A Visual Novel NPC Holds the Conquest Guide to the Male Lead [Transmigration]

I like it, I prefer the logical plot and the gradual falling in love with the heroine. The heroine described by the author is very charming. The story is suspenseful and I really like it. It makes me curious about the plot direction. By the way, some people label the author as a womanizer without learning a few words, which is quite abstract.

Overall review: The writing and writing skills are remarkable, and the plot is good. It can be seen that it was written with great care. I personally feel that the good part is the creation of characters and the plot is more interesting. First, it is quite rare for this character to not fall in love with the heroine right away, nor does he have to be the heroine. Second, there is a clear distinction between the characters. There is no stereotype of anger or sadness. The characters are written quite vividly. The background of the characters is of course there, but some places still need to be dealt with carefully. But then there are the disadvantages, for example, for the prince, sometimes I really can't figure out what this person wants to do, what his feelings are, and his behavior is sometimes very confusing, but it is only a small problem. This may be because it is written from the perspective of the heroine, so it does not let us know too clearly. Moreover, the background of the character is still there, but the emotions are a bit confusing. This is my first time reading this way of writing. In fact, I think it would be fun if it were made into a literary game, but some parts of it would seem jumpy when used in a novel. In the first week of the program, I felt that it seemed a bit messy and tight. After all, this way of writing is bound to not omit too much. After all, the option is to rely on the heroine's limited perspective to push clues, so the density and density of the rhythm feel a bit fast and confusing, making people confused. And this will also make some of the protagonist's goals seem to have no source (maybe I didn't read it carefully, I finished the first week without thinking much, because organizing this information was very tiring), but in general, after watching the first week of the plot, I felt that the plot arrangement was actually quite acceptable. Then the part in the Duke's Mansion was handled better than at the beginning, which can be regarded as an improvement. After all, the plot in the Duke's Mansion has obviously become clearer, and the information is divided into options, so people will not accept too much at once, but it is still a bit tight. I can feel that the author will write more smoothly when writing the emotional line later. Oh, by the way, I want to praise here. The author will not abuse the description of appearance. He only clicks on it at certain times, and the details are just right. And when talking about the prince, there will be more talk, but less about other people. This is to distinguish the characters. The character of the heroine is quite interesting to me. I can feel that she is a pretty righteous girl in her current situation, but her current mental state is quite chaotic. In fact, it is difficult to write about a chaotic mental state. The author here makes the heroine so confusing that the audience cannot understand clearly. For example, I feel there is no need to struggle with some things, why I still struggle with it, and what is the purpose of the heroine, and what is the purpose of this purpose for her (I can understand it as clearing suspicion in the first episode, but when the second episode involves the young lady, I actually feel that it is the heroine's obsession) After all, I wrote about memories, but I still hope that clicking on one or two sentences will be more convincing. After all, this way of writing brings a lot of information in part, and the intervals are too wide, so some people will forget it. Of course, I feel that it is enough to click on it several times, as long as it makes the reader have an impression. (This is just a suggestion. If the author has other ideas, just follow him. After all, I am not the creator). Including the feelings for the male protagonist, the hatred for Jue, and the feelings for the prince (for Prince Tan, it is more comprehensive). However, there are too many sources of confusion. I can only guess at the moment, but I hope that when writing, I can also give some reasons why the heroine thinks about this thought, so that it will be better understood. For the rest, the author's writing style is relatively simple and smooth, which is more comfortable for readers. I stopped at first because the author writes about the "sense of distance between people". Of course, the author did not disappoint me. At present, the changes in feelings are reasonable in the big picture. There are only two or three small flaws, but they are not major problems and cannot cover up the flaws. To sum up, this is actually a book with great potential, and I hope the author can write better and better. (Stacked armor) I can say that I read it more seriously after chapter 50. Maybe I missed a lot of things in the early stage and didn't understand it. The above only represents my personal opinion.

Oh my goodness, I finished reading it in one go. I felt like there was a lot of foreshadowing. If we look at it from the perspective of a literary game, the player playing this literary game uses the character Lin Wan to conquer other male protagonists, but the player Xiaoyan enters this game as an NPC in the literary game, and assists Lin Wan, who is also a modern person, to conquer other male protagonists. In the process, the plot is not reproduced one by one according to the rhythm of the literary game. If we talk about literary games, the player is Zhen Linwan, then Xiaoyan being a player is equivalent to Xiaoyan being Zhenlin Wan. Maybe Zhenlinman is not important? But the Duke's Mansion really has a bad background. Lin Wan's parents behaved strangely, as if they were following the procedures. Only Lin Jue was an uncertain factor, but he was so pretentious and too self-righteous. The Feng Yuan who appears later is also quite scary, especially the sentence: "You forgot about me again." Could it be that Xiaoyan had attacked him before, but lost her memory? Feng Yuan is an awakened character, so he retains all his memories? This character felt very romantic and flirtatious, and Xiaoyan gave him her first kiss. The above are all random guesses, but I'm really looking forward to the progress in the future, so cheers 😘[Flow a kiss]😘

It was tied, but when I saw the author's reply to others saying that the progress of the heroine was less than 10%, I was really desperate. So far, the heroine is still at a disadvantage. The heroine is so miserable. The plot is really unpredictable. I have never seen this kind of setting. I look forward to the following plots. Please keep updating the author. Give me a five-star support 💕

Really, really, I can't see where the plot is going at all. It's completely different from other time-travel books where you can see the plot direction at a glance. I haven't seen any obvious ambiguity between Xiaoyan and anyone, and it's hard for me to see what might happen next. The plot had quite a lot of ups and downs, so I suddenly restarted it just to take a breather. The plot was very interesting, I liked it very much, and the author was also very interesting, and it suddenly made me laugh. 💕

When you see a lot of plots, you feel very desperate and feel sorry for the heroine. However, despite this, we can also feel that the author loves Xiaoyan very much. It seems that he has arranged so many difficulties for her, but he has created a very full Xiaoyan. She is not a person who just completes the task, she will also be tempted in the process. She is not someone who only thinks about strategy. She has ambition in her eyes and toughness in her body. I really love Xiaoyan, and I don't know why the rating is so low, but I hope the author won't abandon the article because of this 🥺

Through the plot, you can see that the author wrote many huge branch lines behind the scenes, and finally integrated them all. This writing power is so powerful. The wording is very relaxed, not too white or too complex. Very comfortable to read. I have done literary games, and I know that it is really tiring to write branching plots, and the author's brain power is so great. The heroine will basically practice every option (maybe Xiaoyan is too unlucky, hahaha, and has to rely on reading files), and then get new clues through the BE plot, which will help the final ending to be successful. It is full of details, unlike other books on literary and travel themes, which only give readers a few choices. If the heroine chooses the wrong one, it will immediately trigger the be ending, and then go back and correct it. I pray for Feng Yuan's ending. I feel that this brother must have had a deep sadomasochistic relationship with Xiao Yan! The chapter I'm reading so far is that he has always been devoted to Xiaoyan regardless of the cost, and the first kiss was also Feng Yuan's, beg on your knees, beg on your knees! Male one, I can vaguely feel some very complicated emotions, but I don't know if what I feel is right, because Xiaoyan seems to purely hate him later. As a player back then, the heroine liked and understood the male one the most. So after being secretly warned by the original heroine (it was said that the heroine made her fall in love with the hero, so the heroine who knows the hero so well cannot betray her), the heroine felt that the original heroine was a good friend, so she would cut off her feelings for the hero. After all, the heroine's moral bottom line is very high. The bottoming out of high emotions is strong resistance, so much so that after the man confesses, the heroine becomes so excited that she vomits crazily. It's such a complicated thing that she can't explain. But you can get it. The second male lead is quite decent, after all, he has nothing to do with the original heroine. So things are going smoothly with the heroine, and Shirogiri and Kurei are not bad at all. He is a truly light and perfect player. Third man, brother, come on, I'm optimistic about you. In countless branches, you and the heroine, the two little bitter gourds, made me cry to death. All in all, 99, but the name Juebi is wonderful... I always have a bad feeling about it. The be line in the final stage was buried in a well. The image was too strong, so I gave it a hard time. There is also a scene in which the heroine commits suicide with an ax and he collapses. The scene is so shocking that it still impresses me. What touched me the most was the plot of the third male lead.

The wife is so beautiful. Although the heroine is dull, she has not lost her human nature because of many reincarnations, nor has she forgotten the pain of death in reincarnation. She clearly knows that the source of her pain is a group of men, and she does not fall in love with anyone just because of small favors. She is also very friendly to Lin Wan, and there is no female competition. I feel so comfortable watching [please update]. Please update.

Why is the rating so low? The writing is really good, better than many other articles. The plot logic of Lin Bantouqi is very tight, with constant SL rewinds, and the image of each character becomes three-dimensional little by little. I want to fatten it up, but I'm afraid that the author will abandon it.

Oh my God, it's so beautiful. The heroine is not self-conceited, she is proud and unyielding, and when faced with options that will change her personality, she will not choose even if it costs a lot. I like the shining point of human nature so much! I really like the heroine's character. I have been reading novels for so long, and I always like this kind of grassroots personality who would rather bend than bend. Although all the male protagonists except Yun have liked the previous female protagonist, in fact, none of these male protagonists have much role. The female protagonists account for the majority, so I can accept it [sending my heart] I really like the plot setting in which the heroine has suffered a lot of setbacks (from the outside world rather than looking down upon herself), but she never bows her head, is proud, and walks out step by step on her own!!! The author must update it more [lick screen]