Help! Why Do I Wake up Next to the Hero Every Day?

The author is great, let me tell the truth, if you want long-term development In this novel, I suggest you describe the emotions more delicately, maybe For the sake of early data, I wrote it very quickly first. But in the later stage, if you want long-term development, set aside most of the books If so, I think you need to change it The first world was very beautiful because of the entrance and exit. You will think wow, this novel can be invested in, or something like that, But in the second world, if you don't look at it with your brain, Maybe you can see it, but if you see the third world, then you Even if your brain is completely devoid of your rationality, it is back Let me tell you the problem directly. The emotional line in the second world develops too fast. , You can drag and drop, and you can also change the design. It's your personal setting. Sure, it might be said that it will develop faster, but well, do you want I understand writing cookies, but if you want long-term development, you need to Look at it from a relatively micro perspective If you can't think of some very cool settings, you can ask fans for advice. Silk, fans will provide you with some ideas, and then you can write and mix in the middle An ending mixed with some sour emotions. He or be, it's just that Come on, Chuan Wen, it's very sweet. But it's understandable because the author is a newbie, and our The writing may not be that of a novice, but the setting is relatively novice The development of feelings is also relatively immature, but it is understandable because The author is a newbie, so our writing style may not be considered It's like a novice, but the setting is relatively novice's and the development of emotions is also relatively immature, I actually quite like the author's writing style, so this is the book As for the review, it's just for me to make some slight changes like the author's, just to make it easier for me to read. The reason why many books are unfinished in the end is because The problems I mentioned above just got stuck halfway. The above are my thoughts as a reader. You can accept it or not. Regardless of whether you accept it or not, it's just my little opinion anyway. I still prefer it. I like this book, and I hope it gets better and better

I just finished reading the first volume. The author's writing is very good, but I feel so uncomfortable after reading the first volume [crying][crying]. Every time I see this kind of similar setting, I feel bad. Because one party has love, but the other party is because of an interest or habit, which makes me feel so sad. We are together but we are not really together. Together, it gave me a sad feeling that I couldn't get out of. I was immersed in that emotion and cried all the time. (I may not be able to describe it well, but the two protagonists are both good treasures. It's just that I felt a bit like it. It was too sad. I almost cried. If I'm wrong, I'm very sorry. [Sending my heart])

As soon as I saw it was a big new book, I rushed in! Looking great as always! The rhythm of the emotional line is just right. Although the relationship between the two people is slowly warming up, it does not drag on. Although Xiao Jiu doesn't understand love yet, his behavior is full of love. Ting Ting also quickly launched an offensive against Xiao Jiu after realizing his feelings. The couple is so sweet!

Generally speaking, emotions run in both directions. Although Xie Jiu is very indifferent and aloof, he responds to every contribution made by Tingting. He will change for Tingting and take the initiative because of Tingting. Xie Jiu loves Tingting and is always in action. Maybe the first world Tingting is more emotionally active, but Xie Jiu is also more physically active. All in all, it is still very nice [Blow Kiss]

Why are there no book reviews? Come on, what a pity that such a diligent author is not pushed out. The little lovers are sweet and talkative. They will solve problems immediately. Hehe, there is one more thing. This book has been running wildly on the highway. Two carnivorous brothers. 😋

It's so beautiful [laugh][laugh] Ting and Xie are super sweet. They didn't just listen to each other in their heads in the first world. They went step by step, and the relationship between them is also very interesting [shy][shy] Especially Xie's mouth. I really like it [laugh][laugh] What I'm looking forward to the most is the way they speak [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Although I'm not abusive, I was really sad and sad in the first world [almost crying] [almost crying] because in the first world they only stayed together for a lifetime instead of loving each other for a lifetime. It felt like the first world only had one-sided love. Maybe I was too emotional.

I beat one hundred hundred times and recommended ten thousand times [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

Unbelievable! I casually clicked in and read a little bit, and I was attracted unexpectedly. It's so well written. It's light, not bloody, and it's a step-by-step approach to each other. It's really beautiful!

Now that I've read The End of the World, I think it's really well written, and it suits my taste very well. It's the kind of sweet and ambiguous love between two people. It's not as sweet and greasy as some Tomato novels.

It's pretty, but it looks cold at first, but it becomes sweet after a while.

It's pretty good, it's the kind of gradual feeling

Super invincible and beautiful

Personally I think it looks pretty good

I love you so much, come on! Why isn't the system version updated? [Crying]

Ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. I stay here every day to catch up on the series. It's just fun to dote on each other [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses]. The author greatly encourages me to write,

It's equal, it's pretty good-looking, it's still relatively new, the writing is good 🉑🉑🉑, ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗ

Very nice, super sweet couple [blowing kiss]

I really didn't expect to live in the same world for the rest of my life😭 One star will be deducted after witnessing the death of my lover, aging and becoming younger, and then talk to Slice again

The writing is super good [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The two protagonists are very cute, and the storyline is also very good. Keep up the good work, the author [Like][Like]

Good health, good looks, good looks₍ᐢ •͈ ༝ •͈ ᐢ₎♡

Very beautiful, the first world is very beautiful! ! ! ! Very very sweet

[What] [What] [What] [What] Is Xie Jiu a god on the same level as Su Jue and Shen Wan?

Simply delicious, delicious 😋

It looks good [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Come on and update [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Very well written

The system inside is so funny [laughs]

Just two words, fairy product

Ah, it's beautiful. I like it very much.

Beautiful, the little couple is so sweet