The Storybook Reader: The Hunter Starts by Rewriting the Story's Opening

I couldn't stand the first chapter, it was so confusing. When I read it, I had the feeling that only the author knows what he wrote. Maybe in your heart you know what kind of world this is, but I really can't understand it. The writing is too jumpy from my perspective, and my mind can't connect the plot at all. It is recommended to read some novels from Qidian, such as Douluo Biologist, to practice your logical thinking. At least you must present your logic completely to the readers. And writing a novel is basically equivalent to writing about characters. In my opinion, the content you wrote in the first chapter is wrong. I think a qualified novel must at least write down the complete growth experience of the protagonist. Of course, the completeness here does not necessarily have to start from birth, but at least a complete growth experience must be written out, so that people can read Readers understand the characters you write, so I suggest you start with fan fiction, don't write so many original characters, try to write one character well first, and then write more original characters. This is a step-by-step process. I recommend Douluo Biology Scholar mentioned above again. This book is worth learning. However, I haven't read the first chapter. I may be wrong in many places. I don't know you, the author. If there are any mistakes, please treat it as nonsense. At least I gave it 5 stars, so don't argue with me. There may be some irregularities or typos in the above content. I have not reviewed it carefully. If you find any, please point it out and I will reply if I see it. Finally, my opinions above are purely based on my feelings and do not contain any malice. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them.

I shamelessly gave my book five stars╯╰