Daily Life of a Witch in the New World

As of 94, it's okay. How should I put it? It's a bit "smooth". I don't mean that the content is watery, but the writing is emotionless. Love, hate, and hatred are not deep enough. It doesn't mean that it is going to be bitter and deep. I don't know how to describe the feeling, but there is no tension? The characterization and plot are average, but the book is readable. Although the writing needs improvement, it's okay if you can read it. The protagonist becomes stronger very quickly, and even the reasons for the speed of becoming stronger are somewhat inexplicable, but these can be ignored. Looking at it later, at least it is fun and not aggrieved. The protagonist is as stated in the introduction, a chaotic and neutral fun-loving person who avenges his enemies on the spot. The advantage is that it's not like ordinary cool novels where you are first punished by a bunch of idiot villains and then slapped in the face in a cycle. It is said to be pleasurable, but in fact it is to make you feel disgusted first and then slap you in the face. After the revenge, I cannot say that the idiots are completely gone, but basically they are solved in a few words. It is not disgusting and has less poisonous points. At least it doesn't have any poisonous points for me. The protagonist is just stuck at an acceptable point, neither good nor bad, doesn't jump in her face and won't kill innocent people indiscriminately, just an indifferent bystander. Personally, I don't like watching pure evil, so the protagonist's character design is acceptable. If you're reading a cool novel, this type of protagonist is more suitable. However, I still hope that the protagonist can easily save him from disasters that will affect innocent people on a large scale without affecting himself.

The attributes of a neutral villain are very appealing to me. The heroine does not have to worry about the destruction of the world, nor is she a saint. She only has to have fun. Her strength will increase on her own, and she has a strong backer. Personal pronoun is a relatively rare third-person introduction method. At least I can't find the second one in Tomato. Although this book does not have a very exciting performance, it is still very good among a bunch of strange books in Qiao Persimmon. It's just that the author needs to change the way of expression. Don't go over the details in one stroke, and reduce the colloquialism. Such an expression will be confusing and easy for readers to understand, and the opportunities for wonderful expressions will be reduced a lot. Finally, I wish you the better as you write (￣▽￣)σ

It is very novel and gives me the impression that it is written in the third person like a vernacular novel, but it is still very comfortable to read. You can imagine what the scene was like at that time and what the cyber world was like. The most rare thing is that after the heroine suffered a crime and gained unparalleled power, she was quite friendly to ordinary people and just went to work as long as she did her own thing.

It's tied at 158 ​​chapters now. After reading it, I felt that this is actually a travel novel. If the rest of it doesn't change much, it will probably be all about travel. It's pretty good (I quite like the setting of the world sighing in the game Invasion. If the author has an idea, he can write a similar one, and then add a protagonist to open a world house at the end of the world to record the situation of each world after the journey. That would also be very good). The content in the brackets above is purely my own idea [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

A great novel. I like the attitude of the protagonist to do whatever he wants. There are still too few protagonists who have no sense of morality🥰

The setting of this story is quite interesting. It's just that the plot connection feels too rushed. It feels like the heroine has a Conan physique, and accidents happen wherever she goes. But because the heroine is so strong, these accidents are like fun to watch. Personally, I think it is a purely mindless and cool article, and it seems very smooth. The only thing I'm not very satisfied with is that many sentences in the early stage have the word (了) in them. There is even one word in every paragraph on one page, which makes me a little surprised. Secondly, the villains in it are too one-sided. They are all brainless villains who don't care about you and just slap them in the face and then get slapped by the heroine. I feel that the female characters in it are very one-sided, except for the heroine, only one or two have memorable points. Most of the strong people are men, even if there is a woman, her boss must be a man. And there's nothing to say about the wording, just the male channel's habits. The only thing worthy of praise is that the author omitted the swear words with an asterisk, which is great. Although I have said so much, I really like the setting of this article. Sisters, if you just want to read the heroine's invincible and exciting novel, you can skip the first chapter. If you are looking forward to other flowers blooming, I don't recommend it, because the heroine is essentially chaotic and neutral, and she may take the initiative to cause chaos when she is interested. It feels like the heroine exists only as a theatergoer. She is not injured, but the people in a city cannot be said to be together. They may be wiped out at some point.

So cool! I like that the heroine has the ability to do whatever she wants, and she also has a true attitude of doing whatever she wants. Compared with many novels that are clearly invincible, but still only use their mouths and argue with others when they are in trouble, and can scold anyone, and there is no feeling of a real strong person. It is much better.

I think the biggest reason why there are so few people is that the period of invincibility is only about 20 chapters later, and the invincibility is very sudden.

After reading it, I realized it was this author But this one is pretty good, it didn't charm the male characters. Very nice, I hope it will be updated continuously (Strong female without cp invincible flow)

It's beautiful, refreshing, and not frustrating. The protagonist has strong combat power, is not a virgin, and the world view is also very innovative. It is an eye-catching book.

Big cheers for the author! Update soon!

No, dude, I was still wondering if it was because of my strength that I was exempted from the ticket, but it turned out to be because of my height? [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Of course, the heroine is not a very happy person. In my opinion, Lezi people are the type who are afraid of chaos in the world. But the heroine just takes revenge honestly. Usually only those who offend her and a few people who stand in the way die, such as the mother of the illegitimate daughter. The heroine killed her because she needed the identity of an illegitimate daughter. There seems to be no other plots where she suddenly kills (innocent) people. The heroine is not a soft-hearted person. She is the type to take revenge and complain.

The heroine had such a miserable start that she almost didn't scare her away, but since she gained the ability, she has become very comfortable and enjoys life as she pleases. Moreover, she is a loli ass heroine and is super cute.

It's nice to read. I haven't read this type of article for a long time. The heroine is a fun-loving person. She is very interesting and she does whatever she wants. I hope the author will update it soon. It's so good to watch, especially the scene with Yu Wenjun, it really made me happy. He dared to provoke the superior to seek death without doing anything.

I like it so much, I just like that the heroine can do whatever she wants, she is so powerful and invincible [laughing][laughing] Please update it soon.

It's a purely enjoyable story. The suffering at the beginning is the reason why the protagonist becomes neutral and evil later on. He becomes invincible all the way, but surprisingly it's not boring. The creation of the monster characters is quite interesting. The author's map environment changes at a very good pace and the descriptions are vivid. You won't stay in one place for a long time. It has the feeling of a detailed traveling frog. When you go out to play and have fun, you go home to rest. Because the protagonist is very strong, others can't stand her and hate her. They have to smile and hide the protagonist. Therefore, the protagonist's daily life has a sense of stability and comfort, not too nervous, but it can also cause a little fresh excitement when facing some unfamiliar maps and characters that have not yet found corresponding reference objects and combat capabilities.

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Not bad, please keep writing, teacher.

Very capable of weirdness and superpowers [sending hearts]

The little witch is beautiful and beautiful The daily flow, although it is already very invincible, is not boring at all because the author writes about life. The little witch is a fun-loving person who likes shiny gems and beautiful clothes.

Very nice, very comfortable, no ink stains

Don't say it, you really don't say it, it's quite interesting

It's super good-looking, but I didn't expect there to be so few. The author will update it soon.

It's very interesting and humanistic, with no gibberish, messy plots and traps, and exaggerated Conan's physique. . In the first chapter, the protagonist is miserable, but then he takes off!

Don't pay attention to the details, it's just a neat article. Not long after the start, the combat power reached its peak, but it was surprisingly watchable.

It's cool, the heroine has strong abilities, she can do whatever she wants, she does it as she pleases, she looks good

It's beautiful, the heroine is cool, there are many more authors! ! !

Very pretty, meow! So far, I'm having a hard time watching it! I couldn't help but hum, meow!

It looks very nice, but can I add some punctuation?