Infinitely Terrifying, I Can Sense Malice and Evil Spirits

As I write this, I sincerely hope to hear everyone's true thoughts. Regardless of whether you think there are loopholes in the plot, the characters are not fleshed out enough, or some plot points are inconsistent or not enjoyable enough to read, I will accept your praise or criticism calmly. I will read all comments carefully, and every suggestion is a reference for adjusting the story. I don't expect everyone to like it, I just hope that through your perspective, the subsequent content can be polished better. Feel free to speak your mind.

The story setting is quite interesting. I have only read two dungeons so far, but I still think the first dungeon is more interesting. As for the second dungeon, I think Grandma can be set as a trap link in the plot. She is trapped in the link that is exploited, which can greatly increase the tension of the plot. First, If you want to create a dungeon, the story is very interesting, but you don't need to set the ghost to seek revenge. Ghost is a ghost, cruel, cold-blooded and insidious. You can only keep the setting of retaining obsession with something. In terms of details, you can describe the cruelty of the ghost and the insidious plot against people. This can also greatly improve the sense of horror and intelligence. It feels like a fight, but it's still pretty good to watch. The sudden betrayal at the end of the first dungeon is also very interesting and gives me a feeling that this is what most people feel. I hope more details can be added, such as supporting characters to show the horror and cruelty of ghosts. There are characters with a strong plot (but they still have to die) (kind of) You can describe more about how the ghost uses a series of calculations or add NPCs to cause harm, or mislead the character to go offline, to show the terrifying shadow that the ghost has deeply rooted in people's hearts. Comparing the label with the battle of wits, for the time being, I feel that the majority of the chapters are reasoning, and the battle of wits does not feel too calculated. I hope everyone can discuss it together, because the story is very attractive to me. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Okay, it's very interesting, but the protagonist's identity is a bit like Ning Qiushui, but the abilities he displays don't match his identity, and it feels a bit disconnected. And then, it's difficult for an organization to check other people's identities to find anything. I feel like it's been weakened too much (because I only read the first two chapters of the copy), but overall it's very good and worth watching.

I'll give it five stars first. I've finished it now. Let me tell you my feelings first. The first two dungeons are a little rushed. The first dungeon is okay, but I personally like the third dungeon better. But there is a problem. I hope the character design can be better. For example, the person named Bai in the first dungeon can explore alone in the early stage, and even shackle the protagonist in the end. He is a very tolerant veteran. I think it is unlikely that she would have imagined that she had successfully boarded the ship and apologized to the protagonist for being like a dog. There is also the bald man in the second copy. I think he also has a very charming personality. He is such a person who is good at calculating others, but he arranged an ending where he accidentally scolded a child and was killed, and even... Please ask the protagonist to save him. I think such a veteran can still make low-level mistakes, which is simply a plot kill. What I mean is that although the protagonist is very powerful, it cannot be based on the stupidity of the supporting characters. Each supporting character is an independent veteran who can think. Some veterans may be greedy for life, but if they really want to die, according to the pride and pride of veterans With their arrogant characters, I also think that their first reaction is not to ask the protagonist to save them, but to find a way to save themselves or to defeat the enemy. I think what everyone wants to see is not all the protagonist leading the way, but that every veteran has his own opinions and abilities, so I prefer the third dungeon. At least it seems that the veterans are not so stupid and can't think.

I have finished reading the first dungeon now, and I see that the male protagonist is about to enter the second dungeon. The writing of the first dungeon is quite exciting, especially the final part of escaping from the dungeon. It is very exciting and the rhythm is well grasped. I also quite like the character of the protagonist. I just don't know if it's my imagination, it's similar to the ghost smell and ghost eyes. The first dungeon is all about survival and exploration, with the uncertainty of foreign objects, the singularity of foreign objects, the perception of ghosts, and the physique that attracts ghosts. The difficulty of the dungeons with the protagonist is increased. The interval between dungeons for the protagonist is very short, ghosts are invincible, and humans and ghosts are natural enemies. But there are also differences. Each person can have multiple foreign objects, the specific content of the copy is different, and the supporting characters are well created. I really like Zhang Qinian (haha, talking about this, I think of the zqn of Laojiumen in Tomb Raiders Notes) There is also the identity of the protagonist, which is somewhat similar to Ning Qiushui. But tomatoes are indeed like this, and many of them under the same theme are not necessarily similar. I hope the author will keep up the good work, and I will comment after reading the rest of it. I hope the author can write some powerful supporting characters in the future, so that the main character's family will not dominate the whole family, and the rest will be all the same. Also, I hope it's CP-free.

"Thank you for your hard work, author. Well, the writing is great. Come on! ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗ

It's very beautiful, especially the "Lao Guo" scene, which scared me to death. If I want to watch something scary at night, I really recommend this. Finally, I hope the author can update it soon [please update]

The dungeons and characters are both good. If you were writing a pure dungeon flow, there would be fewer types of ghosts.

Can the author add more updates?

I've read the first copy, and it's okay! Five stars support newcomers. [Laughing] The second copy has some flaws, but overall it's not bad, and the third copy is getting better. Very well written! ! ! [Like] [Like] All kinds of reversals, all rely on the brain to survive.

It's super good-looking, the narrative is straight forward, there are no unnecessary words, and most importantly, there are no inexplicable moments.

It looks great, please give it a try ⛽ It's just that it's even more uncomfortable to chase. I'm looking forward to the next copy!

It feels pretty good-looking. The description is also very detailed. Recommend it

Okay, it looks good and logical.

It's well written, but a little lacking.

I just finished reading the first dungeon. The content is actually quite good. There is nothing bad about it. It's just that the return time is too short. I have to go into it again after only one chapter. I don't know if it will be so compact in the future.

After reading the first copy, it feels quite exciting. Come on, author.

It's very beautiful. I didn't expect it to be written by a newcomer. The third copy already has the same feeling as the early stage of Guishe. Keep up the good work.

Super good!!! The copy is brain-burning, and it also writes about the malice of human nature. The protagonist is also very smart and has a bottom line, but he is not a saint! I hope the author will continue to keep up and write more!