After His Mute Wife Escaped, Long Aotian Turned Dark.

I am quite talented in writing, but there are a lot of bugs. The author can read it carefully and see if there is anything I can't connect to. I think the subject matter and writing style are quite distinctive. I will try to improve them. Keep up the good work.

Come on, the setting is okay, but overall I still need to work hard. When I saw the sad part, I didn't know why I suddenly remembered the lyrics "The vows I made sincerely when I was young~"

I have a talent for writing abuse, but there may be a problem with the design of the cultivation level. Can I live for thousands of years before the foundation is established? I feel that the time bug can be fixed, and the person who has lived for thousands of years before the foundation is established will not age. Also, the demon in the background looks a little too fast and I don't write it clearly. Everything else is okay and has potential, keep writing.

There are many logical inconsistencies in the plot, and I hope the bugs can be fixed. The writing feels so-so, and I feel like I don't understand the plot. But! ! ! ! Author, your writing about abuse is very good. Let me go, it's so beautiful and super exciting. I get excited as soon as I write this. Please update soon! ! !

It's very interesting, but the author's update progress is a bit slow, so I specially approved the author, and this author especially likes to give people milk bottles. I don't know what the psychology is. The plot is a bit tight, but it is quite comfortable to watch. The author should be good at writing about emotions, but not so good at writing about battles. Anyway, this is how I feel personally. The emotional lines are very well written, and the plot is also very good. I highly recommend it. I highly recommend it.

It's not bad, it's very interesting, I like it very much, but I feel that the plot is a bit rushed, a lot of it is rushed through, it looks a bit strange, and the male protagonist's training progress is a bit too golden. Some plots feel unnecessary, but it's okay, it's very interesting [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I've read Chapter 48 and haven't finished it yet. Overall, it piqued my interest. The characters, plot, etc. Are in line with my taste. However, I don't particularly like reading books except for the protagonists. The length is too long. How can I put it, it's just right. I think it is the icing on the cake. This article is currently excluded from the top 20 About the first chapter, I think the remaining half of Zhu Yunan's arrangement is a little too small. Basically, it's just him and Pei who are bickering or causing trouble (I forgot the name, sorry). However, it makes sense to write that he is the reincarnation of a bad star. I read the introduction and it said micro. Group portrait, this is my problem, I didn't notice the label, but so far I feel like I haven't seen this person's shining point. I don't know if the author's subsequent arrangements for this person are good or bad. I feel now that he should be from the protagonist's camp. Zhu's unlucky constitution is acting up. Several of them talked about protecting the protagonist, but in fact Shang also did this, but I feel a little aggrieved. The protagonist can actually solve this problem, but I don't mean to belittle when I say you are like this or forget it, but I still feel a little aggrieved after watching it. I feel that I can't explain it, and I don't really doubt it? The people next to me have called Shou's name many times, don't they want to see Shou? I still really haven't heard anything about it. Apart from these places, I think it's pretty good. I'm going to follow up and check it out later.

I give you the most direct, the most truthful, the most thorough, the most naked, the most chilling, the most sharp, the most profound, the most realistic, the least embellished, the least roundabout, the least backtracking, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the most neat, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink, the least procrastination, the least The most sloppy, the most poignant, the least merciless, the least humane, the least formal, the most disrespectful, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite, the least flattering, the least hypocritical , the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least internal, the least nonsense, the least elaborative, the least redundant, the least empty, the least detour, the least detour, the least nagging, the least nagging, the least procrastination, the least hesitant, the least hesitant, the least tactful, the least subtle, the least vague, the least secretive, the least Hidden words, the most unconcealed, the most straightforward, the most candid, the most candid, the most magnanimous, the most unfiltered, the most realistic, the most realistic, the most direct to the essence, the most see-through, the most unreserved, the most sincere, the purest, the most unconcealed. The ultimate answer: I love to read this book. The setting is perfect and it touches my heart!

I am Feng Feng. I was attracted by this cover and this introduction at first sight. I can decide whether to read the instructions to read the menu or to clear mines! This setting is also very rude. He walked right into my heart without even saying hello when we first met him. When I read the early stage, I was undoubtedly filled with an indescribable emotion, just that, well... You know. I wish you success and I didn't get nervous for the first time. All in all, in short, this book is very suitable for me in terms of cover, introduction, setting and plot. I will read it seriously. However, there are some parts of the plot that are not very clear. I can improve the logic of the plot more. I look forward to the plot in the later stages! I also wish that your writing skills will get better and better, that your works will be seen by more people, and that everything will go well [sending my heart] [sending my heart] (Of course, the above opinions are only personal opinions. After all, everyone has different opinions in reading. I wish you all can find books you like and have a happy life)

Nothing good to say, it feels very delicious [Sending heartfelt thanks] But... Why is it that when the author writes other things in a mediocre way, why does he become so ruthless and forgetful when he abuses him all the time? [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh] The last thing is the feeling, there is a knife at the back as a guarantee (os: The author tried to write the whole process with a knife, (or mixed a little sugar with the knife) and ended with he) 🤓

Very interesting! It's just that the pace is a bit too fast and the background is not very clear.

Overall, it's pretty good. The author's writing style is very unique and he's a master at writing sadistic stories. The plot is a bit strange. Have you ever thought about trying to write short stories? I think the effect should be good.

It's pretty good. I hope it will be updated soon~ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ )

[Laughs] I love widow literature

I don't know, I feel so good [full]

This setting is really delicious! There are just a lot of bugs that need to be fixed

OK, I think it looks pretty good.

It's okay, the writing needs to be improved

Oh no no no, this is undoubtedly beautiful [shy]

I've read a lot and I like it very much. Great support for the author.

It's a good read. Can you please open a fan group?

The plot is very interesting, the introduction is also very good, and the cover is also very good, hehe [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Let me go, I've been watching it for so long, but I haven't given it a rating? It's such a pity to get one now

The plot is generally good

It's extremely delicious. This book has been keeping me interested. It's so good, but it's a little lacking.

Recommend! Nice! Teacher update soon!

Please update [Making faces] Goddess, come on!

Mmm~ Very delicious😋, super pretty

Why is there no rating? This cannot be 9.0

The plot is okay👍👍👍