Traveling Through the World of Immortality, the Last Wish System Is Bound at the Beginning

The writing is not bad. I read that the author said that there is more than one female protagonist, Jingjing. I hope to see Jingjing come back and see the protagonist have a Taoist companion. Tell Jingjing that your grandfather was kind to me in preaching, so I promised him to raise you. After so many years of living together, I have already regarded you as my biological sister. I hope you can also find your own rightful husband. This is also your grandfather's last wish. Alas, things don't work well later on. It's a very classic plot where the female protagonist is taken away to let the male protagonist develop. This plot really doesn't work well, so let's leave it like this.

It's well written and the protagonist is very humane. I like reading novels like this [laughing]

It is still very good, worthy of encouragement, forbearing and tenacious, and resolute when it is time to take action, and the golden finger is not small. As for the setting of the heroine being taken away by the powerful, I can accept it. What I don't like the most is that the non-blood sister raised by the hero is a bit too arrogant. In fact, she does not have the capital.

A book with great potential. The rating so far is at least about 8. I give it a full score as an encouragement. The current plot and character creation are all OK. The only thing I can say is that some people may not be able to accept it is the problem of the sister.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good. I hope it will reduce some unnecessary verbosity.

Overall it's okay, but the main character is really naive and doesn't show the dual experience of being a wanderer in the world and a time traveler (especially when I asked my neighbor why he often goes into the mountains to hunt monsters).

It's so hard to find a good book on this platform! The text is assisted by non-transition word templates, the writing style is meaningful and mellow, and the story of love and hatred is told eloquently. Even though the tempo is not fast, it still attracts people to listen. As long as you follow the core idea of ​​"constantly breaking through pressure" when writing, it does not require a fast pace. Technically, if you grasp the four basic points, you will be good. It's easier said than done. It takes talent to produce good works, and you can never train the kind of auxiliary template text. This would be more attractive with more violence and intrigue.

It's better than I thought. I really like the process of steady and steady transformation of talents. The exciting points after the protagonist's breakthrough are also written in place. They are not ignored because of their low level. They are better than those who broke through in the early stage, but were looked down upon and unable to integrate in other places. Nice! Chased

After reading it for so long, I really think it's good to read. Personally, I think there are very few bad points. The author is still capable and very careful. I hope it won't be too bad later on. It's a good book and I don't want to give up after reading it halfway.

I think the writing is very good, with some typical basic routines, but the details are arranged very reasonably, and the emotions of the characters are handled relatively well. Coupled with the unique system of this book, I personally think it is well written and I look forward to updating it.

It's very good. It's made by hand. I highly recommend reading it when you're short on books.

It's okay, the plot is coherent and not draggy, the protagonist is kind but decisive in killing people, and the presence of a woman does not hinder the development of the protagonist. There are no stupid supporting characters. Overall it's not bad, a little bit toxic but not too much, and it doesn't affect subsequent viewing. Like the heroine in the comment section who was taken away to practice. In my eyes, it's just a sprinkling of water. It doesn't matter. It's just so-so~

You still have to pity the person who cheated you. You should sit at the Leshan Giant Buddha's seat.

This book is readable, but requires some defense. Depressing points: 1. The protagonist's Taoist monk has a special physique and is snatched away by the Supreme Elder of a large sect. This routine is also very classic. Second, the introduction and label of this book do not indicate whether it is single, multiple, or none. In terms of content, multiple is more likely, but single is not impossible. This needs to be noted. Third, the protagonist adopts a little girl, and the little girl likes the protagonist very much. It can be seen that the author has the idea of ​​​​a romantic line, but the problem is that the protagonist is completely indifferent to this little girl. The author can also use his imagination to write that the little girl has unrequited love. This will not please both ends. It offended both those who wanted Lei's adoption plot and those who wanted a harem. This is my main concern. If this book doesn't have harem tendencies, then why should I read your book?

It is a rare and good-looking novel about people cultivating immortals, Mortal Flow. This kind of book has a characteristic. It has a good beginning, but it will be very boring in the middle and later stages, because they are all the same. This one looks good at the moment, and it is not boring. Goldfinger is quite interesting. I hope the protagonist can further consolidate Goldfinger's character. The I love you plot is very interesting. Write less classics within classics. Although it can be seen that the author has tried to avoid it. The characters of the few true stories are very brilliant and special. You can consider adding a bit of modern thinking. , It's not time travel, and it's not Han Laomo who is a native. Some books set out why the world of immortal cultivators cannot develop modern civilization. One theory is that the underlying logic of physics and chemistry is different. Another theory is that when natural disasters and man-made disasters occur, immortal masters are used to it, and there is no chance to develop guns and gunpowder. You can add a little bit to commemorate that you have not lost your thoughts in the past life. You can experiment in the portable world space. It is a pity that the world is just thrown away. Mining, refining metal, and farming are not money? You can collect some spiritual veins and the like, and wouldn't it be nice to get some sniper rifles, artillery, and missiles?

Five stars for encouragement, but in fact this book does not reach the level of fairy grass. The exploration process of the protagonist's golden finger is a bit far-fetched, and the application of the golden finger is also very poor. The plot is completely mechanical. When someone dies at a plot point, the protagonist is given a task. But it makes people want to watch it. So support it.

This is a rare and excellent book. It is written very carefully and in detail. It vividly describes all kinds of little people in the world of immortality. I have read thousands of novels. This novel is the only one that makes me feel a bit like a good book about mortals cultivating immortality.

It's okay. Although the scenes of cultivating immortals, fighting, seizing opportunities, upgrading, etc., Which everyone wants to see when reading a novel about cultivating immortals, are a bit short, the character description is not bad. It is enough to be picked up and read all the time. It may be more appropriate to give four stars, but I think it is very good to find this book now, so I encourage you to give it five stars.

It is a rare novel that is not brainless, has a good plot, a good emotional line, and the male protagonist is not obtuse. It is a rare novel in Tomato that is not brainless. It is so good that no need to say more [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

Very well written. Hang it well, follow the laws of nature and people's hearts. The description is detailed and the plot is clever.

Quite pretty. Tomatoes are considered small boutiques. A more traditional fairy tale. It's just that some settings seem too routine. But overall it's still very good. You can take a look.

I have to say that the author is pretty awesome. I can still watch so many dian-within-dian plots from ten years ago. If the plot of the dian-within-dian plot is deleted and the author writes a good outline and polishes it, it will definitely be rated above 8 points.

Personally, I think it's very interesting. I have accumulated spiritual roots in the early stage, so my cultivation is relatively slow. This is normal. According to the setting of this book, if it can continue, the protagonist's spiritual roots will be raised later, and the cultivation will be faster. The plot is good, and the emotional line is quite good. At present, it is normal for multiple heroines to have concubines, not a stallion emperor.

It's good-looking, very good-looking and has great potential. Book friends, please recommend it and add more updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have read more than 50 chapters. So far, the setting is unique, the overall logic is online, the writing is smooth, and the plot is touching. I think it is on the level of Tomato 9.

It's pretty good to watch. I like this kind of directness, without those annoying plot entanglements or anything like that.

Yes, the plot is good and the world view is great

The subject matter is very novel, and it deserves a high score, but there are a lot of poisonous points. If you like to see new themes, you can watch it, but you have to tolerate it. Poison Point 1: The girl you raise falls in love with you. Poisonous Point 2: What era are you in and why are you still doing harem stories? I hope to see the male protagonist be uniquely beautiful, otherwise I won't get a high score. Please encourage the author to give it four stars [smile]

A great book, just don't be a dud I'm an old fan, keep working hard

Tomato is a rare good book recently. It takes satisfying the last wishes of the dead as the starting point. If you meet the requirements of the dead, you can obtain qualifications and cultivation experience. From scratch to something, from low to high, without overly suppressing the protagonist's strength. During this period, in order to complete the task, various human relationships and supporting roles were described in daily life, just like a real life with a sense of life and human touch. Love, hate, and hatred are interspersed in it. Now I am writing about the small world of the Bronze Mirror. I hope the author will continue to paint wonderful content!