[The world of EVA, plus monsters and some worldbuilding from Ultraman Tiga, Dyna, and Gaia. No System.]
Li Xuan, a PhD in marine geology, transmigrates to the world of EVA and becomes the Giant of Light, Agul.
The Apostles descend on Tokyo-3, and monsters awaken. He joins NERV and protects the city as the Blue Giant. Along the way, he takes in the emotionless Rei Ayanami and gradually teaches her what feelings are; reunites with his tsundere childhood friend Asuka and helps her overcome her childhood trauma; and chats about the philosophy of life by the sea with the young Apostle, Kaworu Nagisa.
He cooks, visits festivals, and teaches people to ride bikes in his free time. In battle, he transforms into Agul and teaches monsters a lesson with his Photon Crusher.
“Strength is for protecting others, not for proving anything.”
When the will of the ocean meets the bonds between humanity, this time he will protect everyone.
To put it simply, it is qualified for Ao, the writing style is also very good, and the characteristics of the characters are very vivid. The entire article is mainly devoted to the emotional expression and shaping of the characters. Relatively speaking, the proportion of the battle is not that much. Those who like to watch Ao's long battles can taste it first. Overall, it is still very interesting. I hope the author can work hard.
There are many paragraphs in AI-assisted processing, and the emotional drama is slightly deliberate.
The flavor of literary youth and daily emotional writing is very strong. In a sense, it can be regarded as a kind of clear-flowing Ouwen. However, the biggest problem of this book is that it has no main line and is a bit ordinary. This book focuses more on the detailed description of daily life and the characters' emotions. The setting in Ou is more like a plot propeller. The protagonist of the sage style is not derogatory, but is positioned as a spiritual mentor. It is not suitable for brothers who enjoy fighting [Blessed Immediately] [Blessed Immediately] [Blessed Immediately]
The plot is pretty good, but this author updates too slowly. Other authors can update five times a day, why can't you?
I've been reading this for a long time. First of all, let me tell you my opinion. It's true that the author used AI and it's unadjusted, but it's acceptable. I'm purely personal. I think the author can use AI to write other parts when describing the protagonist. It feels better to write by hand. (Of course this is just my suggestion.) Another point I have is that after reading more than half of it, I feel that there is no main plot. I feel that whether it is this, the appearance of the monster, the awakening of the light by the protagonist, or the fact that the monster mentioned in the article is a man-made transformation, I just mentioned it without going into it. If you don't read the comments, you may not even understand what is going on. And after watching it for so long, I feel that it should have two female protagonists, but it should wait until the end or the extra chapter. Personally, I feel that it should be handwritten by then. If you use AI when writing emotional scenes, then I can only give it a six-star rating. And to be honest, I feel that if it weren't for Teng Gong's character and you used AI to write a name that could be considered rational, then the character creation would fall off a cliff. Also, the author, can you, Gaia, come out? It's been a long time since I've seen one written about Aguru without Gaia appearing in such a long time. But I feel like if I were to write about Gaia, I might have to have two male protagonists. Thinking about it this way, it's better to just die there. Well, to sum up, I feel that this film can be used as food, after all, there are relatively few fanfics about this stuff. At least on this platform. Moreover, the platform was also relatively turbulent during this period. All we can say is wait and see and cherish.
There's just no one talking
Well, after reading it so far, the overall feeling is okay, but the number of words is a bit short. The author should work hard and give me five stars first [Thoughts]
How should I put it? There are a lot of traces of AI, especially the DS one that is not... But... Used a lot, but overall it's okay.
The logic is clear and consistent with the original world view.
The first few pictures sound very comfortable, but I don't know what the rest will be like. Comment again then