Western Fantasy Shouldn't Be Like This?

The material selection is good, and the main character settings are also very interesting. However, the writing is a bit messy, the language is a bit obscure, and many parts are not very smooth to read. If you polish it, the potential is not bad. Come on, author.

It's a pretty good work, but maybe I'm too visual. Whenever I think about the heroines, it's a bit hard to describe, and my bones shrink back a bit. Apart from this, Thunder's language is quite thunderous, which makes my Thunder soul feel thunderous.

Well, there has never been such a comfortable start. The protagonist is established in the first chapter, and the more funny and humorous narrative techniques are used to neutralize the boring and cumbersome nature of pushing too much information into the first chapter. A good start without eunuchs. Let me add that whether it is the author or the protagonist, this dialogue is very suitable for the era of great repression [face covering]

[Facepalm] How can I put it this way? It feels like watching my brother's second-hand gangster history.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that there are no problems except that the male protagonist is a bit of a god. It just depends on when the female protagonist will turn back to a beautiful girl.

Yay! There is no sign of AI polishing in the first half, so look forward to it! (゜▽゜)つロ

It's very interesting, and the world view of this book is well established.

It's good to watch, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the plot is exciting.

How to say it? There is a feeling of embarrassment that makes me pick my feet even when I think back to my second year in high school, but it is surprisingly beautiful^ω^

It's okay, it's just that this Western fantasy is not pure, it's a little bit fantasy

Four-star wait and see, so far no problem has been found. It's just that the combat power level has been raised too fast. I don't know if there is an outline. The combat power plan is level 10 plus demigods and then gods. There are currently 51 chapters and I am ready to be a demigod. If I maintain this upgrade speed in the future, it will be about a hundred chapters to become a god. Either change the picture in the later stage, or delay the combat power of the demigods before going to the god. But the writing is good so far. Come on! I hope it can be stuffed into my exquisite collection

Very nice to say [sending heart]

It's a great Western fantasy novel. I hope the author will follow his own style and it has the potential to become a masterpiece in the future.

Interesting soul and words, I am willing to stop here and hope the author can keep it. The taste is like iced sparkling water, sweet but not greasy, quenching thirst and refreshing, hhhh

It's really interesting. The author is great! I personally feel that the writing is really good and very palatable. I hope there will be more updates in the future. Come on come on

It's really good-looking, and the plot and settings are quite interesting [laughs][laughs][laughs] The only shortcoming is that the author really should polish up his writing. The connections between some sentences and paragraphs are too stiff, and the word order and logic of many sentences are really problematic, and there are quite a few omissions and typos. It still looks a bit uncomfortable [cover face][cover face][cover face] In short, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Obviously the number of words is not many, but it is very long and the characters are good, but I don't dare to take on the role, and I even want to laugh [face covering] The relationship line is getting weirder the more I look at it. I feel that the protagonist does not accept it because he likes it, but simply because he is responsible for the other person's feelings. When he can use his power later, his strength will probably not be as strong as the protagonist's and he will be just a vase. At this stage, he is not even a vase, just like the stones in the pit are smelly and hard. It is purely a trigger of the main line. If the benefits cannot be paid, he will just create trouble [Eating Melon]

In general, you can still watch it

Surprisingly good, but I can't hold my breath from time to time while reading.

It would be better to write more

It looks good (๑• . •๑). Just keep updating it.

The previous dozens of chapters have surpassed most of Tomato's similar novels.

Please update more. Vadasi can do everything.

It's good to watch. This is how Western fantasy should be written. It should be written ruthlessly.

It's pretty good, although there are some shortcomings, but overall it's good.

Such a thunderous book is definitely not AI, but the main character in the front is a bit too gay. Who in the world would a normal man sleep with the other person without knowing that the other person is a woman?

The novel and dialogue are quite interesting, but I'm not used to using comic skill names.

Recommend the male protagonist has a great personality

I feel like the curse has been lifted a little too quickly. Even the Crimson King can't see clearly without using it [face covering]

Is the author happy with the writing? Chapter 3 Ten Thousand Words