The Witch's Everyday Life in a New World

As of 94, it's okay. How should I put it? It's a bit "smooth". I don't mean that the content is watery, but the writing is emotionless. Love, hate, and hatred are not deep enough. It doesn't mean that it is going to be bitter and deep. I don't know how to describe the feeling, but there is no tension? The characterization and plot are average, but the book is readable. Although the writing needs improvement, it's okay if you can read it. The protagonist becomes stronger very quickly, and even the reasons for the speed of becoming stronger are somewhat inexplicable, but these can be ignored. Looking at it later, at least it is fun and not aggrieved. The protagonist is as stated in the introduction, a chaotic and neutral fun-loving person who avenges his enemies on the spot. The advantage is that it's not like ordinary cool novels where you are first punished by a bunch of idiot villains and then slapped in the face in a cycle. It is said to be pleasurable, but in fact it is to make you feel disgusted first and then slap you in the face. After the revenge, I cannot say that the idiots are completely gone, but basically they are solved in a few words. It is not disgusting and has less poisonous points. At least it doesn't have any poisonous points for me. The protagonist is just stuck at an acceptable point, neither good nor bad, doesn't jump in her face and won't kill innocent people indiscriminately, just an indifferent bystander. Personally, I don't like watching pure evil, so the protagonist's character design is acceptable. If you're reading a cool novel, this type of protagonist is more suitable. However, I still hope that the protagonist can easily save him from disasters that will affect innocent people on a large scale without affecting himself.

The setting of this story is quite interesting. It's just that the plot connection feels too rushed. It feels like the heroine has a Conan physique, and accidents happen wherever she goes. But because the heroine is so strong, these accidents are like fun to watch. Personally, I think it is a purely mindless and cool article, and it seems very smooth. The only thing I'm not very satisfied with is that many sentences in the early stage have the word (了) in them. There is even one word in every paragraph on one page, which makes me a little surprised. Secondly, the villains in it are too one-sided. They are all brainless villains who don't care about you and just slap them in the face and then get slapped by the heroine. I feel that the female characters in it are very one-sided, except for the heroine, only one or two have memorable points. Most of the strong people are men, even if there is a woman, her boss must be a man. And there's nothing to say about the wording, just the male channel's habits. The only thing worthy of praise is that the author omitted the swear words with an asterisk, which is great. Although I have said so much, I really like the setting of this article. Sisters, if you just want to read the heroine's invincible and exciting novel, you can skip the first chapter. If you are looking forward to other flowers blooming, I don't recommend it, because the heroine is essentially chaotic and neutral, and she may take the initiative to cause chaos when she is interested. It feels like the heroine exists only as a theatergoer. She is not injured, but the people in a city cannot be said to be together. They may be wiped out at some point.

The attributes of a neutral villain are very appealing to me. The heroine does not have to worry about the destruction of the world, nor is she a saint. She only has to have fun. Her strength will increase on her own, and she has a strong backer. Personal pronoun is a relatively rare third-person introduction method. At least I can't find the second one in Tomato. Although this book does not have a very exciting performance, it is still very good among a bunch of strange books in Qiao Persimmon. It's just that the author needs to change the way of expression. Don't go over the details in one stroke, and reduce the colloquialism. Such an expression will be confusing and easy for readers to understand, and the opportunities for wonderful expressions will be reduced a lot. Finally, I wish you the better as you write (￣▽￣)σ

It is very novel and gives me the impression that it is written in the third person like a vernacular novel, but it is still very comfortable to read. You can imagine what the scene was like at that time and what the cyber world was like. The most rare thing is that after the heroine suffered a crime and gained unparalleled power, she was quite friendly to ordinary people and just went to work as long as she did her own thing.

A great novel. I like the attitude of the protagonist to do whatever he wants. There are still too few protagonists who have no sense of morality🥰

It's tied at 158 ​​chapters now. After reading it, I felt that this is actually a travel novel. If the rest of it doesn't change much, it will probably be all about travel. It's pretty good (I quite like the setting of the world sighing in the game Invasion. If the author has an idea, he can write a similar one, and then add a protagonist to open a world house at the end of the world to record the situation of each world after the journey. That would also be very good). The content in the brackets above is purely my own idea [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

So cool! I like that the heroine has the ability to do whatever she wants, and she also has a true attitude of doing whatever she wants. Compared with many novels that are clearly invincible, but still only use their mouths and argue with others when they are in trouble, and can scold anyone, and there is no feeling of a real strong person. It is much better.

The setting of the beautiful world is very large, and there is not much written about the earth. It sets out for the stars and the sea. Many settings are also in line with the public settings. For example, the knowledge in the wizarding world is precious and cannot be taught easily. There is a price to pay. Apprentices are consumables. Dwarves like alcohol and don't care about their own business. The explosion of the earth has nothing to do with me.

The heroine's character is chaotic and neutral. There are too few heroines with a character like Tomato. It's not easy to see one like this. It's really not easy🤦🤦🤦The heroine's strong and arbitrary mentality looks so cool, it's so cool🥰🥰I really like this kind of attitude towards life in games, but it's a pity. Most of the female protagonists in Tomato Girls like to help people and the country. It is rare to see such a lone wolf type of fun-loving person. The female protagonist has a strong background and will succumb to others if she can't beat them. This mentality is really cool🤭🤭🤭 (If anyone has an article about a female protagonist with the kind of personality I mentioned above, please let me know😳😳😳)

It's beautiful, refreshing, and not frustrating. The protagonist has strong combat power, is not a virgin, and the world view is also very innovative. It is an eye-catching book.