A charming ordinary female protagonist × a peerless handsome man from all walks of life.
Hong Xiaoyan traveled through time, and the strange thing was that she couldn't survive more than three days before falling into a loop. It wasn't until she met the original heroine of the same name that she realized she had entered the game she had just cleared.
But the game depends on the heroine's choice. If the heroine makes the wrong choice, the whole world will have to start over.
As a veteran player, Xiaoyan stayed with the heroine and guided her to make the right choice, until one day the option appeared in front of her, the system changed, and Xiaoyan became the new heroine.
The system assigned her a task:
Congratulations to the host for unlocking the hidden branch! Your current identity is: the number one suspect in the murder of the original heroine.
Favorability of the target male: -299
Favorability of the second male lead: -120
Favorability of the third male: -199
External evaluation: 0.00001%
You only need to replace the original heroine to achieve the perfect ending, and then you can return to the real world!
Good luck!
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This is probably a really fragrant literature.
*Not a cool article.
*All members have non-sound personalities.
Tentatively scheduled for 1vn, the male protagonists haven't decided yet...
Reader comments
Oh my goodness, I finished reading it in one go. I felt like there was a lot of foreshadowing. If we look at it from the perspective of a literary game, the player playing this literary game uses the character Lin Wan to conquer other male protagonists, but the player Xiaoyan enters this game as an NPC in the literary game, and assists Lin Wan, who is also a modern person, to conquer other male protagonists. In the process, the plot is not reproduced one by one according to the rhythm of the literary game. If we talk about literary games, the player is Zhen Linwan, then Xiaoyan being a player is equivalent to Xiaoyan being Zhenlin Wan. Maybe Zhenlinman is not important? But the Duke's Mansion really has a bad background. Lin Wan's parents behaved strangely, as if they were following the procedures. Only Lin Jue was an uncertain factor, but he was so pretentious and too self-righteous.
The Feng Yuan who appears later is also quite scary, especially the sentence: "You forgot about me again." Could it be that Xiaoyan had attacked him before, but lost her memory? Feng Yuan is an awakened character, so he retains all his memories? This character felt very romantic and flirtatious, and Xiaoyan gave him her first kiss.
The above are all random guesses, but I'm really looking forward to the progress in the future, so cheers [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
I like it, I prefer the logical plot and the gradual falling in love with the heroine. The heroine described by the author is very charming. The story is suspenseful and I really like it. It makes me curious about the plot direction.
By the way, some people label the author as a womanizer without learning a few words, which is quite abstract.
Overall review: The writing and writing skills are remarkable, and the plot is good. It can be seen that it was written with great care.
I personally feel that the good part is the creation of characters and the plot is more interesting.
First, it is quite rare for this character to not fall in love with the heroine right away, nor does he have to be the heroine.
Second, there is a clear distinction between the characters. There is no stereotype of anger or sadness. The characters are written quite vividly. The background of the characters is of course there, but some places still need to be dealt with carefully.
But then there are the disadvantages, for example, for the prince, sometimes I really can't figure out what this person wants to do, what his feelings are, and his behavior is sometimes very confusing, but it is only a small problem. This may be because it is written from the perspective of the heroine, so it does not let us know too clearly. Moreover, the background of the character is still there, but the emotions are a bit confusing.
This is my first time reading this way of writing. In fact, I think it would be fun if it were made into a literary game, but some parts of it would seem jumpy when used in a novel. In the first week of the program, I felt that it seemed a bit messy and tight. After all, this way of writing is bound to not omit too much. After all, the option is to rely on the heroine's limited perspective to push clues, so the density and density of the rhythm feel a bit fast and confusing, making people confused.
And this will also make some of the protagonist's goals seem to have no source (maybe I didn't read it carefully, I finished the first week without thinking much, because organizing this information was very tiring), but in general, after watching the first week of the plot, I felt that the plot arrangement was actually quite acceptable.
Then the part in the Duke's Mansion was handled better than at the beginning, which can be regarded as an improvement. After all, the plot in the Duke's Mansion has obviously become clearer, and the information is divided into options, so people will not accept too much at once, but it is still a bit tight.
I can feel that the author will write more smoothly when writing the emotional line later. Oh, by the way, I want to praise here. The author will not abuse the description of appearance. He only clicks on it at certain times, and the details are just right. And when talking about the prince, there will be more talk, but less about other people. This is to distinguish the characters.
The character of the heroine is quite interesting to me. I can feel that she is a pretty righteous girl in her current situation, but her current mental state is quite chaotic.
In fact, it is difficult to write about a chaotic mental state. The author here makes the heroine so confusing that the audience cannot understand clearly. For example, I feel there is no need to struggle with some things, why I still struggle with it, and what is the purpose of the heroine, and what is the purpose of this purpose for her (I can understand it as clearing suspicion in the first episode, but when the second episode involves the young lady, I actually feel that it is the heroine's obsession) After all, I wrote about memories, but I still hope that clicking on one or two sentences will be more convincing. After all, this way of writing brings a lot of information in part, and the intervals are too wide, so some people will forget it. Of course, I feel that it is enough to click on it several times, as long as it makes the reader have an impression. (This is just a suggestion. If the author has other ideas, just follow him. After all, I am not the creator).
Including the feelings for the male protagonist, the hatred for Jue, and the feelings for the prince (for Prince Tan, it is more comprehensive). However, there are too many sources of confusion. I can only guess at the moment, but I hope that when writing, I can also give some reasons why the heroine thinks about this thought, so that it will be better understood.
For the rest, the author's writing style is relatively simple and smooth, which is more comfortable for readers. I stopped at first because the author writes about the "sense of distance between people". Of course, the author did not disappoint me.
At present, the changes in feelings are reasonable in the big picture. There are only two or three small flaws, but they are not major problems and cannot cover up the flaws.
To sum up, this is actually a book with great potential, and I hope the author can write better and better.
(Stacked armor) I can say that I read it more seriously after chapter 50.
Maybe I missed a lot of things in the early stage and didn't understand it. The above only represents my personal opinion.
Really, really, I can't see where the plot is going at all. It's completely different from other time-travel books where you can see the plot direction at a glance. I haven't seen any obvious ambiguity between Xiaoyan and anyone, and it's hard for me to see what might happen next. The plot had quite a lot of ups and downs, so I suddenly restarted it just to take a breather. The plot was very interesting, I liked it very much, and the author was also very interesting, and it suddenly made me laugh. [Sending Hearts]
It was tied, but when I saw the author's reply to others saying that the progress of the heroine was less than 10%, I was really desperate. So far, the heroine is still at a disadvantage. The heroine is so miserable. The plot is really unpredictable. I have never seen this kind of setting. I look forward to the following plots. Please keep updating the author. Give me a five-star support [Sending Hearts]
In fact, this article is quite interesting, but no one has read it. At first, I thought the heroine's name was quite vulgar, Xiaoyan. Later, I thought the plot was very interesting. Are the male protagonists clean? Also, I didn't see any feelings between them. Maybe the author didn't write it there? After reading it, I just feel sorry for Xiaoyan who keeps slugging. Overall, it's a good article [shy][shy][shy]
The wife is so beautiful. Although the heroine is dull, she has not lost her human nature because of many reincarnations, nor has she forgotten the pain of death in reincarnation. She clearly knows that the source of her pain is a group of men, and she does not fall in love with anyone just because of small favors. She is also very friendly to Lin Wan, and there is no female competition. I feel so comfortable watching [please update]. Please update.
Xiaoyan has her own thoughts, her own emotions, and her own standards of right and wrong. Xiaoyan's image is far more vivid and dexterous than the male protagonists. It's hard to describe. The male protagonists are not brainless in love, and they are beautiful...
The writing is very interesting. There is no obvious relationship line with any male protagonist yet. The male protagonists are all very interesting, such as Feng Yuan (too neurotic). The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing. It is a good anti-routine article, similar to the style of a literary game, but it is not an ordinary guide. It is also a bit suspenseful. It covers several chapters. I feel very sorry for the heroine. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel that the author has a lot of imagination and is related to each other. Moreover, the IQ of all the staff is online. The male protagonist is a bit frighteningly sharp.
It looks really good. When I looked at the first ten pictures, I was a little bit motivated to stop watching it. However, I was really a bit short of books [face covering], so I just read on. Unexpectedly, the more I looked at the back, the more I looked at it. It is really good.
It's so beautiful. I urge you to update more.
It looks good, I hope the teacher will update more [blowing kiss]
It's the first time I've seen this kind of plot, it's really good.
The plot is indeed quite interesting, but the current progress doesn't seem to show any signs of developing a relationship... I'll keep reading...
I'm more afraid of an undesirable ending, so I'll wait and see where it goes...
It's beautiful, but it's so heartbreaking. It's so hopeful yet so hopeless that I can't sleep.
Nice! ! ! I had no idea what would happen next.
It's good to watch. The male protagonists of the code found out that the real attacker is actually the female protagonist, but it was too cruel to the female protagonist. It kept dying while loading and unloading [crying]
It's so interesting. It's so beautiful.
Super pretty! Big cheers for the author!
Okay, okay, I hope the plot speeds up [Love]
It's very interesting, cheers for the author. What I like the most is that although it is a guide with only options, Xiaoyan has always had her own ideas! A very inspiring book.
The writing is so awesome. I have no idea how it will develop later. I stayed up until dawn to finish it. I really want to know the plot behind it [crying]
Oh my goodness, I finished reading it in one go. I felt like there was a lot of foreshadowing. If we look at it from the perspective of a literary game, the player playing this literary game uses the character Lin Wan to conquer other male protagonists, but the player Xiaoyan enters this game as an NPC in the literary game, and assists Lin Wan, who is also a modern person, to conquer other male protagonists. In the process, the plot is not reproduced one by one according to the rhythm of the literary game. If we talk about literary games, the player is Zhen Linwan, then Xiaoyan being a player is equivalent to Xiaoyan being Zhenlin Wan. Maybe Zhenlinman is not important? But the Duke's Mansion really has a bad background. Lin Wan's parents behaved strangely, as if they were following the procedures. Only Lin Jue was an uncertain factor, but he was so pretentious and too self-righteous. The Feng Yuan who appears later is also quite scary, especially the sentence: "You forgot about me again." Could it be that Xiaoyan had attacked him before, but lost her memory? Feng Yuan is an awakened character, so he retains all his memories? This character felt very romantic and flirtatious, and Xiaoyan gave him her first kiss. The above are all random guesses, but I'm really looking forward to the progress in the future, so cheers [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
I like it, I prefer the logical plot and the gradual falling in love with the heroine. The heroine described by the author is very charming. The story is suspenseful and I really like it. It makes me curious about the plot direction. By the way, some people label the author as a womanizer without learning a few words, which is quite abstract.
Overall review: The writing and writing skills are remarkable, and the plot is good. It can be seen that it was written with great care. I personally feel that the good part is the creation of characters and the plot is more interesting. First, it is quite rare for this character to not fall in love with the heroine right away, nor does he have to be the heroine. Second, there is a clear distinction between the characters. There is no stereotype of anger or sadness. The characters are written quite vividly. The background of the characters is of course there, but some places still need to be dealt with carefully. But then there are the disadvantages, for example, for the prince, sometimes I really can't figure out what this person wants to do, what his feelings are, and his behavior is sometimes very confusing, but it is only a small problem. This may be because it is written from the perspective of the heroine, so it does not let us know too clearly. Moreover, the background of the character is still there, but the emotions are a bit confusing. This is my first time reading this way of writing. In fact, I think it would be fun if it were made into a literary game, but some parts of it would seem jumpy when used in a novel. In the first week of the program, I felt that it seemed a bit messy and tight. After all, this way of writing is bound to not omit too much. After all, the option is to rely on the heroine's limited perspective to push clues, so the density and density of the rhythm feel a bit fast and confusing, making people confused. And this will also make some of the protagonist's goals seem to have no source (maybe I didn't read it carefully, I finished the first week without thinking much, because organizing this information was very tiring), but in general, after watching the first week of the plot, I felt that the plot arrangement was actually quite acceptable. Then the part in the Duke's Mansion was handled better than at the beginning, which can be regarded as an improvement. After all, the plot in the Duke's Mansion has obviously become clearer, and the information is divided into options, so people will not accept too much at once, but it is still a bit tight. I can feel that the author will write more smoothly when writing the emotional line later. Oh, by the way, I want to praise here. The author will not abuse the description of appearance. He only clicks on it at certain times, and the details are just right. And when talking about the prince, there will be more talk, but less about other people. This is to distinguish the characters. The character of the heroine is quite interesting to me. I can feel that she is a pretty righteous girl in her current situation, but her current mental state is quite chaotic. In fact, it is difficult to write about a chaotic mental state. The author here makes the heroine so confusing that the audience cannot understand clearly. For example, I feel there is no need to struggle with some things, why I still struggle with it, and what is the purpose of the heroine, and what is the purpose of this purpose for her (I can understand it as clearing suspicion in the first episode, but when the second episode involves the young lady, I actually feel that it is the heroine's obsession) After all, I wrote about memories, but I still hope that clicking on one or two sentences will be more convincing. After all, this way of writing brings a lot of information in part, and the intervals are too wide, so some people will forget it. Of course, I feel that it is enough to click on it several times, as long as it makes the reader have an impression. (This is just a suggestion. If the author has other ideas, just follow him. After all, I am not the creator). Including the feelings for the male protagonist, the hatred for Jue, and the feelings for the prince (for Prince Tan, it is more comprehensive). However, there are too many sources of confusion. I can only guess at the moment, but I hope that when writing, I can also give some reasons why the heroine thinks about this thought, so that it will be better understood. For the rest, the author's writing style is relatively simple and smooth, which is more comfortable for readers. I stopped at first because the author writes about the "sense of distance between people". Of course, the author did not disappoint me. At present, the changes in feelings are reasonable in the big picture. There are only two or three small flaws, but they are not major problems and cannot cover up the flaws. To sum up, this is actually a book with great potential, and I hope the author can write better and better. (Stacked armor) I can say that I read it more seriously after chapter 50. Maybe I missed a lot of things in the early stage and didn't understand it. The above only represents my personal opinion.
Really, really, I can't see where the plot is going at all. It's completely different from other time-travel books where you can see the plot direction at a glance. I haven't seen any obvious ambiguity between Xiaoyan and anyone, and it's hard for me to see what might happen next. The plot had quite a lot of ups and downs, so I suddenly restarted it just to take a breather. The plot was very interesting, I liked it very much, and the author was also very interesting, and it suddenly made me laugh. [Sending Hearts]
It was tied, but when I saw the author's reply to others saying that the progress of the heroine was less than 10%, I was really desperate. So far, the heroine is still at a disadvantage. The heroine is so miserable. The plot is really unpredictable. I have never seen this kind of setting. I look forward to the following plots. Please keep updating the author. Give me a five-star support [Sending Hearts]
In fact, this article is quite interesting, but no one has read it. At first, I thought the heroine's name was quite vulgar, Xiaoyan. Later, I thought the plot was very interesting. Are the male protagonists clean? Also, I didn't see any feelings between them. Maybe the author didn't write it there? After reading it, I just feel sorry for Xiaoyan who keeps slugging. Overall, it's a good article [shy][shy][shy]
The wife is so beautiful. Although the heroine is dull, she has not lost her human nature because of many reincarnations, nor has she forgotten the pain of death in reincarnation. She clearly knows that the source of her pain is a group of men, and she does not fall in love with anyone just because of small favors. She is also very friendly to Lin Wan, and there is no female competition. I feel so comfortable watching [please update]. Please update.
Xiaoyan has her own thoughts, her own emotions, and her own standards of right and wrong. Xiaoyan's image is far more vivid and dexterous than the male protagonists. It's hard to describe. The male protagonists are not brainless in love, and they are beautiful...
The writing is very interesting. There is no obvious relationship line with any male protagonist yet. The male protagonists are all very interesting, such as Feng Yuan (too neurotic). The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing. It is a good anti-routine article, similar to the style of a literary game, but it is not an ordinary guide. It is also a bit suspenseful. It covers several chapters. I feel very sorry for the heroine. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel that the author has a lot of imagination and is related to each other. Moreover, the IQ of all the staff is online. The male protagonist is a bit frighteningly sharp.
It looks really good. When I looked at the first ten pictures, I was a little bit motivated to stop watching it. However, I was really a bit short of books [face covering], so I just read on. Unexpectedly, the more I looked at the back, the more I looked at it. It is really good.
It's so beautiful. I urge you to update more.
It looks good, I hope the teacher will update more [blowing kiss]
It's the first time I've seen this kind of plot, it's really good.
The plot is indeed quite interesting, but the current progress doesn't seem to show any signs of developing a relationship... I'll keep reading... I'm more afraid of an undesirable ending, so I'll wait and see where it goes...
It's beautiful, but it's so heartbreaking. It's so hopeful yet so hopeless that I can't sleep.
Nice! ! ! I had no idea what would happen next.
It's good to watch. The male protagonists of the code found out that the real attacker is actually the female protagonist, but it was too cruel to the female protagonist. It kept dying while loading and unloading [crying]
It's so interesting. It's so beautiful.
Super pretty! Big cheers for the author!
Okay, okay, I hope the plot speeds up [Love]
It's very interesting, cheers for the author. What I like the most is that although it is a guide with only options, Xiaoyan has always had her own ideas! A very inspiring book.
The writing is so awesome. I have no idea how it will develop later. I stayed up until dawn to finish it. I really want to know the plot behind it [crying]