[Multiple women] + [Nurture system] + [System] + [Timeline more than thirty years ago] + [Dismantle CP]
Fei Bai opened her eyes and found that she had turned into a baby.
The good news is that he has traveled to the world of "Detective Conan" and is familiar with all the plots. The bad news is, he can't even turn over now and can't do anything.
What's even more outrageous is that he became Fei Yingli's brother.
Fei Bai, the eldest son of the concubine, and the legal brother of Fei Yingli. He liked Fei Yingli quite a bit when he was watching anime in his previous life, but now he has become her brother. Forget it, let's just be a brother, it's not bad to have a younger sister.
Half a year later, his younger sister Fei Yingli was born. From that day on, Fei Bai's life completely changed. This girl only recognizes her brother and not her parents. She cries when she is hungry and makes noises when she is sleepy, but she is quiet as long as she is next to her brother. From then on, the concubine's parents lived a wonderful life in which "our son can take care of his daughter better than we can take care of ourselves".
Three years later, it was the opening day of Didan Kindergarten. The moment Fei Bai took his sister's hand and walked into the classroom, a translucent blue panel unfolded in front of his eyes——
[The sign-in system has been activated.
Reader comments
Thoughts after viewing: Then just abort [laughing evilly]
Bai's younger sister, Yingli's elder brother, love each other. In the original novel, have Eri and Mouri Kogoro known each other since childhood? [What]
There is half a year difference between the two. Does that mean the protagonists are not biologically related?
It can be seen that it has a bit of an AI feel. You can add some modal particles appropriately. Fortunately, the topic selection is relatively new.
My brother, please use less AI. This AI smell is too strong.
The chicken is really good-looking, the emotional lines are rich and delicate, numerous but not complicated, but do you want to have more female protagonists? If we create more female protagonists, we may have to immigrate, but it seems that we will definitely not immigrate, so will we create more female protagonists?
The male protagonist became Yingli's brother, which is good
Insert eye
After going to kindergarten, I looked much better than before.
There is a very strange question. There is a half-year age difference between the siblings. Logically speaking, there is a possibility that they are not biological. And some people say that the author said in the comment area that they are not biological. However, as mentioned in the previous article, their parents mentioned that Yingli's personality takes after her mother, and Bai's personality takes after her father. In this way, they are biological, so in the end?
It's a bit low, keep it.
After looking at some rating sections, this issue is the most controversial. It is obvious that the description in the previous article involves the interaction between the left and right brains. If it is not modified, there will probably be a few more people giving negative reviews because of this issue in the future.
It's quite good-looking. I didn't just go back in time and fall in love since I was a child. I didn't start killing my relatives as soon as I entered. I think it's quite good-looking, but it's just a little lacking. I finished it in one go [smile] [smile] [smile] The author understands
Not bad, not bad at all, and the main character is not his biological child. Maybe the author didn't hint clearly enough in the past, in order to avoid the mysterious master of heaven. The author can speed up the time, and there are still more updates to come! Breaking news! Breaking news! If it's not enough [please update], please don't stop updating! ! [Punch] But I think it would be better for you to directly say that the protagonist is not your biological child at the beginning of the first chapter or in the introduction. I have read that it is okay to write this way in the introduction of other books. This should attract more people.
I have read Chapter 69 so far, the pace is relatively slow and the plot is quite harmonious. (However, I skipped a lot of chapters in the middle because I like fast-paced stories and want to see the protagonist grow up)
But the most important thing is that the plot is very new (it's the first time I've seen this kind of subject anyway)
Overall, I think it's worth watching
Yes, this book has potential. Very nice
So far, it's okay. Come on, the male protagonist doesn't want a eunuch. Come on.
It can be written well. It's a slow burner and can be updated more. I've read several of the books I'm following now and only updated one or two chapters a day. I hope it can be updated faster.
Overall, it's okay and can be considered a good product, but it's too short and can be kept in a bookshelf for a while.
To what chapter will the author's chapter on children continue?
Oh, you know I'm a girly girl. It's a novel plot, it depends on the author [note]
The rare treasure in Conan is the warmth of daily life and the delicate description of emotions. It is not Shuang Wenlong's Aotian-style invincible breakthrough, but the gentleness of daily life that touches people's hearts.
It's okay [thinking] the pace could be faster. (＾ω＾)
The AI flavor is a bit strong
If the author writes 600 or 500 pictures, it is estimated that many people will come to read it. As long as the author keeps updating [eating melon]
The AI flavor is a bit strong, but the plot is okay
I wrote it to my heart. It's so cute that I can't bear to push it. But why is my sister not cute at all? Leaving envious saliva
Yingli and the protagonist are not siblings, right? Unless they are twins, there is no mention of them being the same age.
Multiple heroines? So is Mao Lilan one of the heroines? [Sinister smile]
I have read Chapter 118 so far and would like to ask the author if he plans to write Jian Yong (Nine Dragon Balls)?
Thoughts after viewing: Then just abort [laughing evilly]
Bai's younger sister, Yingli's elder brother, love each other. In the original novel, have Eri and Mouri Kogoro known each other since childhood? [What]
There is half a year difference between the two. Does that mean the protagonists are not biologically related?
It can be seen that it has a bit of an AI feel. You can add some modal particles appropriately. Fortunately, the topic selection is relatively new. My brother, please use less AI. This AI smell is too strong.
The chicken is really good-looking, the emotional lines are rich and delicate, numerous but not complicated, but do you want to have more female protagonists? If we create more female protagonists, we may have to immigrate, but it seems that we will definitely not immigrate, so will we create more female protagonists?
The male protagonist became Yingli's brother, which is good
Insert eye After going to kindergarten, I looked much better than before. There is a very strange question. There is a half-year age difference between the siblings. Logically speaking, there is a possibility that they are not biological. And some people say that the author said in the comment area that they are not biological. However, as mentioned in the previous article, their parents mentioned that Yingli's personality takes after her mother, and Bai's personality takes after her father. In this way, they are biological, so in the end? It's a bit low, keep it. After looking at some rating sections, this issue is the most controversial. It is obvious that the description in the previous article involves the interaction between the left and right brains. If it is not modified, there will probably be a few more people giving negative reviews because of this issue in the future.
It's quite good-looking. I didn't just go back in time and fall in love since I was a child. I didn't start killing my relatives as soon as I entered. I think it's quite good-looking, but it's just a little lacking. I finished it in one go [smile] [smile] [smile] The author understands
Not bad, not bad at all, and the main character is not his biological child. Maybe the author didn't hint clearly enough in the past, in order to avoid the mysterious master of heaven. The author can speed up the time, and there are still more updates to come! Breaking news! Breaking news! If it's not enough [please update], please don't stop updating! ! [Punch] But I think it would be better for you to directly say that the protagonist is not your biological child at the beginning of the first chapter or in the introduction. I have read that it is okay to write this way in the introduction of other books. This should attract more people.
I have read Chapter 69 so far, the pace is relatively slow and the plot is quite harmonious. (However, I skipped a lot of chapters in the middle because I like fast-paced stories and want to see the protagonist grow up) But the most important thing is that the plot is very new (it's the first time I've seen this kind of subject anyway) Overall, I think it's worth watching
Yes, this book has potential. Very nice
So far, it's okay. Come on, the male protagonist doesn't want a eunuch. Come on.
It can be written well. It's a slow burner and can be updated more. I've read several of the books I'm following now and only updated one or two chapters a day. I hope it can be updated faster.
Overall, it's okay and can be considered a good product, but it's too short and can be kept in a bookshelf for a while. To what chapter will the author's chapter on children continue?
Oh, you know I'm a girly girl. It's a novel plot, it depends on the author [note]
The rare treasure in Conan is the warmth of daily life and the delicate description of emotions. It is not Shuang Wenlong's Aotian-style invincible breakthrough, but the gentleness of daily life that touches people's hearts.
It's okay [thinking] the pace could be faster. (＾ω＾) The AI flavor is a bit strong
If the author writes 600 or 500 pictures, it is estimated that many people will come to read it. As long as the author keeps updating [eating melon]
The AI flavor is a bit strong, but the plot is okay
I wrote it to my heart. It's so cute that I can't bear to push it. But why is my sister not cute at all? Leaving envious saliva
Yingli and the protagonist are not siblings, right? Unless they are twins, there is no mention of them being the same age.
Multiple heroines? So is Mao Lilan one of the heroines? [Sinister smile]
I have read Chapter 118 so far and would like to ask the author if he plans to write Jian Yong (Nine Dragon Balls)?
Not bad, worth a look
Author please update soon
Pretty good, come on, come on
It's beautiful, I won't say more.
Very good, keep up the good work!
It looks good. If you like it, come and see more.
Beautifully written. Come on, come on