Isn't Western Fantasy Supposed to Be Like This?

The material selection is good, and the main character settings are also very interesting. However, the writing is a bit messy, the language is a bit obscure, and many parts are not very smooth to read. If you polish it, the potential is not bad. Come on, author.

It's a pretty good work, but maybe I'm too visual. Whenever I think about the heroines, it's a bit hard to describe, and my bones shrink back a bit. Apart from this, Thunder's language is quite thunderous, which makes my Thunder soul feel thunderous.

Well, there has never been such a comfortable start. The protagonist is established in the first chapter, and the more funny and humorous narrative techniques are used to neutralize the boring and cumbersome nature of pushing too much information into the first chapter. A good start without eunuchs. Let me add that whether it is the author or the protagonist, this dialogue is very suitable for the era of great repression [face covering]

[Facepalm] How can I put it this way? It feels like watching my brother's second-hand gangster history.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that there are no problems except that the male protagonist is a bit of a god. It just depends on when the female protagonist will turn back to a beautiful girl.

Yay! There is no sign of AI polishing in the first half, so look forward to it! (゜▽゜)つロ

It's very interesting, and the world view of this book is well established.

It's good to watch, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the plot is exciting.

How to say it? There is a feeling of embarrassment that makes me pick my feet even when I think back to my second year in high school, but it is surprisingly beautiful^ω^

It's really good-looking, and the plot and settings are quite interesting [laughs][laughs][laughs] The only shortcoming is that the author really should polish up his writing. The connections between some sentences and paragraphs are too stiff, and the word order and logic of many sentences are really problematic, and there are quite a few omissions and typos. It still looks a bit uncomfortable [cover face][cover face][cover face] In short, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author [laugh][laugh][laugh]