One Hour After the End of the World, I Took over the City's Emergency Command

So far, it looks okay. There is no poisonous point in the plot. The masses are not all villains like in a certain novel. The protagonist and team are not the old warlords in a certain novel under the banner of the people's army. The few flaws I feel are in the troop organization and details, but they have no impact on the plot. I give it 5 stars overall.

The story takes place on July 15, 2030, when the virus broke out. I've seen the latest 66 chapters so far, and I'm satisfied. There's no problem with your identity, just 🈶 storm the troops 🉑. Five-star support, don't forget to keep it.

The main plot outline written by AI is quite obvious, but the AI ​​editing is not very heavy and can be considered a readable level.

It seems okay so far, but you have to control your combat power in the early stages of mutation. Advanced mutants can withstand four heavy machine guns. Will they be able to fly into the sky and turn the earth upside down in the later stage?

Dear adoptive fathers, first of all, thank you for your support. If you have any questions, Please forgive me for any shortcomings and I will work hard to improve. Dear adoptive fathers, I have decided to write according to the PLA's battalion-brigade-army organization. The previous battalion, regiment, brigade, division and army were too complicated. What do you think?

The writing is pretty good, and the plot progress is not laggy. There are no major poisonous points for the time being. So far, it is okay. The beginning is quite good. I will give it five stars for the time being. The author needs to add more updates.

Yes, except that the virus came suddenly, its scope is uncontrollable. It can't defeat cannons, and it will certainly not be able to stop nuclear bombs from washing the ground in the end.

So far it looks pretty good, there are traces of AI polishing, but it's acceptable.

This novel is very good, keep up the good work.

The writing is okay, but why not write 191? 95 Is already Mrs. Niu.

I took a look and found that this work is quite nice overall, but there are still relatively few people commenting on it.

What I've written so far is okay, not too abrupt [thoughts]

It's okay if it's good-looking, but the word count doesn't matter.

The details are not very good, but it's not harmful and it's still watchable.

Compared with other novels, this one should be considered better. Anyway, I really can't find any books that I can read.

Please encourage me. I can only say that I can read the AI ​​content. There are too many

Come on, come on, come on

Get some drone equipment, and some robotic dog equipment.

Support, there is too little written [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's well written, but the numbers are a little short.

Well written and positive

Five stars, I personally feel that this novel is okay so far [like][like][like]

No problem at the moment, it depends on the future, so I will give it five stars for now.

Thank you to the author for weaving a wonderful world with words. The immersion button was pressed from the first reading. Please stick to it and don't stop updating! Good book worth recommending!

Flawed, but still ok

It's not bad so far, keep going!

Work hard to update, bring in a few waves of survivors, and then other official ones brought to the protagonist's side.

There were originally too few troops. Our county is surrounded by two brigades and the Rocket Force.