[Heavy on daily life] + [Light on main line] + [Free me]
The words automatically written in Patchouli's magic book.
I update as I see fit, please forgive me for any shortcomings.
This work is the second creation of Dongfang Project. I only have a superficial understanding of the East, and the story aims at that sense of warmth. (The author has something to say, so don't forget to read it if you have something.) (Damn, the title of the work cannot be changed)
Reader comments
The story is very bland, but it does have the unique leisurely flavor of Gensokyo, which is also a style that I like very much. The fragmented stories are connected together and have a unique flavor.
The reason why it is four stars is that the plot suspects that the protagonist knew some characters such as Kaguya before she lost her memory (and may have a crush on the protagonist before she lost her memory). However, the character develops a crush on the current protagonist without knowing whether the protagonist before and after the amnesia is the same person. This is undeniably a poisonous point for some people like me, so can the author give an accurate estimate [shy]
Wow, I can still rate myself, well, let's give it 5 stars first.
Then, um~ the work is not good enough at least in the early stage, and everyone will probably read it as AI, sorry [currently in progress]
Then there is the revision of the early chapters. I have revised it once before, and I am tired. I probably don't want to go back and revise it again. Then I need to make the subsequent chapters more and more interesting.
Poor writing does not mean that I can't write good stories, but I really don't have much time. I'm still a struggling college student. It's hard to spend more than two or three hours a day on novels, and my energy is limited.
But I will work hard to become stronger, at least to make the story more and more interesting.
In short, try your best to get better slowly, thank you all for your company.
I quite like watching it. Ordinary little daily life.
I like ordinary daily life very much
Very good, haven't seen anything like this for a long time
Some parts have a strong AI flavor, especially the dialogue of the characters. At present, it seems that there is nothing poisonous except that the AI flavor is too strong.
The story is very bland, but it does have the unique leisurely flavor of Gensokyo, which is also a style that I like very much. The fragmented stories are connected together and have a unique flavor. The reason why it is four stars is that the plot suspects that the protagonist knew some characters such as Kaguya before she lost her memory (and may have a crush on the protagonist before she lost her memory). However, the character develops a crush on the current protagonist without knowing whether the protagonist before and after the amnesia is the same person. This is undeniably a poisonous point for some people like me, so can the author give an accurate estimate [shy]
Wow, I can still rate myself, well, let's give it 5 stars first. Then, um~ the work is not good enough at least in the early stage, and everyone will probably read it as AI, sorry [currently in progress] Then there is the revision of the early chapters. I have revised it once before, and I am tired. I probably don't want to go back and revise it again. Then I need to make the subsequent chapters more and more interesting. Poor writing does not mean that I can't write good stories, but I really don't have much time. I'm still a struggling college student. It's hard to spend more than two or three hours a day on novels, and my energy is limited. But I will work hard to become stronger, at least to make the story more and more interesting. In short, try your best to get better slowly, thank you all for your company.
I quite like watching it. Ordinary little daily life.
I like ordinary daily life very much
Very good, haven't seen anything like this for a long time
Some parts have a strong AI flavor, especially the dialogue of the characters. At present, it seems that there is nothing poisonous except that the AI flavor is too strong.