Mortal Cultivation: at the Beginning, I Took Away the Opportunity of the Protagonist

I feel it's still okay There are requirements for five stars. I just hope that the author will keep updating and not finish the work. While proceeding step by step, the length should be as long as possible, so that it will be enjoyable to read. The most important thing is to keep changing it. Don't stop changing it just because the traffic is low. The traffic may increase later.

If they were mortals with a world view, both of them could become powerful men at the level of Dao Ancestor. It is certain that Han Lin in the future wanted to cultivate Taozu in the way of cause and effect, so he chose the protagonist to increase his winning rate. Weakening the enemy's strength makes the enemy one step further away from the Chaos Dao Ancestor. The enemy becomes weaker and we have one more Dao Ancestor on our side. As for the protagonist, it is impossible to cooperate with the enemy. The protagonist took the Han Lin small green bottle. The two enemies who want to become the Taoist of Chaos must be hostile to the protagonist @kelpkeelsoup

You can read this traditional mortal novel!

Personally I feel pretty good. However, the skills that the protagonist accidentally obtains are about cause and effect.

Yes, the author's writing style is not gorgeous but it is more plain and sophisticated. In particular, the mortals themselves are mainly described in white. The two writing styles do not conflict, and can even be said to complement each other to some extent. Thanks to the excellent quality of the chapter about mortals cultivating immortals and passing on to the human world, the perspective of watching Han Tianzun eat exhaust gas (or even soup with his head) is quite touching. I hope the author will not be discouraged by the temporary low data and write well. This article has a lot of potential!

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It looks pretty good so far

Good-looking mortal novels

The writing is good and the logic is rigorous. Although it is a fanfic of mortals, it is really interesting. Quick update. The first few pictures are not bad at all. The author writes slowly. I hope you finish them. The second volume has been written for more than 20 chapters and is still in transition. The gap between it and the first volume is too big. The characters in the first volume are well presented and portrayed, and I can type and remember them right away when I think about it now: for example, the master who doesn't care much about the protagonist and values ​​his qualifications becomes a little more pleasing to the eye later on; there are also the senior sister Wei and his senior brother from the aristocratic family and his Taoist companions; of course, there is also the son of luck who has a good impression of the protagonist, and even the senior brother Zhu from the Law Enforcement Hall are all very well portrayed. However, since the second volume appeared, there are many characters but none of them can be remembered. The chapters are written without any purpose. Wherever the protagonist goes, I don't know what chance or cultivation he has. (You can write a little bit about Chang Kao Mortal and write some emotional lines). The line with the Son of Destiny is also broken, and there is no mention of Golden Finger. It is a completely different book. . Very boring.

I like this setting very much. There is no weird villain in the face, and there are no inexplicable conflicts. You can take a look.

Han Paopao clicks your finger from outside!

Yes, it's pretty!

Some mortal style

Well written, keep up the good work

The plug-in is too small and not comfortable at all

It feels pretty good, but don't let it suck.

The writing is good, the author is talented.

It's okay, but it's too short. It's too tiring to read.

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Overall good. Keep it up. I will read 2 chapters every day. Don't write crookedly.

It's very well written. In fact, it could be more pretentious. The protagonist is very low-key and does great things.

Jindian Mortal Cultivation of Immortality series of novels, the logic of the article and the detailed description show that the author has extraordinary writing skills. This book deserves five stars!

Not bad, it's a relatively novel setting, and the writing is OK

Zhongzheng and peaceful, you can take a look [I also strongly recommend]

It's so well written and feels like a mortal. Praise!

The writing is smooth and eloquent, making it very comfortable to read. The writing is mellow and delicate, the narrative is eloquent, and it is very comfortable to read.

I personally like this kind of paced book

It's a good book, the writing and plot are good, but this rating is a bit low.

I read the last book and found it with a strange fire at the beginning. It took me a long time to write the second one [crying]

It would be better if it were more vivid, such as describing the psychology of the characters and the choices they face.