Cultivating Immortality, Starting by Burying the Remains of My Predecessors

The writing is not bad. I read that the author said that there is more than one female protagonist, Jingjing. I hope to see Jingjing come back and see the protagonist have a Taoist companion. Tell Jingjing that your grandfather was kind to me in preaching, so I promised him to raise you. After so many years of living together, I have already regarded you as my biological sister. I hope you can also find your own rightful husband. This is also your grandfather's last wish. Alas, things don't work well later on. It's a very classic plot where the female protagonist is taken away to let the male protagonist develop. This plot really doesn't work well, so let's leave it like this.

It was really well written. Considering that the female protagonist might not be able to keep up with the male protagonist's cultivation, he sent a powerful person to pick her up to become a saint. He even kindly arranged a mid-stage foundation-building period to test the male protagonist's fighting ability before taking her away. It made me feel like I was back to reading the novel 10 years ago. I still missed it. Then there is another powerful person who takes away another female protagonist. The writing is really great👍🏻. After all, the male protagonist still needs to continue to find a confidante. This reminds me of the author. I really like this kind of empty-headed writing style. It makes me feel relaxed when reading it.

It's well written and the protagonist is very humane. I like reading novels like this 🤭

Give it four stars as a sign of support. It is a very old-school way of writing about cultivating immortals. It was written around 12 years ago. For example, the little girl who was raised fell in love with the protagonist. The newly married Taoist couple has a special physique and was taken away and trained by the old monster in the later period. The advantage is that the old school is combined with the popular Fangshi Leisure mission system mode in recent years. The two worlds interpenetrate elements. The character growth is quite satisfactory and closer to the factory perfect structure. For those who are more nostalgic, you can watch it. It's a pity that the cool points of cultivating immortals and hundreds of arts were not well written in the early and mid-term. The author should learn a new model for the next book. The current general background of male and female issues. The previous paradigms have become poisonous points. We must keep pace with the times and carefully grasp the cool points of female characters.

It is still very good, worthy of encouragement, forbearing and tenacious, and resolute when it is time to take action, and the golden finger is not small. As for the setting of the heroine being taken away by the powerful, I can accept it. What I don't like the most is that the non-blood sister raised by the hero is a bit too arrogant. In fact, she does not have the capital.

A book with great potential. The rating so far is at least about 8. I give it a full score as an encouragement. The current plot and character creation are all OK. The only thing I can say is that some people may not be able to accept it is the problem of the sister.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good. I hope it will reduce some unnecessary verbosity.

The opening setting is novel: it starts with the core of "burying the remains of the elders to trigger the last wish system". The protagonist Li Yu activates the system by burying the old man. After completing the last wish, he can inherit spiritual roots, skills and other legacies, quickly solving the starting dilemma of "cannot cultivate immortality without spiritual roots", which is refreshing and straightforward. The slow-paced immortality + emotional drama has highlights: it is a slow-paced immortality novel, the characters are three-dimensional, and the description of emotional lines is recognized by some readers. For example, the emotional portrayal of the raised granddaughter Lu Jingjing has warm details. The main line is clear: it revolves around "fulfilling the last wish of the predecessor (burying, raising granddaughter, and helping her find a husband)". The plot has strong coherence and clear growth goals. The plot became routine in the later period: Some readers complained about the plot of "the heroine was taken away by a powerful force, and the protagonist withheld her development for a long time", thinking it was an old-fashioned "female protagonist's tool" setting, and the heroine's presence was greatly weakened, and the plot progress was too slow (the protagonist has not yet established a foundation, and the line of revenge is far away). Controversy over the setting of the male protagonist: Some readers believe that the male protagonist is a "central air conditioner" and the treatment of multiple female protagonists does not meet the expectation of "single female protagonist without ambiguity", and some readers abandoned the book because of this. The plot rhythm is slow: the slow-paced setting is amplified in the later period, and the plot of "revenge and growth explosion" that readers expected has not yet arrived, causing dissatisfaction. Suitable for readers: Suitable for readers who like system flow, slow-paced immortality, and warm and emotional lines; readers who prefer "fast-paced revenge, clear single heroine, and no tool-man setting" may find it not in line with expectations.

After reading it, I feel very enlightened👍. I read the two new chapters every day when I wake up. I feel completely comfortable👍. I especially like the author's plot of writing whatever comes to mind, which is eclectic👍. The author is also very considerate. He is afraid of the protagonist's immortality. Being lonely, I crazily filled the protagonist's harem👍. Not only that, I was also afraid that the protagonist's harem would not be able to keep up with the progress, so I directly summoned powerful powers from the air to pick up the number one heroine and become a saint. There was also a mysterious old man who took the number two heroine to fight monsters and upgrade in the demon world👍

The overall feeling is pretty good. The low score is due to the plot of a Taoist couple being captured by a powerful person for training. This is indeed a major poisonous point. The plot is a classic upgrade routine. Goldfinger is a growth type. Personally, I think the characterization is indeed a highlight of this book. Everyone The characters are all very three-dimensional, especially the character of Chu Yue. Generally, the leading character in the early stage of the novel is a simple good person (the kind who will most likely sacrifice for the protagonist and asks for little in return), but this book also creates the image of a father who hopes that his son will succeed. The image is very consistent with some modern parents. His care for the protagonist is more out of compassion, and it also has a great influence on the protagonist's subsequent transformation. The images of many supporting characters in this book are three-dimensional. There is no good guy, it is not black and white, and they all have their own selfishness and ambitions. The writing Apart from the difficulties faced by low-level immortal cultivators and the ruthlessness of the years, I think this book is not too toxic (bringing a younger sister at the beginning is not a toxic trait, cultivating immortals should not only be cruel), and the classic plot is not unreadable. In short, I think this book does not hide its flaws, and is better than the 9-point Tomato.