[Multiple female protagonists, male protagonist, normal sexual orientation]
Zhang Tao was reborn in the world of Moe Academy... Ukenana was so cute as a child... Agnes was so beautiful as a teenager... Zhang Tao looked at the phone booth in front of him with mixed feelings in his heart, and couldn't help but sigh softly: "I'm back, Moe Academy!"
Reader comments
The start is okay, but why does the title of the protagonist keep switching between the first and third person?
Originally, I also liked multiple female protagonists, but the author wrote Ukenana very well, and the relationship between them was also well described, as was the direct friendship with Eric and Mystery.
Is this really the first time the author writes? It's better than many old authors. How about the next one with a single female protagonist, Ukenana?
Isn't it just gone?
Waste it for yourself [smile]
Not bad, come on, author
Try not to use the first person in non-dialogue paragraphs, otherwise it will give people a very disconnected feeling. The plot is pretty good.
It's okay, just a little rough. But among the Tomato Moe Academy fandoms, they are among the few normal ones. Come on, author.
It's okay, except for the front part where it's a bit uncomfortable to cut three parts into one part, but the rest is okay, it's pretty good-looking.
Assignment collection: Didina, Xiaofudie and the princess from the Pangu movie
The start is okay, but why does the title of the protagonist keep switching between the first and third person?
Originally, I also liked multiple female protagonists, but the author wrote Ukenana very well, and the relationship between them was also well described, as was the direct friendship with Eric and Mystery. Is this really the first time the author writes? It's better than many old authors. How about the next one with a single female protagonist, Ukenana?
Isn't it just gone?
Waste it for yourself [smile]
Not bad, come on, author
Try not to use the first person in non-dialogue paragraphs, otherwise it will give people a very disconnected feeling. The plot is pretty good.
It's okay, just a little rough. But among the Tomato Moe Academy fandoms, they are among the few normal ones. Come on, author.
It's okay, except for the front part where it's a bit uncomfortable to cut three parts into one part, but the rest is okay, it's pretty good-looking.
Assignment collection: Didina, Xiaofudie and the princess from the Pangu movie