[Flowers of the high mountain descend to the altar + take by force + double sweet pets + super possessiveness]
Lin Yue, an internet writer whose writing skills are so stuck that he collapses.
The powerful male protagonist Lu Yun in her novel couldn't move again after he pinched the heroine's chin in Chapter 85 - it's not that she didn't want to write it, it was because she wrote this man as "cruel and unfeminine", and he didn't look like someone who could force love at all.
She scratched her head for three days and deleted seventeen versions.
Then she wore the book.
Dressed as the vicious female supporting character who fought with Lu Yun for eighty chapters - the direct daughter of the Grand Tutor, she is highly skilled in martial arts, arrogant and domineering, and readers hope for her death every day.
It doesn't matter, she is the author, she knows all the plots, and she knows everyone's cards.
But she forgot one thing: she didn't have an outline, she didn't know the plot behind it.
What's more terrible is that when she squatted in the crack of the wall and watched Lu Jun forcefully make love to the heroine, she suddenly realized that she didn't understand the character in her novel at all - he was taller than she wrote, colder than she wrote, and more heart-pounding than she wrote.
From that day on, the powerful minister who was paranoid about the heroine began to look at her in a completely different way.
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Lu Jun felt that he was the most useless powerful official in the world.
All civil and military officials in the dynasty were afraid of him, the princelings relied on him to support him, and the emperor would give him three cents of noodles when he saw him.
But there was nothing he could do with a woman.
He wanted her, but she didn't want to, so he had to endure it, retreat, pretend to be a gentle gentleman in front of her, and even kiss her before saying "willingly".
But being a coward is a coward, and he never intends to let go.
There was never anything he wanted in this world that he couldn't get.
Reader comments
This beginning defeats 90% of the articles. There's something about this author. The sense of immersion is too strong. It's tense and exciting to watch.
The back part doesn't work anymore, the character is not upright and it pulls very suddenly.
The whole novel is very interesting. The counter-routine design of the powerful minister who does not follow the plot is particularly eye-catching. The extreme pull between the male and female protagonists is particularly easy to grapple with. The rhythm of the plot is controlled just right. The plot is not sluggish, and the plot lines are not perfunctory. There is only one setting that I find difficult to relate to. I really can't agree with the arrangement of the current heroine and the original heroine sharing the same body. It feels a bit awkward. Apart from this shortcoming, the writing is smooth and the daily plot is easy to watch.
The setting is very clever, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch now. The original heroine is a bit miserable, but the "author" heroine is even worse... I feel sorry for the heroine's baby, I hope she is high-spirited and not threatened all the time (the original heroine's various threats from her father)
The author writes very well, and the heroine is very three-dimensional and has a sense of subjectivity. It made me forget that this was a forced marriage, so I felt particularly uncomfortable when I saw the female protagonist being suppressed and forced by the male protagonist. I felt that the male protagonist was not worthy of her and was suitable for being alone.
Very nice👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Now the male lead likes the author Lin Yue, and the second male lead also likes the author Lin Yue, but what should Yuan Lin Yue do? She worked so hard to live, but in the end she didn't get everything she wanted. Please give Yuan Lin Yue a good ending. Let her love herself and let the second man love her. As for the author Lin Yue, I think we can go back to modern times with the male protagonist in the end. The author Lin Yue is also a very good girl. She should not stay in ancient times and have no friends. It is very 👍👍 to let the male protagonist go back to modern times with her.
This novel is generally very attractive, but it gave me the feeling that it was constantly worrying me, and my mood was ups and downs closely with the plot. Lin Yue and the heroine have two souls, and they repeatedly pull the heroine to exchange their souls. This aspect is not particularly comfortable and uncomfortable for me to talk about. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist, and Lin Yue likes Shen, and does not allow the male protagonist to touch her body. However, Lin Yue wants something from the male protagonist, but has no capital to exchange with him. The only thing the male protagonist wants is her. To be honest, it is the female protagonist who wants her soul. She faints every time she kisses her. Of course, this is normal. I have finished the novel and saw that the latest chapter is about the separation of two souls, if the heroine later adopts a new body. Based on Shuangjie's thoughts, I do agree that the male protagonist should not touch Lin Yue's body. After all, I essentially cannot stand it if the male protagonist really touches another body. But the tug-of-war between the two of them is uncomfortable to watch. The heroine only thinks of him as a paper person, and thinks that he follows the character he wrote, but he is a living person in this world. The heroine always thinks about him with her own thoughts, but she doesn't know that he really loves the heroine. His liking for Mamoru is just plot control, but the heroine thinks that he is just meeting someone and falling in love with him. I feel very sorry for the male protagonist. Then let's talk about Lin Yue. She is worthy of sympathy, but a poor person must be hateful. It's pitiful that she tried her best and tried her best to get no favor from her parents. They treated her as a pawn that could be used to squeeze out the last bit of value. It's hateful that she imprisoned the heroine in her body and kept using her to seek Shen. Talking about Wei, as the original female protagonist, she was chased by the male protagonist for two months due to plot control. She later fell in love with the male protagonist, but by that time the male protagonist had already fallen in love with the female protagonist. It could be said that they were destined to be together. In the latest chapter of the story, she can be considered a bit darkened. It's hard to say what it was. The originally innocent and kind girl turned into a person who was envious and jealous of the female protagonist. It can only be said that she was afraid because of love. Finally, let's talk about the heroine. She can be considered heartless, but not necessarily. She cares about the hero in prison and is someone who understands him. But what the hero really wants is for her to be by his side, which the heroine cannot do. All she wants is to return to the real world, so the distance between the two is still quite large. Overall, this book is very interesting and worth reading, but it's a bit cruel to really step into the role of the character, and I feel sorry for everyone when I read it.
Now that I have read Chapter 18, I feel that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is crushed by the male protagonist. I will read it again. I hope the author can give more highlights to the female protagonist.
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The writing is very good, I feel like I hate the sea and love the sky (I don't know if this is the right thing to say, I just watched it for a while, and I feel like this), the setting is good, I have to keep writing [full] [full] [full] This is not enough at all, and it didn't take long to finish it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Come on, great!
It's very beautiful and worth recommending! I hope it can be written soon that the female protagonist has a body, and I want to see the relationship between the male and female protagonists stretched! ! ! Especially it would be better if there is a plot where the male protagonist is forced [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I have been waiting for a book for a long time, and often give up after reading a few chapters. Until I saw this one, I don't know how to describe it. It is a bit different from the forced love I have read before. It is very attractive to me, and I also like it. Oh my, I don't know how to say it. Five stars is enough to explain everything (I usually don't write reviews. I feel that there are not many good books on Tomato nowadays, so I don't want to rate it so low)
The author is laying out the big picture, the novel is in the middle of the line. I hope this good review can help the author increase the number of readers of this wonderful novel. I don't want to bury the good work.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the author actually writes so well [I almost cried] I even tied it in one night
I feel so tired when I see the back part, but I still give it a five-star review [star]
The writing, suspense and story are quite attractive, but I don't know how the heroine and the original protagonist separated in the later stages.
A very special plot, worth reading carefully.
Although the author is rather verbose and writes one sentence several times, the emotional line is so beautiful. The male protagonist is trembling with love and going crazy with love.
The author would like to update a lot
It's nice to read. The subject matter is very novel. The author writes well.
It's very interesting to watch, and I look forward to the follow-up plot development (✧◡✧)
Nice looking, looking forward to the update
I just read the beginning. It's very good. The author keeps writing.
The score is too low. If there are more people, the score can go up.
Author, you write well!
Looks good, I love the heroine so much that she is loved without even realizing it, hehehe
Can you update it all at once [crying][crying][crying]! ! ! Super pretty!
I think the subject matter is very novel. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing and it's a bit overwhelming hahh [laughing]
It's quite interesting and the plot doesn't drag too much.
It's nice to read, but it may be a bit unnatural if it's overdone, but I generally think it's okay because I'm a native and love reading this kind of writing [laughing]
This beginning defeats 90% of the articles. There's something about this author. The sense of immersion is too strong. It's tense and exciting to watch. The back part doesn't work anymore, the character is not upright and it pulls very suddenly.
The whole novel is very interesting. The counter-routine design of the powerful minister who does not follow the plot is particularly eye-catching. The extreme pull between the male and female protagonists is particularly easy to grapple with. The rhythm of the plot is controlled just right. The plot is not sluggish, and the plot lines are not perfunctory. There is only one setting that I find difficult to relate to. I really can't agree with the arrangement of the current heroine and the original heroine sharing the same body. It feels a bit awkward. Apart from this shortcoming, the writing is smooth and the daily plot is easy to watch.
The setting is very clever, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch now. The original heroine is a bit miserable, but the "author" heroine is even worse... I feel sorry for the heroine's baby, I hope she is high-spirited and not threatened all the time (the original heroine's various threats from her father)
The author writes very well, and the heroine is very three-dimensional and has a sense of subjectivity. It made me forget that this was a forced marriage, so I felt particularly uncomfortable when I saw the female protagonist being suppressed and forced by the male protagonist. I felt that the male protagonist was not worthy of her and was suitable for being alone.
Very nice👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Now the male lead likes the author Lin Yue, and the second male lead also likes the author Lin Yue, but what should Yuan Lin Yue do? She worked so hard to live, but in the end she didn't get everything she wanted. Please give Yuan Lin Yue a good ending. Let her love herself and let the second man love her. As for the author Lin Yue, I think we can go back to modern times with the male protagonist in the end. The author Lin Yue is also a very good girl. She should not stay in ancient times and have no friends. It is very 👍👍 to let the male protagonist go back to modern times with her.
This novel is generally very attractive, but it gave me the feeling that it was constantly worrying me, and my mood was ups and downs closely with the plot. Lin Yue and the heroine have two souls, and they repeatedly pull the heroine to exchange their souls. This aspect is not particularly comfortable and uncomfortable for me to talk about. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist, and Lin Yue likes Shen, and does not allow the male protagonist to touch her body. However, Lin Yue wants something from the male protagonist, but has no capital to exchange with him. The only thing the male protagonist wants is her. To be honest, it is the female protagonist who wants her soul. She faints every time she kisses her. Of course, this is normal. I have finished the novel and saw that the latest chapter is about the separation of two souls, if the heroine later adopts a new body. Based on Shuangjie's thoughts, I do agree that the male protagonist should not touch Lin Yue's body. After all, I essentially cannot stand it if the male protagonist really touches another body. But the tug-of-war between the two of them is uncomfortable to watch. The heroine only thinks of him as a paper person, and thinks that he follows the character he wrote, but he is a living person in this world. The heroine always thinks about him with her own thoughts, but she doesn't know that he really loves the heroine. His liking for Mamoru is just plot control, but the heroine thinks that he is just meeting someone and falling in love with him. I feel very sorry for the male protagonist. Then let's talk about Lin Yue. She is worthy of sympathy, but a poor person must be hateful. It's pitiful that she tried her best and tried her best to get no favor from her parents. They treated her as a pawn that could be used to squeeze out the last bit of value. It's hateful that she imprisoned the heroine in her body and kept using her to seek Shen. Talking about Wei, as the original female protagonist, she was chased by the male protagonist for two months due to plot control. She later fell in love with the male protagonist, but by that time the male protagonist had already fallen in love with the female protagonist. It could be said that they were destined to be together. In the latest chapter of the story, she can be considered a bit darkened. It's hard to say what it was. The originally innocent and kind girl turned into a person who was envious and jealous of the female protagonist. It can only be said that she was afraid because of love. Finally, let's talk about the heroine. She can be considered heartless, but not necessarily. She cares about the hero in prison and is someone who understands him. But what the hero really wants is for her to be by his side, which the heroine cannot do. All she wants is to return to the real world, so the distance between the two is still quite large. Overall, this book is very interesting and worth reading, but it's a bit cruel to really step into the role of the character, and I feel sorry for everyone when I read it.
Now that I have read Chapter 18, I feel that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is crushed by the male protagonist. I will read it again. I hope the author can give more highlights to the female protagonist.
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The writing is very good, I feel like I hate the sea and love the sky (I don't know if this is the right thing to say, I just watched it for a while, and I feel like this), the setting is good, I have to keep writing [full] [full] [full] This is not enough at all, and it didn't take long to finish it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Come on, great!
It's very beautiful and worth recommending! I hope it can be written soon that the female protagonist has a body, and I want to see the relationship between the male and female protagonists stretched! ! ! Especially it would be better if there is a plot where the male protagonist is forced [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
I have been waiting for a book for a long time, and often give up after reading a few chapters. Until I saw this one, I don't know how to describe it. It is a bit different from the forced love I have read before. It is very attractive to me, and I also like it. Oh my, I don't know how to say it. Five stars is enough to explain everything (I usually don't write reviews. I feel that there are not many good books on Tomato nowadays, so I don't want to rate it so low)
The author is laying out the big picture, the novel is in the middle of the line. I hope this good review can help the author increase the number of readers of this wonderful novel. I don't want to bury the good work.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the author actually writes so well [I almost cried] I even tied it in one night
I feel so tired when I see the back part, but I still give it a five-star review [star]
The writing, suspense and story are quite attractive, but I don't know how the heroine and the original protagonist separated in the later stages.
A very special plot, worth reading carefully.
Although the author is rather verbose and writes one sentence several times, the emotional line is so beautiful. The male protagonist is trembling with love and going crazy with love.
The author would like to update a lot
It's nice to read. The subject matter is very novel. The author writes well.
It's very interesting to watch, and I look forward to the follow-up plot development (✧◡✧)
Nice looking, looking forward to the update
I just read the beginning. It's very good. The author keeps writing. The score is too low. If there are more people, the score can go up.
Author, you write well!
Looks good, I love the heroine so much that she is loved without even realizing it, hehehe
Can you update it all at once [crying][crying][crying]! ! ! Super pretty!
I think the subject matter is very novel. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing and it's a bit overwhelming hahh [laughing]
It's quite interesting and the plot doesn't drag too much.
It's nice to read, but it may be a bit unnatural if it's overdone, but I generally think it's okay because I'm a native and love reading this kind of writing [laughing]