Beast Control: There's Something Wrong with My Fit

It's beautiful, I've struck gold, it's not enough I want to see the protagonist completely transform into a woman [laughing evilly]

The look and feel is pretty good so far, and overall it's quite interesting. Also, the author seems to care about reviews? I suggest you refer to the book review comments. (The comments are a bit confusing after reading them.) Don't mess up your original ideas casually, and just follow the outline steadily. After all, if you cater to the demands of some readers, you may make other readers feel worse. (For example, on the issue of change, since your introduction is clear and relevant, I can think that this is the state of the full text in your original thoughts, and those who are still willing to read are readers who can accept this tone.) So don't worry too much, just follow your own pace, come on.

The writing is good and has great potential. We will see how it develops in the future. If the writing is bad, the rating will be changed. I would like to give you five stars in advance to encourage you. The latest plot of the battle with the captain is a bit plot-killing. The protagonist can use elementalization and condense high-power weapons. He is a low-level fish fry in front of enemies who have no way to deal with elementalization. He lost to the squad leader because the squad leader has a wonderful gadget that makes elementalization ineffective. At least the battle process is reasonable. Now it is a bit boring. The current plot is relatively ordinary, the characters have no memorable points, many characters can't even remember their names, and neither the protagonist nor the characters have any goals.

The author has written quite a few before, but none of them have been officially published. This book is considered a book in my true sense. The inspiration for the novel is direct. I have read too many sex-transformation articles, and I want to give the protagonist a personality change in everything I write. In addition, I have an idea about the combination of talents in the beast-control novels, so I came up with this article. However, I feel that I am very sorry for my friends. I changed their names and wrote them directly into the novel. I don't know the subsequent plot or anything. I only have a few hundred words in the outline, but I should be able to keep writing. If there is anything that is not written well, everyone can point it out. If the author can make changes, I will make changes. My friend, why don't you tell me your tomato name and I promise not to look at your bookshelf or works [dementia]

I like it very much, radish and cabbage, everyone has their own preferences, although I feel that the overall quality of Tomato's works is not particularly high, and many of them are traffic accumulation and falsely labeled as "good articles". But he is really friendly to new writers, and you can also see a lot of fresh and interesting niche articles. However, the readers' level is uneven, and the reviews are mixed. Sometimes the ratings are really not satisfactory. I hope the author can get better and better. I don't know what the author's objective strength is, but from a personal subjective point of view, I really like this article, like to read it, and love to read it.

Come and raise jellyfish in the book with me, earn 0 yuan a day, just to sting the author's butt ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ~ଳ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~

Read half of it and write a review The author blatantly said that he used AI. If it is used well, I don't particularly object to it. After reading it for a while, I think it's okay. At least I didn't just write the outline and let AI edit it. The thing that makes people jump in the middle is actually that the author has written Ye Li down, and it's the kind of thing where the gender changes immediately. I feel like the plot is not very coherent. I don't know if it's because of the use of AI, but the pacing is still a bit off. Anyway, come on

It feels like the protagonist is an indigenous person, not a time traveler It doesn't feel inappropriate to change the time travel in the introduction to the protagonist being an indigenous person.

The author's writing is okay, and it seems to be relatively young. The plot is good, and there are no major problems with the plot and logic. However, the battle scenes and the interaction between the two sides are still a bit uninteresting. Overall, it is surprisingly good.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a satisfying novel [crying] [crying] [crying], come on, author! Don't "die"! ! ! In addition, I noticed that the world view written by the author is very large. I asked how many thousands of words are expected to be written? [What][What][What] It's not too much to write three million words for such a huge worldview [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The plot is okay. It's been a long time since I read a story about switching between men and women.

Haokan, hurry up and let Lin Yuan merge with the mechanical beast, I want to see it [Sending Hearts]

Overall, it's okay. Well, although it's a bit awkward to say these things about acceptance, it's actually quite normal. That's my personal opinion. I hope that the protagonist can accept it a little bit as soon as possible, otherwise it will not be the same as always. Then I have an idea to find a clone for the protagonist, the kind of clone that is unconscious and completely controlled by the protagonist. At the end, you can add up to two beasts. Even daffodils are not out of the question.

Delicious, needless to say, five stars

The rest of the text is okay, but there are too many physical descriptions and psychological descriptions. When listening to the book, it sounds like AI writing.

The writing is solid and the plot is good. I've struck gold. When will the protagonist completely become a woman?

It feels a bit more routine

The first few chapters feel a bit lacking, but they get better and better as you go on.

It's fine now, don't change completely. Of course, I'll see if it changes [laughs][laughs]

It's very interesting so far, please give it a thumbs up from the author

A very nice novel, although it has a few shortcomings

Nice, but too little I'm just curious, is the heroine a human or an elf?

I really beg you, author, if you can tolerate others, this is the first Tomato book I read in the morning. I searched for it all afternoon and couldn't find it. [Crying]

It's great, the author just said it in a short way. He recommends updating it a hundred times a day [laughter]

The contrast is quite interesting, but I haven't seen any poisonous spots yet.

I almost skipped the first volume, but the second volume was okay -_-||

Very good novel, made my brain spin

Please increase your rating, it's a bit low now.

Seriously, if this novel had always been like this, the rating would probably have been higher than 9 points, but there are just too few updates.

I hope I don't completely change into a woman, but it's still fun to go back and forth.