Starting with The Boys: Climbing to the Top of the Food Chain

Aren't you going to kill the boss of Nege? Chapter 43 is a bit disgusting. An invincible being that can change into countless forms is actually threatened by a farm tool, which makes people feel powerless.

I've read ten chapters and it's okay, although it's a bit worse than expected. Can I give it a five-star rating? Let's see what happens next. I have a suggestion. I think the male protagonist can play with things like biochemical bombs in the early stage. I remember that in the settings, you can input a virus and play it as a bomb. 🤔 I hope to add more things that make fighting exciting.

So can't everyone in Watt Company be killed? Why should I be bound by him? Even if you are restricted by language, can't you just finish the killing? Watt Company is a large international company. It is not a finalist. When did it become so powerful?

Give yourself a five-star rating first to encourage yourself.

As a fanfiction based on an American comic book, it's undoubtedly acceptable, at least so far, with no obvious flaws. (Up to chapter 240) Personally, I think there are a few issues that need attention later on, otherwise it might affect readership. 1. The protagonist's cheat is the infinitely absorbing and evolving Blacklight virus, but the protagonist's background is that he has no family, and the early Blacklight version is essentially a speedrun, leaving only Mia (the psychic girl saved by the protagonist) as a slight connection. Under these circumstances, how the protagonist maintains his humanity needs to be well-developed. (The rules he established earlier, such as not killing good people, are merely a baseline, not his personal anchor.) 2. The use of AI tools. I personally don't mind novels using AI tools, but the feel shouldn't be too strong. Currently, there are few traces, and no extensive AI descriptions. I suspect the author might have run the story with AI and then refined it himself, which is good. If he can maintain this, tens of thousands of readers shouldn't be a problem. Whether it becomes a big hit depends on whether the plot has its own innovations, after all, this type of American comic book story is almost overdone. 3. Regarding the main plot, the only thing that can be considered a main storyline so far is the constant absorption and strengthening, which feels rather thin. There's constant switching between worlds and maps, but what the protagonist wants to do is quite predictable, or rather, what will happen with each map change is predictable. I think adding a new main plot would be better: designing a laboratory research institute, gathering scientific talent from various worlds, understanding the Blacklight virus, and avoiding being devoured or becoming a puppet of the virus in the future. Alternatively, the protagonist could improve themselves by researching the Blacklight virus or other serums and genetic technologies. Of course, the protagonist's current mode is more like a symbiotic relationship with the virus, similar to Venom's. Personally, I think another possible path is to anthropomorphize the Blacklight virus? To truly become a Venom-like being, with self-awareness, a pseudo-female lead, otherwise the protagonist will be too lonely in the end. 😄 However, this path might not be feasible now; this route might have been better developed from the beginning. Finally, I think the best-developed character is Tony. He has the essence of the original comics—the playboy's sharp tongue? American humor? The other characters are rather underdeveloped and need further development. Keep up the good work! [Learned something]

Give it five stars. By the way, mark yourself as a classic. Once there is a special little girl, the protagonist will definitely adopt it. I don't like this kind of routine very much, but if you like this kind of book, it should be good [Chigua]

It's pretty good. Although the protagonist has incredible abilities, he still doesn't forget his original intention. It fits my impression of the protagonist very well. However, even though the protagonist can fight with the people of the motherland, he is lurking in the Walter Company. This part is a bit toxic. Everything else is fine. The sentences are humorous. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Chapter 30 speed pass, the black light virus is really over, you can change the map, come on

It's pretty good. Although it becomes more diverse later on, it's inevitable for this kind of book. Nothing bad, very nice

It looks good, I love watching it, I keep watching it, please update it soon 😏