Help! Why Do I Wake Up Beside the Male Lead Every Day?

The author is great, let me tell the truth, if you want long-term development In this novel, I suggest you describe the emotions more delicately, maybe For the sake of early data, I wrote it very quickly first. But in the later stage, if you want long-term development, set aside most of the books If so, I think you need to change it The first world was very beautiful because of the entrance and exit. You will think wow, this novel can be invested in, or something like that, But in the second world, if you don't look at it with your brain, Maybe you can see it, but if you see the third world, then you Even if your brain is completely devoid of your rationality, it is back Let me tell you the problem directly. The emotional line in the second world develops too fast. , You can drag and drop, and you can also change the design. It's your personal setting. Sure, it might be said that it will develop faster, but well, do you want I understand writing cookies, but if you want long-term development, you need to Look at it from a relatively micro perspective If you can't think of some very cool settings, you can ask fans for advice. Silk, fans will provide you with some ideas, and then you can write and mix in the middle An ending mixed with some sour emotions. He or be, it's just that Come on, Chuan Wen, it's very sweet. But it's understandable because the author is a newbie, and our The writing may not be that of a novice, but the setting is relatively novice The development of feelings is also relatively immature, but it is understandable because The author is a newbie, so our writing style may not be considered It's like a novice, but the setting is relatively novice's and the development of emotions is also relatively immature, I actually quite like the author's writing style, so this is the book As for the review, it's just for me to make some slight changes like the author's, just to make it easier for me to read. The reason why many books are unfinished in the end is because The problems I mentioned above just got stuck halfway. The above are my thoughts as a reader. You can accept it or not. Regardless of whether you accept it or not, it's just my little opinion anyway. I still prefer it. I like this book, and I hope it gets better and better

I feel that there is not enough tension between the protagonists, the confrontation between the two people is a bit stiff, and the plot is not coherent enough, and the background is not clearly explained, but overall it is still good, and I feel very reassured.

I just finished reading the first volume. The author's writing is very good, but I feel so uncomfortable after reading the first volume 😢😢. Every time I see this kind of similar setting, I feel bad. Because one party has love, but the other party is because of an interest or habit, which makes me feel so sad. We are together but we are not really together. Together, it gave me a sad feeling that I couldn't get out of. I was immersed in that emotion and cried all the time. (I may not be able to describe it well, but the two protagonists are both good treasures. It's just that I felt a bit like it. It was too sad. I almost cried. If I'm wrong, I'm very sorry. [Sending my heart])

Although I'm not abusive, I was really sad and sad in the first world 🥺 🥺 because in the first world they only stayed together for a lifetime instead of loving each other for a lifetime. It felt like the first world only had one-sided love. Maybe I was too emotional.

As soon as I saw it was a big new book, I rushed in! Looking great as always! The rhythm of the emotional line is just right. Although the relationship between the two people is slowly warming up, it does not drag on. Although Xiao Jiu doesn't understand love yet, his behavior is full of love. Ting Ting also quickly launched an offensive against Xiao Jiu after realizing his feelings. The couple is so sweet!

In fact, I generally like it, that is, I always comment on that day after the author has finished reading it. This is the highest respect I have for a book. But I really couldn't help but give him a five-star review halfway through. It's really super beautiful. Such a magical book, such a goddess, goddess, you will definitely become popular in the future❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤ ️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The novel is super good-looking, and the travel settings in each small world are novel and interesting. The two protagonists have full characters, and their interactions are loving and tense. The emotional line is also very delicate and moving, advancing slowly and slowly. Moreover, the writing is smooth, the rhythm is well controlled, and each life is neither too long nor too short. (Of course 07 is also very cute [please update] [grass has been planted]) ❤️ [KISS]

It's so beautiful 😄😄 Ting and Xie are super sweet. They didn't just listen to each other in their heads in the first world. They went step by step, and the relationship between them is also very interesting 😳😳 Especially Xie's mouth. I really like it 😄😄 What I'm looking forward to the most is the way they speak 🥰🥰🥰

Xiaojiu's emotional intensity towards Tingting ranges from B+ to S-level. She probably liked the first world a little bit, and then she didn't have any common problems with other fast-traveling missionaries in the second world (to put it awkwardly, it's licking. I think the other person has no memory, so we should gradually get to know each other step by step, get to know each other, and fall in love instead of Blindly treat the beginning of the next life with the same emotional intensity as at the end of one life, otherwise the other person will find it strange, because you are a stranger in their heart in this life). After all, I am a missionary who has experienced many small worlds and has met all kinds of people. It is difficult for me to fall in love with you in the first world. This book handles this point very well, which is a highlight in my opinion. . Xiaojiu and Tingting love each other.

Generally speaking, emotions run in both directions. Although Xie Jiu is very indifferent and aloof, he responds to every contribution made by Tingting. He will change for Tingting and take the initiative because of Tingting. Xie Jiu loves Tingting and is always in action. Maybe the first world Tingting is more emotionally active, but Xie Jiu is also more physically active. All in all, it is still very nice [Blow Kiss]