RE: Vitrum Life from Scratch

Absolute hybrid, and the values ​​derived from it will teach you to love——

Although balancing does make some people uncomfortable. But the characterizations are quite good and very consistent with the original setting. From my personal point of view, there is no problem in balancing it, as long as it is not too deliberate. But there is one thing to say, freezing to death is really outrageous, and I feel like the author is trying to refine and crystallize it here.

Absolute numerical value, extreme combat power, a born strong man, Natsuki Subaru will teach you what you love ()

Not bad, not bad. 486'S character follows the main plot quite well. I hope the character design won't collapse in the later stages. I'm definitely excited to see the numerical monster 486 push through a different world. [Laughing evilly] The author is not good at writing. In the original work, King Subaru chose to be such a clown because of low self-esteem. The Subaru here has super strength, but he is still as clown as in the original work. In the original work, Subaru was insulted because he had no more moves. When the original Subaru came, the first thing he did was to show off his power and make everyone shut up and then run away.

The author's works are indeed not shit [laughing awkwardly], but rice, a staple food [crying] I have to say, even if it is placed in the recent re0, it is an extremely high limit. It feels like there are more than twice as many such fan fictions recently. It feels like it suddenly broke out for some reason. After the one about Tower of Sage, there are a lot more. Returning to the evaluation of this book, its main feature is Subaru's strength, and it is very patched here. In fact, a better point of view is to regard it as an enhanced version of Subaru entering the original plot. In this case, it is mixed with the other characters of Invincible Young Heroes. The plot, I dare not say anything else, it is difficult to say directly, not yet, okay, look The father who was born from the point of view of the Invincible Young Master should be different in the memories of the Sanctuary Chapter. I suggested that Subaru's parents come over. Even though this is regrettable, it can be strengthened. Kenichi Natsuki's guidance can also be regarded as an alternation, allowing Subaru to become a re0 all-around hero! I wrote this mainly because I think it is feasible, and I hope the author can take a look at it.

The writing is pretty good so far, I hope I can maintain the update speed and quality [crazy] It's so frustrating, shouldn't it be a little more satisfying to write fan fiction? It's really frustrating to have so much power and nothing to use it for. The core joy of this novel is probably the fighting process, but there's not much written about the fighting process. Can't the King's Selection Meeting just beat them all to death in one go? Anyway, there is death and return to the bottom, and it can also come full circle. Besides, there is no need to write such a long article about the possession of sloth. It would be better to omit some and just fast forward to the next reincarnation.

I guess it's better to remind you that it's actually normal to have this kind of expressiveness after just awakening. The newly awakened Vitrum people are not that outrageous. They mainly rely on the rotation of smart atoms in their bodies to increase their combat power! The specific function is probably to record the peak of physical combat. The reason why Mark in the original work became stronger so quickly is because he survived several life-and-death battles! And he is an opponent who is far stronger than himself. He survived, so his combat power increased quickly. To be honest, I don't think 486's character is very strong when it comes to Vitrum. Intelligent Genko requires you to have a strong fighting will, and is especially easily affected by your emotions! For reference, the Prince Regent should not have been beaten down by a group of people so quickly. It was simply because he was too stimulated and had no will to fight, which resulted in him becoming space junk.

Watched too much i TV. The characters are not bad, the plot is okay, and it's quite enjoyable to watch.

It almost made me depressed after watching it. The subject matter is still very good, and it still gives a strong golden finger, but I still don't understand why Ion TV is so depressing? The protagonist in my novel is given a strong golden finger and is still under constant pressure [covers face] It's good that I can finally eat good food in my lifetime.

There is no trace of AI, and the pretense is okay. Although the pace is a bit slow, it is still enjoyable. It is reasonable to be killed by an old man once (Invincible was almost killed by F Star Commander just a few days after awakening). The plot is not too overwhelming. As long as he does not act like a monster in the future, he is a potential stock. IPleiades TV, you rise up

Okay, I feel like it's pretty well written. Possessed by laziness, incompetent and furious, it feels so frustrating to watch. The author can obviously add smart atoms to restrain the body-wrestling setting. Isn't it just to read this book to see Vitrum's numerical value? It is said to be about Sword Master vs. Vitrum, and it's done after just one chapter. Is the battle scene well depicted? Does it look cool? Do you like the perfect integration of my Juggernaut mechanics and numerical values? What's there to write about in a battle like pulling out a dragon sword and killing him instantly with one strike?

It's super pretty, but the combat power is too low, but it's still pretty.

It's pretty good. The first few chapters were a bit confusing, but the writing gets better and better later on. As a digression, everyone is welcome to watch "Propelled by Love to 500 Years", which has seen through the autumn water. There is no other highest mountain in Shaoxia District. The technical ability is super high and even gives people a kind of shock.

It looks very good so far. By the way, I will record the current death of the protagonist. First Time: After the Sausage Hunter Emilia died due to a sneak attack by the opponent, and the legendary civil war king Parker came online. The protagonist lost his will to fight and the smart atom stopped and died. Supplement, in the latest chapter so far, the protagonist has successfully demonstrated Vitrum's supermodel value. What do you mean that the last game can barely leave a mark? This week can't even leave a mark.

Many people in the comment section said this book was overpowering and gave it a low score. I personally feel that this book does not actually have a strong combat power, but even though Ang has Vitrum's combat power, there are still some ⅰ Ang plots in this book, which is very uncomfortable [facepalm]. Especially the chapters of Wang Xuan (chapters 56 to 64), I felt very aggrieved and uncomfortable when I read them. I really like the subject matter of this book. But I believe many people read this book because the protagonist doesn't eat beef. It's really easy to persuade people to write some outrageous plots. I sincerely hope that the author can adjust his style so that he can write mindless and cool articles. I'm giving a five-star review here because I don't want this book to go bad. I wish this book will be better [Like]

Wait a minute, what about the original world? This must not be dismantled by Vitrum Ang's father [Shocked]

The writing is good, And I have discovered three problems in the negative reviews: First: some of the negative reviews are written by people who have not read the original RE books and cannot understand Natsuki Subaru's psychology. Furthermore, this book is a fanfic about RE, not a fanfic about Invincible Young Heroes. Fans who only want to read about Invincible Young Heroes are not suitable for this book, and those who give two stars are definitely running for it. People from Vitrum and people from Yun RE think that the plot that the audience of RE can accept is a poisonous point, and to a certain extent, this book is not suitable as a stepping stone for strangers to understand RE and get into the trap. People who are running for RE can ignore the two-star reviews. Second: The author explained that the combat power was suppressed because he had taken full damage and was restrained, which directly froze the intelligent atoms. Regarding this, the author did not deny that he strengthened Parker. However, some people still complained about it. At this point, I was a little confused. The values of the Vitrumites were indeed high. In order to make the protagonist grow in the plot, the author inevitably strengthened the original character, because this is still complained about, and the main character The character has only been awakened for two days, and his strength is inevitably weaker. In the original film of Invincible, Marco was not seen in the original film. He was even pressed and beaten by the aliens in F. His expressiveness did not even reach the level of the violent street. The only point is that he threw a baseball around the earth, but he still couldn't beat the violent street in the fight. In this book, he has become a fighting force, and a group of brats are in trouble. Thirdly, in the original RE work, Subaru Natsuki's mind is still very immature when he first comes to another world, and the enemy mechanism in RE is too negative. The first time he fights, he will inevitably be attacked and the supporting character will die. Therefore, if he wants to grow up and have a HE ending, he cannot avoid death. If he wants to return, he must strengthen the original character. It is impossible to have a HE ending, and most of the audience for being labeled as RE fanfics are definitely people who watch RE. Not to mention those who have watched it completely, as long as they have watched the first two seasons, they will definitely want to change Subaru's life to be happy when he matures, instead of all his friends dying in the first level. I think my review has touched the hearts of those of you who give two stars, so I won't say much more about the rest. It's a difficult article to read. Some people like it very much, and some people don't like it very much. People who don't like it also like to say that people who like this book are trolls. There is no one else [face covering]. If you have the strength to hire a sailor, you won't write about this topic. And the author, Sang, is really hard to control. You should change the template. To be honest, even if you make up an alien, it will be easier to write than this one. At least you can patch it yourself, so you won't be forced to die for the sake of growth. Return, or you write the strengthened characters in the first chapter and mark the first chapter as character adjustment to prevent someone from not seeing it and thinking it is shit. The following are recommended characters to be strengthened: 1. Parker (strengthened ice damage directly to the ball-killing level) 2. Sausage Hunter (speed greatly enhanced, after all, Natsuki Subaru did not react, and the attack was slightly strengthened) 3. Sloth (strengthened soul strength and used Oona as the activation and accommodation condition. After all, it cannot be strengthened anymore. It is possible to elbow the smart particles and reduce the conditions for seizing the body.) 4 Lai Aotian (you don't need to add the mechanism, just stack the value, add a super sharp buff to the dragon sword similar to the sword of the gods) 5 White Whale (only strengthen the instant kill effect of the mist) 6 Anger (enhance the ability of empathy to prevent the supporting character from being killed at first sight, but the protagonist is still alive but not triggering the death return) 7 Gluttony (strengthens the physical strength to prevent being killed by Subaru Natsuki with a punch) Not dead) 8 The plot of self-mutilation with a knife went to a purely poisonous point, 9 Subaru Natsuki (the social barrier is strengthened, the inner sensitivity is strengthened, the values ​​are strengthened on the first and second days, and the white mark caused by the knife is too outrageous) 10 Desire (no need to increase the mechanism, strengthen the value to prevent it from breaking Subaru Natsuki's defense, not too much, just can break the skin) 11 It is recommended to add strength mainly to anime, because the performance of the anime Marco in the first month is not as good as Subaru Natsuki in this article. @ Sunshine cheerful great genius

Natsuki Kenichi: "Is the empire so short on manpower, or is Ang going to carry out the empire's mission? He is still so young and has not yet had his coming-of-age ceremony. Sissel built me a time travel machine. " A different world on the other side. The Jealous Witch said jealously: "Four hundred years later, what else do you have!" 486: "I still have you, Satila." It's too late to feel sad for this past plot, what comes next is the invincible war! ! !

Although we are currently talking about suppressing combat power, the current combat power system can still be reasonably explained. Let's take a look at it later.

Has the author ever thought about the fact that the original Invincible Boy has a machine that can travel through parallel universes? Will Subaru Natsuki return to Earth to participate in the plot of Invincible Boy, or simply have an invincible war in the world from zero? I want to see Subaru Natsuki fight with other if-line selves.

! ? Strong? ! The i TV that was born from this will teach you to love the invincible "boy"

Absolute numerical value, the numerical value derived from it, will teach you to become a king.

Personally, I think it's okay. There's a thunderstorm in the front. To be honest, if you want to come up and watch the explosive characters, you can basically leave. If you accept the thunder, there won't be any problems later (there are no big thunders at the moment). The last sentence, this is a tomato, give it four stars.

It's okay, just don't press too hard on your combat power, otherwise you'll be too angry. It's a bit frustrating that the author wasted this subject matter.

So far, so good. After all, in the original work, Mark is of royal blood, and his starting point must be higher than that of ordinary Vitrum people. You must know that there are strong and weak Vitrum people, and those who can survive the Apocalypse virus are definitely far better than other Vitrum people. This shows that Mark's royal blood does not have many advantages, but the protagonist is an ordinary Vitrum mixed blood, and his performance is already good now.

The combat power has been suppressed, but only a little. Within a reasonable range, the combat power growth rate is okay, but the update speed is too slow.

I think it's okay. I don't really care about suppressing combat power, nor do I suppress too much. I really want to see how Wushuang can kill a bunch of tomatoes and kill a bunch of tomatoes. It's also quite good to watch the new world line of a powerful Subaru.

To be honest, the writing is good, the writing is okay, the plot is a bit flawed, the combination of re0 and the Invincible Young Hero, but I personally feel that re0's daily scenes are written a bit too much, and the protagonist's combat power, which is another highlight, is rarely shown, which is the two plots of Warcraft and Sausage Hunter, and nothing else. You should appropriately increase the proportion of the protagonist's fighting scenes, and to be honest, it ends every time without being happy, and the plot arrangement is a bit unbalanced. I see that many people in the comment area came to watch the game because of Invincible Heroes, but with more than 50 chapters so far, there is no satisfactory fighting plot. It is okay for daily life, but there are too many. There is also the character of the protagonist. As a protagonist with the blood of Vitrum, he is definitely strong enough, but his character is a bit too lively like the original version. I prefer a calmer one, but it can be changed slowly. The protagonist of the latest plot of King's Capital is really a bit frustrated. First of all, he is really rude. Although he is a love rival, you should also take care of the heroine's face and proper etiquette. You can face the enemy with a better attitude, instead of shouting angrily like a child. The enemy is very elegant, but compared to the protagonist, he is a bit noisy. If you are writing a fanfic, you should not keep it the same. Ang's character should also be changed now that he has nearly invincible power (I didn't like the original character in the first place). The most important thing is to write about fan fiction, so be bold and let go of writing, don't always keep the same level of content.

Yes, it's pretty good to watch. For those who can't stand the pressure Subaru is being put under all the time, you can check it out. I'm going to take back some of my comments about the book.

It's beautiful, I'm definitely excited