [Adoration] Extremely ambiguous. I love watching and tied it in one night [shy][shy]

It's good-looking, and it brings together all my favorite points. The author's writing is online, and it's not uncomfortable to watch or cliche. Anyway, I like it, and it successfully solved the problem of not being able to watch Shenhao and the two male protagonists at the same time. Moreover, the author is very considerate and will explain the property at the end of the chapter, which is quite rigorous. Overall, it looks very comfortable, very comfortable, really comfortable (say the important things three times). I also like the characters. Friends who are book lovers should not miss it. If you are tired of watching foreign persimmons and two male protagonists, you can also give it a try. It is quite interesting. I recommend [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]

It's so sweet. I really like the character of the protagonist. The author's writing style is very good. The two protagonists also indulge each other, care about each other, and subconsciously protect each other. I follow the author and write every day. The author will update it soon! [Sending Hearts][Add One to Bookshelf] The author is very careful and will write down the balance and remaining points at the end. I highly recommend it^

I haven't finished reading it yet, so let me tell you my feelings now. The shortcomings and advantages of this book are quite obvious. The shortcomings of the novel 1. The early chapters are relatively bland and nothing eye-catching. 2. Some plots have an obvious sense of assembly line. 3. If I describe too many details that I think are unnecessary, it will look boring, such as food. Advantages: 1. It's a cool article, there's no limit on spending money, the system is completely on the protagonist's side, and everything serves the protagonist. 2. Regarding the development of a male god, the protagonist needs to practice hard bit by bit, rather than obtain it all at once. This is very good Finally, I have some doubts. How high does the protagonist's 80+ appearance look in that worldview? Why is it that everyone is stunned when they see the protagonist and are surprised by his appearance. The people in that college are either rich or noble. I think it's impossible that they haven't seen handsome guys often. It turns out that many people look like they haven't seen handsome guys before🤔

It's so cute🥺Men see menstruation🥺Women see nerves💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😲So handsome😘God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I jump on the balcony on the 20th floor Tango 😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😊 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 🥺 is so cute that tears flow from the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. 🥺 I run and jump violently [fear]