Born in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, My Pen Pal Xie Daoyun

It's quite good. The characters are three-dimensional and have their own integrity. The literary and historical logic is smooth, and the plot has ups and downs. It describes the unwilling group of people in the Eastern Jin Dynasty and expresses the integrity of the nation. It makes people want to stop. Come on! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][The Bird's Food God's Work][The Bird's Food God's Work][Bookshelf Plus One]

Few people write history about the Western Jin Dynasty, because the historical records are very confusing. There are almost no good ones, and they all end up leaning toward martial arts. The author has made a good start and hopes to keep up the good work

Overall, it's not bad. Although the number of words is not many, it has the potential to be explosive. The writing style feels a bit rusty. It is a bit awkward to repeatedly emphasize that the protagonist only sees the Northern Expedition from beginning to end. The characters lack three-dimensionality. What I care more about is that I feel pity for not cutting off the hair, which is such a pity. Worth a look

Five stars first. I personally am not familiar with the story of the Eastern and Western Jin Dynasties. I have already given this book 5 stars for the first 10 chapters. First, the pace is fast and the narration is very good. It does not involve so much time travel or daily life, and goes directly to the main plot. This writing style is very good. I personally think this kind of treatment is the best in historical articles, because it allows readers to understand it quickly without getting into a mess of so-called time travel and the like.

Ideal protagonist, actual...

Good book, more people should know about it

Not bad, not bad. If you keep playing like this steadily, your results will be very good.

Can the author give more information? It's not enough.

A man dies for a man who knows himself, and a woman looks good for a man who pleases her.

How to describe you best, and what to compare with you to be considered special...

Keep writing in this style, it's good

I think it is well written and the author writes it carefully.

Will the protagonist start his own business?

You must persevere, I want to see the Central Plains recovered

Not bad, not bad, but I'm a little curious. Which surname does the protagonist belong to? Is he surnamed Liu and Wang?

So far, it seems that the writing is very good, but I don't know whether it is a plot of power, a conquest, or the love between children.

Yes, I support the author to continue writing. I am very familiar with many historical figures in it. I am also writing a work about the Eastern Jin Dynasty. Is it okay to comment on each other?