[The main story and bonus chapters are complete] Original female protagonist. She doesn’t know the original plot, and no one will be cut from the cast. If you ask why, it’s because there’s no precedent for a nine-member women’s special forces team? Why can’t there be nine? The original series added a male doctor, after all.
Couples are getting split up, thoroughly split up.
Couples in this story:
Wen Tianqing X Haleigh
Ye Cunxin X Thunder
He Lu X Tianlang
Tan Xiaolin X Lin Guoliang
Tang Xiaoxiao X Da Niu (not sure if I’ll get around to writing this)
Shen Lanni might not have a CP. This queen shines on her own.
This is a crossover universe combining the special forces series, so there are plenty of butterfly effects. If something differs from the original, it’s either a butterfly effect or the author’s own addition.
I don’t want to write nonsensical plots for the female characters, so I’ve changed anything that didn’t make sense in the original.
The original was written by a male author, and inevitably carries a male gaze and stereotypes about women. So don’t accuse me of whitewashing anyone. These are just logical developments of the plot. In my story, every female character has her own strengths. I hate tearing women down for the sake of it. If you want to read women competing against women, go elsewhere. Here, it’s the men who compete.
P.S. I’m not very good at writing ensemble casts, but I’ve done my best. It may turn into a story focused on the female lead as I go along. If you’re expecting an ensemble cast and aren’t satisfied, please go easy on me. I really have tried, but I can’t give every character equal focus.
I have read a lot of Fire Phoenix fanfics, and they are basically written based on the original plot or combined with changes. This is the most amazing book I have read. Although I have only read a few chapters, I can feel that the girls written by the author are all very beautiful people. There are no excessive conflicts or mindless remarks. There are still quarrels among the protagonists, but there is no direct confrontation, and the atmosphere is not incompatible. I have also watched the TV series Fire Phoenix. Maybe the show focuses on showing some relationships and the progress of things through conflicts, so it is a little bit brainless. From just a few chapters written by the author, it can be seen that all the members are sane and the beauty of the girls is reflected. The content is also detailed and appropriate, and there is no procrastinating sentence like repeating the dialogue in the play. It's very well written, I like it very much 👍 (This is my first time writing a long review, so I may not express myself in words, but it's worth reading)
This book is really good. Some of the surprises were made in advance to avoid hastily changing the ending, which would cause the story to be disharmonious. Whether it is Skylark's early participation or Zhang Haiyan's Nightingale undercover, they have all given due foreshadowing. Several couples of CPs in the story also have their own highlights, and they have done their best in the most suitable scope.
Nice! I love Harley so much! The heroine character is also great! The teacher got the heroine's name wrong 😂
The writing is super good and a little sweet. Wow, so thoughtful
The writing is very good, and I also like the character of the heroine 👍 👍 👍, I read it in one go
It's to my liking. I watched it just in time when I was working the night shift and it was already dawn.
I hope the babies can help me comment on the book and share their thoughts~
It looks great, some small changes are also great