Moe Academy: Restarting My Life

The start is okay, but why does the title of the protagonist keep switching between the first and third person?

Originally, I also liked multiple female protagonists, but the author wrote Ukenana very well, and the relationship between them was also well described, as was the direct friendship with Eric and Mystery. Is this really the first time the author writes? It's better than many old authors. How about the next one with a single female protagonist, Ukenana?

Waste it for yourself 🙂

Isn't it just gone?

Try not to use the first person in non-dialogue paragraphs, otherwise it will give people a very disconnected feeling. The plot is pretty good.

It's okay, except for the front part where it's a bit uncomfortable to cut three parts into one part, but the rest is okay, it's pretty good-looking.

It's okay, just a little rough. But among the Tomato Moe Academy fandoms, they are among the few normal ones. Come on, author.

Assignment collection: Didina, Xiaofudie and the princess from the Pangu movie

Not bad, come on, author