[The aloof beauty falls from her pedestal + possessive pursuit + devoted love between two people with no romantic past + fiercely possessive]
Lin Yue is an online novelist whose writer's block has pushed her to the brink.
The powerful male lead in her story, Lu Jun, had been frozen in place ever since he gripped the heroine's chin in chapter eighty-five. It wasn't that Lin Yue didn't want to continue. After writing the man as ruthless and indifferent to women, she simply couldn't make him seem like the sort of person who would force someone into loving him.
She racked her brains for three days and deleted seventeen different versions.
Then she transmigrated into her own book.
She became the wicked supporting female character who had fought Lu Jun for eighty chapters: the Grand Tutor's legitimate daughter, a skilled martial artist, arrogant and domineering, and a character readers begged to see dead every day.
No problem. She was the author. She knew the whole plot and everyone's hidden cards.
But she had forgotten one thing: she didn't have an outline, so she had no idea what happened next.
Worse still, as she crouched in a crack in the wall and watched Lu Jun force the heroine into loving him, she suddenly realized she didn't understand her own characters at all. He was taller than she'd written him, colder than she'd written him, and even more heart-stirring than she'd made him out to be.
From that day on, the powerful official who was madly obsessed with the heroine began looking at her in a completely different way.
Lu Jun thought he was the most pathetic powerful official in the world.
The court officials feared him, the crown prince's faction relied on him, and even the emperor had to show him respect.
But one woman had him completely at a loss.
He wanted her, but she didn't want him. So he had to hold back, give way, and put on the gentle, mild-mannered act of a gentleman in front of her. He even had to wait for her to say she was willing before he could kiss her.
But pathetic or not, he never intended to let her go.
In this world, he had never failed to obtain anything he wanted.
This beginning defeats 90% of the articles. There's something about this author. The sense of immersion is too strong. It's tense and exciting to watch. The back part doesn't work anymore, the character is not upright and it pulls very suddenly.
The whole novel is very interesting. The counter-routine design of the powerful minister who does not follow the plot is particularly eye-catching. The extreme pull between the male and female protagonists is particularly easy to grapple with. The rhythm of the plot is controlled just right. The plot is not sluggish, and the plot lines are not perfunctory. There is only one setting that I find difficult to relate to. I really can't agree with the arrangement of the current heroine and the original heroine sharing the same body. It feels a bit awkward. Apart from this shortcoming, the writing is smooth and the daily plot is easy to watch.
The setting is very clever, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch now. The original heroine is a bit miserable, but the "author" heroine is even worse... I feel sorry for the heroine's baby, I hope she is high-spirited and not threatened all the time (the original heroine's various threats from her father)
The author writes very well, and the heroine is very three-dimensional and has a sense of subjectivity. It made me forget that this was a forced marriage, so I felt particularly uncomfortable when I saw the female protagonist being suppressed and forced by the male protagonist. I felt that the male protagonist was not worthy of her and was suitable for being alone.
It's very interesting👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Now the male protagonist likes the author Lin Yue, and the second male lead also likes the author Lin Yue, but what about Yuan Lin Yue? She worked so hard to live, but in the end she didn't get everything she wanted. Please🥺 give Yuan Lin Yue a good ending. Let her love herself and let the second man love her. As for the author Lin Yue, I think we can go back to modern times with the male protagonist in the end. The author Lin Yue is also a very good girl. She should not stay in ancient times and have no friends. It is very 👍👍 to let the male protagonist go back to modern times with her.
This novel is generally very attractive, but it gave me the feeling that it was constantly worrying me, and my mood was ups and downs closely with the plot. Lin Yue and the heroine have two souls, and they repeatedly pull the heroine to exchange their souls. This aspect is not particularly comfortable and uncomfortable for me to talk about. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist, and Lin Yue likes Shen, and does not allow the male protagonist to touch her body. However, Lin Yue wants something from the male protagonist, but has no capital to exchange with him. The only thing the male protagonist wants is her. To be honest, it is the female protagonist who wants her soul. She faints every time she kisses her. Of course, this is normal. I have finished the novel and saw that the latest chapter is about the separation of two souls, if the heroine later adopts a new body. Based on Shuangjie's thoughts, I do agree that the male protagonist should not touch Lin Yue's body. After all, I essentially cannot stand it if the male protagonist really touches another body. But the tug-of-war between the two of them is uncomfortable to watch. The heroine only thinks of him as a paper person, and thinks that he follows the character he wrote, but he is a living person in this world. The heroine always thinks about him with her own thoughts, but she doesn't know that he really loves the heroine. His liking for Mamoru is just plot control, but the heroine thinks that he is just meeting someone and falling in love with him. I feel very sorry for the male protagonist. Then let's talk about Lin Yue. She is worthy of sympathy, but a poor person must be hateful. It's pitiful that she tried her best and tried her best to get no favor from her parents. They treated her as a pawn that could be used to squeeze out the last bit of value. It's hateful that she imprisoned the heroine in her body and kept using her to seek Shen. Talking about Wei, as the original female protagonist, she was chased by the male protagonist for two months due to plot control. She later fell in love with the male protagonist, but by that time the male protagonist had already fallen in love with the female protagonist. It could be said that they were destined to be together. In the latest chapter of the story, she can be considered a bit darkened. It's hard to say what it was. The originally innocent and kind girl turned into a person who was envious and jealous of the female protagonist. It can only be said that she was afraid because of love. Finally, let's talk about the heroine. She can be considered heartless, but not necessarily. She cares about the hero in prison and is someone who understands him. But what the hero really wants is for her to be by his side, which the heroine cannot do. All she wants is to return to the real world, so the distance between the two is still quite large. Overall, this book is very interesting and worth reading, but it's a bit cruel to really step into the role of the character, and I feel sorry for everyone when I read it.
Now that I have read Chapter 18, I feel that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is crushed by the male protagonist. I will read it again. I hope the author can give more highlights to the female protagonist.
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It's very beautiful and worth recommending! I hope it can be written soon that the female protagonist has a body, and I want to see the relationship between the male and female protagonists stretched!!! Especially it would be better if there is a plot where the male protagonist is forced 🥰🥰🥰[Admiration]
The writing is very good, I feel like I hate the sea and love the sky (I don't know if this is the right thing to say, I just watched it for a while, and I feel like this), the setting is good, I have to keep writing [full] [full] [full] This is not enough at all, and it didn't take long to finish it 🥺 🥺 🥺 Come on, great!