What If I Go Back to the Kingdom of Light with You? Teto

Tyro loved Taiga as much as Tregear. . . . . Why set up a bunch of unnecessary corpse particles? If the real Taylor was here, he would explode directly at you.

Do you know how beautiful it is? My mom, it's amazingly good-looking. It really feels very, very good. It doesn't make people feel too sharp or OOC. Anyway, it's really beautiful. My mom, I recommend everyone to go see it. It's really huge and beautiful. I can't stand it. It's really huge and beautiful. Anyway, I just said no. It comes out very nice, very consistent with Tregchia's character and design, and there is no awkward feeling. The same goes for our middle-horned cow. Anyway, I think it looks very good. I prefer watching Tregchia. The author's writing style is really great. It really looks good [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying], please give me more updates. I'll revise my tie-up. I can only say that there are some flaws, which I personally can't accept.

Whether it's Old Ford or Tomato, this is one of the top two long-running Taito fanfics I've tasted in terms of how closely the characters fit the original work. The descriptions of each character are very good, and it's super, super good-looking! The author's imagination is extraordinary, and his unique perspective on the relationship between Tregear and Grimm is truly unique. I really like this setting! ! ! The birth of Taiga is also the most unique I have ever seen. The setting and ideas are very unique, but the logic is also strangely tight and clear. I stayed up late to finish it and am looking forward to the next chapter!

Under Taito's premise, the person who has the most understanding of the role is the least OOC, and I haven't experienced such prolonged family pain for a long time. . . . The writing is very good, regardless of the writing style, character understanding, characterization or plot design. I haven't read such a beautiful article in a long time. What you can feel is the work of art carved and shaped by the author with his heart and pen. The whole article is like the pattering of night rain, which is constantly eroding. After finishing it, I quit and read the copy. The first thing I thought was, is there an ending? I look forward to an ifbe or if pseudo-be line in the future...

The writing is superb [heartfelt] All I can say about those who are noisy is that the author has corrected all the minor points. Fanfics tend to be a bit OOC to some extent, but this way the plot can be connected naturally, the background of the characters will not deviate, and even if it is biased, it will not be too biased. The writing and descriptions can also be very descriptive. After the modification, the fanfic is already considered a masterpiece. This is a novel of hundreds of thousands of words, and it is impossible for every description to completely fit everyone's Taito. Sometimes it's normal to feel that some of the clips are inconsistent when you just read them, and you can just skip them if you don't like them. However, it would be too absolute to conclude that the author does not love Taito at all. Please don't make one-sided and exaggerated judgments on the Internet, okay? It's not a loss if you invest in it [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Be patient and don't directly deny the attack completely. The work is innocent and the author's hard work. How can you not love it?

I skimmed through some short reviews and then read part of it. Let me comment on my current feeling: it is very well described and quite accurate. And the pulling feeling looks really comfortable. I think the author seems to have changed some of the controversies, so I'll wait and see when the time comes. Anyway, if it's not good, I'll change the review later. It feels good to be tied. If you say the author is abusive, look at the author's label. The female Olympics has also changed a lot and explained it. I don't know what they are still arguing about, it's inexplicable [laughs]

It's very good-looking. It's the most suitable article for me. The writing style and logic are very good. The little frog's volume actually made me feel sad and complicated. I will meet our Lord Chaos Evil God. The world is indeed chaotic gray. What is described in the article is Tregear's thinking and questions about time. Damn it, yg actually put that kind of villain shell on Tregear. Woohoo, I feel very sympathetic to Tregear. And Taro's subsequent change in personality also surprised me. It's great, Tregear. Taro is trying to understand you. He wants to be with you. It makes me soft. The first few chapters made me very sad. It turns out that the time you have been apart has been longer than the time you have been together... When I saw Taro saying that I can't keep Tregear, I just saw my fierce girl cry. Later, I saw Taro and Tregear leave to the earth. Ouch, it's so sweet. It just heals me. They stand together! ! Hahahaha, I'm a little short of words, so I'll stop here. All in all, the writing is very nice. Thank you for creating this world line for Taito. It's very delicious. The writing style and logic are very good. Bangbangbangbang [love] [grass has been planted] [bird food masterpiece] is the first book review left by 🍅. Forgive me for writing like a primary school student. I'm not very good at writing [laughing] Hahaha, I'm sorry for the typo 🙇‍♀️ It's a reflection on chaos. It's time to make it [laughing]

The least OOC Taito article I have read so far! At first I read it with the intention of giving it a try, but gradually I became immersed in the story written by the goddess. [Cry][cry] First of all, the characters: The creation of Torrechia and the adult Taylor is very easy to be OOC, but the teacher's writing is very suitable in terms of language, motivation, and psychology. Torre's joking and subconscious evasion at the beginning, and his gradual acceptance later are just like changing step by step with the plot. It's not too abrupt since he was transformed into a character; and in the early days, Taro looked like an elder who shouldered heavy responsibilities (?, Later on, after learning about Torre's past, he understood and felt sorry for him (especially the crying scene, which felt very close to Taro's hidden character). Overall, the character really fits well! Then there's the plot: What impressed me the most was the sequence where Torre had to replace the device and resonate with Grimmund. In these two paragraphs, you can feel Torre's pain and struggle, and there is also a sense of bond (with Grimmund). Ah, I can't describe the feeling in my heart. Anyway, it is a very shocking woo-woo. Then the plot of the Little Frog original by the goddess is also very good. The suspense and plot direction are unpredictable, and there is a profound sublimation. However, the ending is not so sad, but you still feel a little sad for Torre's loss in the battle. [Crying] There is also a slight sense of happiness in the small interactions between Taito, especially the part where the earth is escaping. Although we are on the run, it feels like the happiest part! (This time, Taylor has firmly sided with Torre [crying]) It's so beautiful that it's unbelievable qwq Finally, there is the writing style: Although this is the teacher's first book, his language skills are very good! The most profound thing is the description of Torre's psychology: the heartbreaking pain when replacing the device, the desire to survive due to certain factors, the fear of retreating in the face of the unknown future, the sleep of wanting to give up on oneself, and the help to the little frog because of "crazy curiosity"... It is so delicate that the goddess whimpering [crying] simply gives this character a deeper meaning, and the goddess also understands Torre very well, to the extent that she resonates with the character! ! At the end of the second volume, Taito's main plot came to an end, but they finally moved forward side by side again (with a better understanding of each other) [Crying] [Crying] Thank the goddess for allowing the two of them to stumble and find a path to be, side by side again, despite countless possible paths to be. Finished spreading flowers 🌸🌸 os: Goddess's articles are so delicious that it's hard to read other articles [crying] Looking forward to the third volume of Goddess' extras, I will always follow you [crying] [crying]

A very favorite book. I felt it was very delicately written and very immersive to read. The characters are also very three-dimensional. I actually don't understand or agree with the controversies on the Internet... I even personally think that many of them are issues of subjective understanding. Rising to boycott is really a bit…. All in all, I really liked this book. Together with the short stories I have read, it is also my favorite. I watched it very slowly and couldn't finish it in one breath. Because I don't like to follow serials (in fact, at first, I planned to wait until the end to watch it because of this. But in the end, I endured it for a week and finally came). I would be anxious waiting for the update. Then I was pleasantly surprised to find that the tie was finished. I was so happy all afternoon. It's even more perfect that after the main story is over, there are still delicious follow-ups to eat. I really like it and hope to keep writing. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

Kudos to the author [Blow a kiss], this book is really beautiful. I read through a lot of Taito's articles before I could find a few books that suited my taste. I have been following up on this book. The battle damage section written by the author is very tear-jerking, but the funny jokes also make the article less heavy and lighten the mood. Author, please don't be sad. Although I will start school tomorrow and only have one day off a week, I will keep chasing. I will not stop until the end of "The Big Brother" [sending my heart], so I will work hard to code, and I will supervise you [laughing] (because I don't often comment on books, and the language organization is not good at it, but after seeing the author's apology at the 100th chapter, I decided to post a book review)

Tied, this article can really be ranked in the TOP1 among the long articles of Taito that I have read so far! The foreshadowing, recycling, and logical description of the writing style are all very good. It is one of the fanfics I have read that is close to the original work and has no OOC situation. It is really the best, teacher, I will always follow you! ୧( ⁼̴̶̤̀ω⁼̴̶̤́ )૭

The author's writing is superb. The writing style is very good. Not only is the plot logically rigorous, but Taitu's emotional foreshadowing is also step-by-step, delicate and natural. It is simply the top 1 of all Taitu's stories I have read so far. It has already been tied. It is shocking, delicious, and explosive! ! ! The creation of each character in it is particularly close to the original character, especially Tregear, whom I like the most. The author has greatly and accurately created his unique charm and core. The relationship between Tregchia and Grimd in the article has also risen to an unprecedented level (very innovative and unique depth). The description of Ximeng CP is also particularly brilliant. Originally, I had no feelings for them, but your writing is so great, teacher. I even hope that the author can create Ximeng's story alone.

So far, the plot and character descriptions are acceptable, and the writing is still very good. I hope the ending is he [crying], come on! Great author!

How could this happen? I like this book very much. Please don't take it off the shelf, okay? [Crying][crying]

It's been a few days since August 8th. I got to know the author first before posting on Lightning Protection. Everyone has their own opinions on OOC, and the author has even made changes to some parts of the book that everyone found frustrating. Those who don't like it may not like Ren Jiu. This is normal. Book friends who think they can read it again and feel that Ren has any areas worth revising can discuss it with the author. The author is making a fan, and there is basically no profit. Those readers who say they write long reviews are paid by the trolls. I don't know what's wrong with you, and you are so weird that readers are attracted to it. . .

The author updates thousands of words every day. I read it every night and I feel so full that I almost cry. The plot is also very smooth and the characters are not OOC. In fact, if you don't like the more controversial parts, just avoid them. There is no need to argue.

I still prefer the teacher's writing, and the character creation is relatively good. It's pretty good among the many fanfics I've read. Recently, I also came across some controversial aspects of this article. I suggest that the teacher add a tag later, or make slight changes. Everyone creates fan creations out of love. If there are any ambiguities or points, you can explain them instead of posting them online. Everyone has different ideas, and their understanding of characters and plots is also different. I hope everyone can find a story that suits their taste [Sending Hearts]

This book is very good-looking, and the characters are also very in line with my wishes. I was a bit picky about the Tatto novels before, and I didn't like the weird feeling described in Tore. But this book, the first review I wrote, was so good. Keep up the good work. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

I am very satisfied with this article. I really appreciate this article. How do you know what I want to read? The plot is well developed and exciting, and the writing is passable. It is not OOC at all, does not follow the flow, and does not talk nonsense. The score is 99. The 1 point difference is why you came out so late. It is not enough.

Why are you so beautiful? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Teacher, you are so great. Oh my god, the story is so well written. Why are you so beautiful? Teacher, you are so great. Oh my god, Taito is amazing because of you, a miracle!!!!!!!!! Come and show me this, all of you! Everyone came to see my fairy wife's masterpiece!!! It's super beautiful. The writing of the unit chapters in the second volume is much better than Tsuburaya. It's like watching another episode of TV. Each chapter has tens of thousands of words. Where can I find such a good life? [Cry]

It's super good-looking, there are foreshadowings, and the characters' personalities are totally spot on! Tetohimeng can be eaten with confidence! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

I really can't tell you how good this book is. I can only say that after reading this book, I can't stand Taito's sweet novel anymore😭😭😭😭😭 I lost so completely... Tai Tuo girl, please avoid lightning by yourself, just look at plq and you will understand.

Absolutely, the best article in all the fandoms I have read. The characters are almost completely non-ooc, and the author's own novel creativity, such as the origin of Taiga and the creation of this villain, and a unique understanding of the relationship between Tregear and Grimmud. It can be called a must-read list of Taito fan fiction. I support it with both hands and feet (´∀｀)σ

I have been seriously following the updates. The writing is very personal and the update speed is very stable. My favorite is the time when Taito was on the earth. The two people lived together every day and it was very warm. The interaction was very loving. I burst into tears. When I saw the family property so sweet, my first reaction was that I wanted to cry [almost crying]. If I remember correctly, this should be he? At present, it seems that the two people are communicating with each other. Taylor is changing and Tregchia is also willing to stay. I feel that there is a high possibility of him [shy] Come on, author! I don't know why there are so many people suddenly complaining about this book. I remember that the popularity of this book has always been lukewarm. The following are all personal opinions. Regarding Taiga's mother, that female Austrian, although I don't quite understand why Taiga was given a mother (because Tsuburaya didn't set a mother for Taiga, I don't think it had any impact, so I was a bit confused when I saw a mother here). However, in the article, Taro and the female Austrian did not have close physical contact, and the two were not in a romantic relationship. I didn't pay much attention to this part. Maybe everyone's level of mysophobia is different. I am the type of Taiga who will not expose or resist mysophobia. But in my heart, I feel that Taro As long as Tregear and the two of them don't have anyone other than each other emotionally and physically, it's fine. Then about the abuse of Tregear, the author is Torrekia. I hate Toregear. The author has replied that his xp is battle damage. I can't comment on my personal xp. I can only say that I can't say this about self-protection and that annoying little frog. Tregear also retaliated against it later. I think the author's Tregear is okay. I didn't see that the character was black or something... Then there is the OOC thing. I think everyone has a different understanding of the character. In my opinion, this article is not particularly OOC. There is no serious character stereotype. It does not say that Tregchia is written as a soft and cute wife, and Taro is written as a gloomy and yandere. Thousand People and Thousand Flavors. If this one doesn't suit your taste, just change it to another one. If it doesn't suit your taste, you can produce it yourself. If you think this character was written in an OOC place, you can express your opinion instead of insulting the author and leading to online violence. I hope everyone can exchange their thoughts in a friendly manner. After all, the reason for reading this article is to eat, not to quarrel. Finally, regarding the author's speech, I personally think that there are indeed problems in some of the author's speeches. For example, in the original work, Taro got married and had children. Neither Higashi Kotaro nor Taro married a wife. Taiga's birth was not officially described in detail. There is also the reason for Tregear's darkening. I think Tregear left because it was contrary to Taro's philosophy. Hikari's darkening, killing Snark and many other things served as triggers, plus he himself had doubts about light and darkness. It is not a simple statement about Taro getting married and having children. So he went crazy. It can be summed up. Taro is not married, and Tregear will not turn black just because he is jealous. I'm really happy to see my favorite book and author being discovered by so many people. I'm also a little sad about the abusive remarks. I hope the author just misremembered the original plot and clarified all the "melons" that have been posted on the Internet.

Personally, I think the control of the character's character is relatively good. I may understand that some people think it's a bit off, but I think it's okay. However, the description does cause ambiguity, such as Taiga's life experience and another woman who participated in Taiga's upbringing, Ao.

The whole army repeats! Boys are average, girls are average. Only Tregear-sama has fair skin with no blemishes. Her contour lines are not deep and can give people a sharp and glamorous visual effect, but are gentle and soft. Tregear-sama does not smile most of the time. Reflecting her own cold temperament, it is easy to give people a sense of distance. Lord Tregear smiled, his smile not reaching his eyes, his demeanor elegant but with a sense of alienation. Master Tregear's voice is very clear, like the melted snow water on the top of the snow-capped mountains in Tibet, with a slight coldness even though it is pure!

I can only say that after reading the teacher's book, I felt that my body was warm and comfortable, and the tumor in my body began to slowly jump. All in all, it is very good-looking, not OOC, nor many stereotypes. The young couple is also very sweet, but there is a little bit of abuse in the front. Finally, I say the important things three times, thank the teacher for the wonderful rejuvenation, thank the teacher for the wonderful rejuvenation, thank the teacher for the wonderful rejuvenation. (As I write this, I find that my narrative is a little unclear, due to my thunderous language system)

It's super pretty, and it fits the character so well! ! ! Exactly the Taito I remember! There will be a little bit of abuse and the knife will cry, but the ending is he. The teacher is simply my goddess, her writing is super beautiful! The world has the same goal but different paths, and the same goal leads to hundreds of concerns. Even if there are hiccups in the middle, in the end, it's still you and me. Although there is so much distance between you and you cannot go back to the past, you will always have a future. So, please stay happy! Hold each other's hand and move towards the future! You should be happy long ago

He is simply the love letter of my dreams. He is the most reasonable and least OOC person I have ever seen. His character is very full. I love him so much. He is so good to watch. I love watching it the most. Woohoo, the little couple finally kissed. The author's writing is really beautiful, the characters are consistent, and the deputy CP is also sweet. I will keep reading your writing [Adoration]

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. Every character is in line with the original version and not OOC at all, it's so cool——! ! ! After reading so many Ultra fanfics, this is a book with a very high level of character restoration! The plot is also fascinating! All in all very good!