HP: After Being Heard by the Savior

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! Nice writing! Like! Who knows, when I saw "Harry is based on the original Harry and does not recognize the film version", it only took 0 seconds to fall in love with it. I really liked the original Harry, so I immediately added it to the bookshelf and started reading it. I have seen the latest parts and found no surprises. It is very interesting! ! The description is very delicate and logical, and the plot is also very reasonable. The characters are very consistent with the original work and will not make people feel OOC. Fans of the original work are very satisfied! ! I'm very satisfied with it. It's sweet and peaceful. I like it very much. Harry should be happy. Mabel's image is very three-dimensional (the character setting is quite novel). She has her own way of doing things and feels very real. The interactions with Daphne and others are very heartwarming. They are also very good people. I guarantee you are angels, so it is not a loss to invest! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

I like it very much. The heroine is an atypical Slytherin. I feel that there are very few HP stories where the tomato hero is Harry. This one is simply delicious. It is such a generous secret love. The heroine Mabel has a relatively low sense of presence due to her physical condition, and everyone always forgets about her, but Harry will always remember hehe, and he will always peek (openly) at Mei. And I feel that Harry understands that his feelings are quite fast, even though the heroine hasn't realized it yet... But it's sweet and sweet, hey, I love watching it, please update it soon. The author is big [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The writing style of the author is really great, and the expressions are very clear. The twists and turns of the character's character are handled very well, as well as Harry's various little actions of subconsciously watching the little heroine, and the little habits he changed. They are all very, very good, but the writing is a bit too little. Can you update it faster? Goddess, please update it soon... Do you dare to update 100 chapters at once? I'll be shocked [crying]

It's a very cute story and very interesting. The female protagonist is very good. She is smart, hard-working, and talented. Moreover, among the fans, this one is closer to the original character. I can really understand and feel that Harry really has a heart of gold, and I can feel his charisma. Li, I have only read a few Harry Potter books and not finished them. I didn't see the CP of Harry Potter, so I feel that they are really matched with the heroine. The couple is very cute. Although they haven't officially written about being together yet, it is quite interesting to write about such a school atmosphere. It is very interesting.

This article is really, really delicious, shocking and delicious. Because it is based on the original work and not the original version, it makes it more interesting. The writing is very consistent with the psychology and logic of the characters. It feels like a lot of the plots are smooth and logical, and the connection is very natural, so it doesn't read strange or disconnected. The heroine is very cute, she is like a little angel. Although she has been hurt, she is healing on her own. She has her own ideas when talking and doing things. The values ​​​​are very upright, it looks very comfortable, and it is also very healing to the readers [sending hearts]. It is this kind of daily article that makes people feel warm after reading it. Come on, author, update, added to bookshelf [Blowing Kiss]

The writing is very good. Ever since she was seen by Harry, the heroine has been using what she knows to help Harry fight against the Dark Lord. In fact, I don't think there are many romances, most of them are the main plot. The plot of the heroine is a bit sparse, but I don't want the heroine to be involved too much, just giving some clues is enough. The friendship between the heroine and Daphne is written very naturally, which is good. I think it's understandable that Harry likes the heroine, it's quite natural. It's well known that Harry is a beauty control, not to mention that the heroine is really nice. What deserves praise is that 1v1 pure love, no messy feelings.

The new book only has more than 20 chapters, but it is quite interesting. The entry point is quite innovative. The narrative rhythm feels a little fast in the first few chapters. After reading more than ten chapters, it seems to be good again. The writing is very good. I haven't seen anything OOC so far. Please support it.

100,000 Words in serialization. Very good, very short, painfully short. What can I say? I feel that the evaluation of the characters in this novel is very original. The evaluation of James chasing Lily, Harry, and Draco. Among so many fanfics I have read, if I had to choose an evaluation that is most consistent with the original, I would choose the one in this one. The setting of the protagonist (referring to the transparent man) is also very suitable, very reasonable, and very operable. After only one year of operation (referring to the third grade), the future has changed. I don't know what it will be like in the fourth grade. It feels like it will be a new story, and I am very much looking forward to it.

It's good to read, it's only 36 chapters, but it progresses and rises very quickly Mabel is very cute. She has a tragic native family and a low sense of existence outside the world in her early days. Harry, Hermione, and Daphne are also very cute. They always remember the existence of the heroine, and their interactions are also very cute. It's very funny that Snape saw the heroine's gifted potion ability (cooking skills), but his own students can't deduct points for cultivating evil. It's very interesting.

All I can say is that this Harry Potter fanfic is awesome. I really like this kind of secret love between adolescents. The heroine's subtle Wooden attributes are also very delicious, and there is a sense of mutual redemption. Two cute little animals are like this. Please continue to redeem each other.

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. Why is it not finished when I brush it? , It's so delicious, the relationship between them is really beautifully described, and there's nothing that makes me feel offended, all the characters are awesome!

Oh my god! It's been a long time since I read HP fanfics, but this one is really good! ! ! I can't find words to praise it, I can only say it's delicate, so delicate! ! ! People who can accept this style will definitely like it A masterpiece of treasure!

It's a very good article with great potential~ I estimate that the book review will start at 9 points. The writing style is very mature, the plot is not blunt and embarrassing, and the characters are well written. There is no crash [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. The identity of the heroine is also a very novel angle, which is quite interesting.

In fact, I hate heartfelt stories, but Xiaoha is really a saint. This is the first time I see someone who hears my heartfelt voice take the initiative to tell the person being listened to. The heroine is also a very cute baby. The whole text is smooth and smooth.

The writing is very good, sometimes with a bit of the cold humor of the original work. The plot develops naturally and smoothly without being clichéd, the characters have no OOC, and the emotional development is naturally sweet. It's just that there are too few chapters at the moment. When I looked at the table of contents, there were only about 30 chapters and I almost wrote it off. But after reading two chapters, I felt it was so good that I immediately tied it [I almost cried]

So far, there are no problems with the logic of the story, the characters are solid, the writing is not new, and the greenness of first love is handled well. It's just that the plot of fighting monsters went by a little too fast. Overall worth a look.

(No surprises at the moment - excellent reviews, hope there will be no twists) Most of the characters are not OOC, and there is no embarrassing Mary Sue Jake Su plot that is common among HP fans. Mabel's character is well described, and the character description is rare without the fan's usual artificiality and excessive force. Even the mention of beauty is only briefly mentioned in the plot of recalling the previous life. The heroine's shining points can be shown only by her non-exaggerated daily behavior ദ്ദി (• ˕•マ.ᐟ

Very nice! I was almost dissuaded from reading the introduction. I thought Mabel (the protagonist) was an Oriental, and I said this was too unreasonable in Slytherin. However, it seems that the author has portrayed Mabel very well. There are no flaws [blowing kisses] and the timeline and emotional line are quite fast. So far, the impression is very good. Come on, author! (And every chapter is so fat. I'm satisfied with it.

Everyone went to read it to me. It's very nice. In my opinion, the characters have no OOC at all. The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. It's really beautiful. You have to believe the number and time of reading books on my homepage. Harry Potter fans, I really rarely give him such a high evaluation. If you don't like reading it, don't refute me. Everyone has their own preferences.

Harry is indeed a very, very, very good man with a dazzling soul of gold and noble character.

It's really very good-looking. It's the most beautiful among the HP fanfics I've read. It's not OOC and the writing is very good. Big boost for the author!

I think it's very interesting to read, the author's writing style is good, he has a great sense of humor, and his character design is quite appropriate!

I felt that the relationship scenes were too fast. Although the heroine helped Harry a few times, in fact, they didn't really get along for a long time. I felt that the temperature was rising too quickly.

It looks good, but not enough👀Hungry😋

Delicious [Sending Hearts] Great, keep up the good work! ! ! The young couple is also super sweet! !

It's quite good. I hope the article describes the relationship between the two more.

So far it looks good, I like it very much.

The first time I saw the male protagonist is Harry, the male crush is really sweet.

So sweet, so sweet, wait for the update to watch the young couple [blowing kisses]

It's good not to do homework ꒰(⌯˃̶̥̆д˂̶̥̥̥̆ ू)꒱