Please, Just Let Me Leave the Team!

It's okay, the emotions are well written and delicious, but almost everyone looks down on the protagonist, every one of them looks like a fool. His teammates are very strong and his status is very high. I won't talk about the protagonist being bullied before he protects the protagonist in person. After protecting the protagonist in person, he still behaves so intimately. A few days later, he still directly mocks the protagonist at the heroine's house and almost attacks him personally. He is also a character. If you change the protagonist, you will no longer eat beef. But if the protagonist's moral bottom line is not that high, he will rely on his teammates to take off. If he does not rely on his teammates, he will rely on the understanding of the game. If he changes to another place, he will become an uncle. And as for his teammates, if he doesn't save him, there will be no Niya master. The horns were turned upside down in the forest. No one really cares about the protagonist, right? 🤦🤦🤦, I was already crying 😢🤦😢🤦😢🤦😢🤦😢. Directly turn to the anger line, stop eating beef, burn the imperial capital, and become the king of purge. Directly switch to the lazy line and elope with Niya. Turn around the lust line and put them all into the harem. Anyway, let the imperial capital burn 😠

It is best for the author to write it in the introduction, otherwise the readers will not know and the audience will not click in.

Ditch the Brain: 5 stars Bring your brain: 4 stars Summary: good-looking, love to watch

Bai Hou is awesome, the emotional line is very comfortable to write, what I want to see is this mouthwatering, the heroine Succubus attracts all groups to like, she is a blockhead who doesn't understand emotions at first, and then she meets Niya and unlocks the emotional system, but it's too frustrating. I can't see why Long Aotian has been slandered and insulted by the whole world. His teammates love him so much, but he hasn't seen any maintenance. The NPC is written with the same mindless slander and trash talk as the ancient Dragon King. I am just frustrated that I am angry 😠😠

This Western fantasy style book has a very complete, grand and complete narrative of the world view (this is relatively rare among hundreds of genres of literature). The biggest highlight of this book is the emotional exchange between the heroine and other girls with different personalities. The creation of each character has its own characteristics and distinct personalities. The author has said that he wants to give each character Each character has a separate "date", but currently because there are a lot of characters written, and enough space is needed to write a "copy", it will be quite difficult to grasp the overall plot and narrative rhythm. The current narrative rhythm is not delayed due to too many elements, and there are no plot gaps. From the plot point of view, overall it is quite good. For each character with a distinctive personality, the author intentionally shapes them directly through the description of "date" instead of through various side descriptions. This is quite rare (after all, there are many characters, and it is difficult to write each person's "date" differently and in line with the personality). At present, all the "dates" are reasonable and consistent with the personality, and the character creation is also quite excellent. Finally, in terms of emotional description, for this book, emotions are very complex. It is not just about "love", but friendship, family affection, etc. The description of many emotions leads to the entanglement in the protagonist's heart. In addition, the protagonist's "special setting" without magic leads to the protagonist's intense inner conflicts. This is also an important point of this article. Therefore, the excellent description of complex emotions is also an important advantage of this book. All in all, this book is quite excellent, but it will be very difficult to write it well in the future. I really hope that the author can write it well.

It's beautiful, it's very beautiful, but I feel like there are not many people watching it () Many of the following statements are purely subjective. If you have opinions, you can express them, but just don't quarrel. 😘 Regarding the issue of the rumor plot, I also hope to read the plot later. In the early stage of this book, passers-by spread rumors about the main character (serious plot). Even in the early stage, you may feel a little aggrieved [Chigua] However, by about seventy or eighty pictures (this period is actually mainly about developing the relationship with the first heroine and the relationship between several people in the dormitory, it is not all that kind of plot), that is, in the middle and late stages, there is no such plot, and it will even become a kind of information gap later, which is a bit of fun for some people, so strictly speaking, I don't think it is a poisonous point, and you can still watch it with confidence 🍉 Regarding the so-called protagonist quitting the team, the biggest problem is that the teammates' sides are not clear. This will be patched later, and logically speaking, it is indeed reasonable. That is, the teammates respect the protagonist's choice, so even if they are reluctant to leave the team, they still have no intention of stopping it. I think it is okay [Chigua] In the middle and later stages, it should be called more fun, but it's not mindless fun. The protagonist is growing up. There are many places in the play that are supported by logic, and they even explain it to you in detail😨 The protagonist's personality is quite attractive. He is not someone who holds his breath all the time. He will fight back if he is said or hit by someone he dislikes. The handling of this part of the plot is also very good. Similar depressing or aggrieved plots will not last long. I personally like this. Generally speaking, this kind of plot does not have particularly long segments. If you really can't accept it, just skip it 🍉 I'm not a professional critic of novels. I don't really understand things like the three golden chapters, nor do I really want to understand them. It's very troublesome😨 So in my eyes, except for the slow production speed, it is already a very qualified novel. At least it will not make you feel too many negative emotions. The teammates' attitude and feelings towards the protagonist are very gentle. Just respecting the protagonist's thoughts is already very valuable in some novels 😘 (That kind of thing is really uncomfortable to watch, there is nothing I can do about it) There's nothing you can do about the slow output. After all, it's most likely because there are few people watching and there's no motivation. Anyway, come on 😘 ()

The emotional line is really well written, there is no strange pull, and both parties soon come to their senses. Although the protagonist was very frustrated in the early stage and her teammates ignored her, it should be because the teammates respect the protagonist's choice. The character is like this. I hope to see the protagonist being loved and pinched😋😋😋

A perfect book with the passion of "Don Quixote". From the perspective of me who read it for 4100 hours, this book is very good. The plot is not cliche. The emotions are delicate, and some unique theories are added, which proves that the author put his heart into writing the book. The characterization is very good and made my dm53 spin

🥺 So tired ('-ωก̀)… 🥺 So tired (◢д◣)... 🥺 So hungry˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚… [Awkward laugh][Hold face]😠 Hungry!! I lose strength when I'm hungry!!!—Come and try this!!—[Throw] [Shocked][Stunned][What] Wow!! Uh-huh. This is?..."Please, let me quit the team"?!!! 🥺🥺🥺[Grgrieved] However, I have tasted a lot of (text)... If I still insist on eating, I will get tired of it... [Lips curled] [lips curled] [lips curled] Oops!! It's different!! This, it, you, ugh!! - Just try it!! [Take it fiercely] * [Pinch it] * [Pinch it in] ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ [Shocked][Shocked]😫😫[Stupid][Stupid][Stupid] Hohohohohoho!!! ❤️ Good, so cool!! ❤️*(((Oops, the things on the clipboard seem to have been mixed in)) Cross out) )—[Bite]*[Bite]*[Chew]*[Pause]❤️—This, this is!!!❤️—It's delicious!!!❤️*[Swallow]❤️ This is not greasy at all! [Shocked] [Stupid] 😫 [Licking] [Licking] [Licking] ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🥰 🥰 🥰 This, too, is so delicious!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ [Shocked] [Shocked] [Shocked]—OoOoOu!! Roar ho ho ho!!! ❤️ ❤️ [Love Heart] So appetizing?! 🤤 🤤 🤤 - What a joke!! [Shocked] [Shocked] [Shocked] - Gu Gu Gu Gah!? 😫 😫 😫 -!!! - More!! More!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Ha, ha, teacher, teacher, uh, I still want,,, more!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

If it weren't for these four teammates, could they get on the emotional line quickly? Then, they should sort out their relationship, and disappear in the forest for more than a week without anyone caring about them. This means that Niya has a higher moral standard. Otherwise, by the time these four people find out, the protagonist will probably be pregnant with the second child.