#Football Competition #System #Genius Midfielder #Face-Slapping Satisfaction #Passionate Rise
With a single notice, Xu Yang became the “cautionary example” of Longguo football.
On the national youth team, he led the substitutes to thrash the starters, but because he refused to bow his head and call a well-connected teammate “big brother,” that player deliberately took him out with a vicious sliding tackle.
After Xu Yang fought back, all the blame was dumped on him: assaulting a teammate, refusing to follow orders, and a lifetime ban.
Everyone thought his dream of representing his country was over.
But the very next moment, the System awakened.
A god-tier, bird’s-eye view let him see every passing lane.
Ban me? Fine.
But from today on, the real world of football will learn my name all over again.
They all despise AI writing, but those who have used AI to write stories know that AI cannot write directly now, and you have to fine-tune it before you can read it. How can I say that the writing is still relatively smooth, which is better than some of the author's words that are unclear, but the characters are indeed relatively flat, mainly depending on the theme and plot. Compared with the old artist's purely handmade dishes, it is similar to the difference between pre-made dishes and the chef's private dishes. It lacks the flavor of the pot, but it is much better than the dishes made by the kitchen killer.
The novel is well written 🙂, but the main character is a midfielder, not a striker. There is no need to write about it. He is the one who saves the team every time [laughs awkwardly] (The author must have written it in a hilarious way [face covering]) It's not like the team doesn't have a striker [crying with laughter]
Come on, it's not bad. Don't write about the national football team. Once you see the national football team, you don't want to watch it. The national football team is a bad guy who can't help it.
Major bug: Transfer to Europe at the age of 16 (explicitly prohibited by FIFA); since entering the national youth training camp, it means that he has completed the naturalization process and belongs to the Chinese. The other is the inflationary effect of the percentage system value, but this should be contaminated by FIFA and live broadcasts. To be honest, I personally think that the values in football novels are more realistic based on FM, or it can be compared and converted into a percentage system. Apart from the above problems, this is one of the more interesting things about Tomato 🤭
After reading it, let me talk about my feelings. The protagonist is reasonably strong, with defensive awareness and overall awareness. He has grown in every game. He is not invincible at the beginning like others. The characters are also very vivid. They should have emotional lines and be acceptable. After all, the protagonist is a human being, not a god. Overall, it should be a rare and good book. I give it 5 stars.
The rest is pretty good, but there are too many off-site scenes.
Too watery, too watery, too inky, too watery. Word count
I finished reading the latest chapter in one go. It's a good football article and worth reading 👍
Very good, as long as I don't go back to China to play football, I can read this book!
They all despise AI writing, but those who have used AI to write stories know that AI cannot write directly now, and you have to fine-tune it before you can read it. How can I say that the writing is still relatively smooth, which is better than some of the author's words that are unclear, but the characters are indeed relatively flat, mainly depending on the theme and plot. Compared with the old artist's purely handmade dishes, it is similar to the difference between pre-made dishes and the chef's private dishes. It lacks the flavor of the pot, but it is much better than the dishes made by the kitchen killer.
The novel is well written 🙂, but the main character is a midfielder, not a striker. There is no need to write about it. He is the one who saves the team every time [laughs awkwardly] (The author must have written it in a hilarious way [face covering]) It's not like the team doesn't have a striker [crying with laughter]
Come on, it's not bad. Don't write about the national football team. Once you see the national football team, you don't want to watch it. The national football team is a bad guy who can't help it.
Major bug: Transfer to Europe at the age of 16 (explicitly prohibited by FIFA); since entering the national youth training camp, it means that he has completed the naturalization process and belongs to the Chinese. The other is the inflationary effect of the percentage system value, but this should be contaminated by FIFA and live broadcasts. To be honest, I personally think that the values in football novels are more realistic based on FM, or it can be compared and converted into a percentage system. Apart from the above problems, this is one of the more interesting things about Tomato 🤭
After reading it, let me talk about my feelings. The protagonist is reasonably strong, with defensive awareness and overall awareness. He has grown in every game. He is not invincible at the beginning like others. The characters are also very vivid. They should have emotional lines and be acceptable. After all, the protagonist is a human being, not a god. Overall, it should be a rare and good book. I give it 5 stars.
The rest is pretty good, but there are too many off-site scenes. Too watery, too watery, too inky, too watery. Word count
I finished reading the latest chapter in one go. It's a good football article and worth reading 👍
Very good, as long as I don't go back to China to play football, I can read this book!
Update quickly, come on update
Not bad. The benefits of super vision.