Traveling Through Another World, I Export Entertainment

It's tied. It's okay so far, but there are some points I want to make. What I want to say the most is that the author transitions too quickly. I read articles very quickly and sometimes I don't read some details. So when the author wrote the third and fourth issues of the songwriter variety show, I looked at the back and was about to search for songs. I found that this song didn't seem to match up with the previous one. I went back and read it twice before I realized that the author had simplified it. I was a little dizzy after reading it. I hope the author can refine some things, and I hope the recommended songs have more lyrics, because most friends who read Wenzhaogong read it while listening to the song, which is too fast to listen to (of course, personal opinion, this is a matter of opinion) There are things to praise, such as the author's forum posts, because I especially like to read forum posts recently. This feeling of being a wicked person is really wonderful. The songs recommended by the author so far are also quite good and very in line with my taste. There is a small problem. Is the author a fan of dzq? There are many of her songs (no harm, I am also a fan and like her songs) The writing style is okay, not that outstanding but not bad. I just feel that the mood is a bit flat and the logic is okay. The only problem is that the pace is a bit fast. I may need to take a closer look. I can't see the other things at the moment. That's it. I'll explore the others and report back later.

Tied at midnight!! Overall it's still okay, five stars for encouragement!!! Just like what the review said, the transition was too abrupt. I skipped to the response for several issues without writing about the competition. I really thought I missed it... It's okay to write the lyrics in detail. In fact, generally speaking, this kind of novel just needs to read the lyrics, reflect on it, and enjoy the climax haha. The first few chapters have a bit too much inner descriptions and soliloquies of the characters, but this is not a big problem later on.

I'd like to support the new book. I haven't read much yet. The writing is okay, but I feel that the pace is too rushed. I just released a song at the beginning, and I felt that I just described the feelings of netizens and skipped it. Then I moved on to the next song. I feel that it would be better if it has the climax of this song. There is another song. The song was released in a hurry, and there was nothing exciting about it. The main purpose of Princess Wenzhao is to release the song of Earth in other worlds to shock them, so that readers can feel refreshed and have a sense of involvement in the song (I feel like the author can do better by polishing it, you can read other Wenzhao Gong to gain experience)

If there is CP, this book will be useless.