Why Is the Girlfriend I Bought with Money Pretending to Be Real?

The emotional scenes are wonderful and the plot is smooth. There are no surprises, but there are a few depressing points: 1. Bai's early setting is to be a companion, and he will have physical contact with the guests, including massage, knee pillow, and ear picking. 2. Bai was stared at by men when he was soaking in a hot spring in a swimsuit, and had his legs hugged by other men in the hospital. 3. Lin has a boyfriend, and they have a true relationship, so they separated only out of necessity. That's all I can think of for now. The third point is difficult to change. If the author can modify the first two points and reduce the physical contact between the heroine and other men, I believe the results will be better. Finally, this should be a harem with multiple heroines, not stock trading [smile]

The plot is very novel, and it is rare to see a male protagonist with such a low emotional bottom line. At present, this kind of flawed setting of female protagonists is also very rare in Tomato. For me, this level of flawed setting makes me feel very real, or at least interesting in terms of plot development. Some chapters also have one or two sentences or a paragraph that are very bright and outstanding. Brothers with medium defense will find it interesting to read it, but those who pursue an absolutely pure and perfect heroine may find it uncomfortable to read. At least it's pretty good for my radio waves now However, the development of the subsequent plot will also test the author's skill. If the writing is not done well, it is likely to create a big surprise or poisonous point. The settings of the heroines are indeed not that flattering on Tomato.

Shen Nong is here to review it. I have read over a hundred of the latest chapters in one go. This book is generally good. The plot is not too cliched and has some innovations. The emotional line is well written and has concrete progress. It is not as perfunctory as other tomatoes. There are some setting problems. If the author changes these settings, it will definitely be more than 7 points. It will definitely go up to 8.5. The early setting of the system is too outrageous. It would be too embarrassing to directly erase it. Accepting someone, there is no choice at all. Later Bai Laizhang has a second choice, which is okay, but this may dissuade some people in the early stage. Then in terms of character design, the male protagonist is very good, knowing that he is rational and decisive, but the early stage setting of the female protagonist is not good. I still don't know what the motivation is for being a fake socialite for nothing. She is accompanying an uncle and using money to support poor students, so it is just vanity? There is no logic and the character is destined not to be completely clean. Although it is emphasized that it is the first kiss or something, holding hands and holding hands and shouting twice will definitely be unavoidable and will dissuade many people with psychological mysophobia. Then Lin is the biggest setting problem. The childhood sweethearts who are in love are forced to separate, and the protagonist takes the opportunity to accept it. People with a little emotional mysophobia can't stand it. If the setting is changed, it will definitely be a good book.

It's really good. I've watched many similar ones but none of them are as good as this one. The classic bloody plot can be written so well. The author is really great. I rarely comment on Tomato. Thank you for the author. If you keep this quality, you will definitely shine.

The author's writing is very good, except for the only poisonous point which is the system (although I know this is necessary for plot development, it is too harsh on the protagonist, but if you think about it carefully, there would be no relationship with Lin without this system). If you can tolerate this poisonous point, the development of the plot and the creation of characters are both above the level of the same genre. (In fact, I really hope that the author will finish this book and write a similar one in the next one, but the system will not be like this. Because I almost gave up in the early stage, but luckily I can see to the end.) And now is the key moment of the plot, I hope that this Shura field can be written better.

It's quite good to watch, and the plot is also good. I'm used to the plot of using money to find someone who is sincere and then giving up. How can anyone fall in love without the daily companionship [Note][Note]

It's a very interesting harem story. My favorite heroine is Lin Yi. Although I still think that some of Lin Yi's settings are failures, but overall the flaws are not concealed. Lin Yan's character design after recovery is even more amazing. This kind of humble girl who uses her brains to compete for position is really touching.

It's well written. After reading 100 chapters, I even feel that the author has evolved [like] It's getting better and better. The description of emotions is very good except that the name Li Guanqi seems too dramatic. This is my problem [face covering] He boasted 150 chapters too early and then resorted to a classic way of writing [face covering] The very classic author of pretending to be a boyfriend has degenerated again. The first female protagonist with a (real) love line actually has the courage to commit suicide. A person who has just started dating actually agrees to such a request. No matter where you look at it, the character is ruined. It is appropriate for you to introduce the senior sister from other places who need to pretend to be a boyfriend. However, this line is introduced from the beginning of the heroine's first love [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical]

Each character is well described and has a character arc. The protagonist has a good three-dimensional perspective that I have rarely seen. The only thing is that the system's mission punishment may be a bit cruel, but it is also to promote the plot. Anyway, pretty good

The emotional line is particularly smooth. To be honest, at first I felt that the male protagonist's dialogue was not very good, especially in the opening missions. But then I thought about it, it's not like I have the modeling and finances [face covering], so it's really a shame. The emotional line between Bai and Lin is still very touching [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]. Looking forward to more daily life, just two or three female protagonists. Too much can easily lead to loss of soul [Thinking]

The author is very good, and the emotions are very delicate. Is the author a girl? Very nice to look at. (The description alone is very good) I read in the comments that there are only 2 female protagonists? Are there no Li Guanqi and Lin Yan? Looking at the 4 paragraphs of the introduction, there are exactly 2 sentences describing each person, so are there really 2 of them? The book is very good. I read it in one sitting. It's good in every aspect. I finally found gold. There are just a few problems for me. Lin has a boyfriend who likes each other, and we did everything a couple should do... We had to separate because of my sister's illness, but there was still a bit of a estrangement... But it was okay for me. The scene where Bai and the protagonist express their love for each other is very touching (so the author is really not a girl?) But overall, it seems that this relationship is a natural and natural relationship, and I feel that there is no deep memory point (maybe the protagonist is portrayed more powerfully, and all the villains are kicked to death?) Looking forward to the next development [shy]

I have read about a hundred chapters. Advantages: The writing is very delicate and the plot development is also attractive. Disadvantages: The system tasks are quite disgusting; the male protagonist who acts as a hero is actually a slave to the system; the two heroines currently appearing (I don't know if there will be more in the future) appear pitiful and humble in different aspects. After one hundred chapters, the plot has a tendency to develop towards positive energy.

The ideal college life based on the supremacy of strength and love under the brain system, the characters have behavioral logic, the men are handsome and the women are beautiful, and the IQ and EQ are online. The pages of the book, the past events, laughter and curses, love and hatred, madness, intrigues, double-dealing, sweet words and swords, sincerity and purity, chasing dreams, ignorance and fearlessness - a tribute to the ivory tower years we have passed through with high spirits.

Update quickly. I really beg you. If you can, don't write too much about the female protagonist. The male protagonist and Bai skipping classes and going out on dates look very comfortable. I personally like Bai's characterization. I hope the author can write more about the daily life with the female protagonist. The main story can be pushed slowly. Bai's plot can be written more [Please update][Please update]

Personally, I like Lin Yi more than Bai at the moment. One is because of his fake socialite persona, and the other is that I always feel that the relationship with Bai is progressing a bit too fast. It feels like falling in love all of a sudden and not enough foreshadowing. Although Lin Yi also has the problem of making friends, Lin Yi's The character design is much fuller, Lin Yi is very smart, and the situation of the protagonist should have been guessed. When Lin Yi said I want to protect you, it really touched me. In addition to Lin Yi, which I like more, I am also looking forward to the plot of the little mute. I don't know how the author will write it.

It's quite good-looking, there's nothing sinister about it, the plot is reasonable, and the character design is quite logical. It would be great if there were pictures. Author, go and learn how to use good pictures [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

After reading it, I feel that the design of Lin's emotional line is quite interesting. Lin's performance is quite lively despite a lot of conflicts. The disadvantages are there, that is, there are quite a few patches, which makes it look quite impressive at first glance. But this kind of starting thunder setting and later using pen and ink to supplement the leveling is actually quite attractive to me. Anyway, let's divide them up.

The logic and writing are all online. It seems that there are three female protagonists at present, which is quite good. Don't have too many female protagonists, no more than 5 at most. However, system tasks are mandatory. Some people may think that the author uses the system to develop the plot. I don't really care about this. As long as the writing is good, in fact, it is an excellent novel regardless of whether the system accounts for a large proportion.

It's very good. The author's handling of many details is super realistic and in place. I finished the chase in one night. When I finished the chase, it was already 6:22 in the morning. I went. It's beautiful, I won't say much, just come and take a look.

This book is well written so far. Although it is reborn, it has always been an adult's thinking. It is self-interested and purposeful. It is in line with a normal adult's thinking to worry about things that have nothing to do with oneself. The unimportant supporting characters have no forced dialogue. I haven't read the previous book. The update is too slow. I originally planned to read it. It seems to be unfinished, right? Give the author some encouragement and stop screwing up again, come on!

It is highly recommended. It is the best novel I have ever read. The author describes scale, characterization and love very well. Although the system is scummy, the protagonist is still a pure love god of war. ๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘

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Give me a good review, it can be said that it is very good-looking. I am following the update and the score is not low. It is not a brainless system article. The system only advances the plot. It is very good-looking. I have given you good reviews. Should I add a hundred and eighty chapters to add to the fun? [Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile] There are already three female protagonists. The introduction of the three female protagonists is a bit inaccurate. I guess there should be four of them.

To be honest, I have to lay the groundwork in the beginning. It feels good starting from about chapter 80. I saw that there was only one mission failure in more than 100 chapters (that is a bit hard to accept), but the later part is really good. The author should update it soon! ! !

The plot is very novel, and it is rare to see a male protagonist with such a low emotional bottom line. At present, this kind of flawed setting of female protagonists is also very rare in Tomato. For me, this level of flawed setting makes me feel very real, or at least interesting in terms of plot development. Some chapters also have one or two sentences or a paragraph that are very bright and outstanding. Brothers with medium defense will find it interesting to read it, but those who pursue an absolutely pure and perfect heroine may find it uncomfortable to read. At least it's pretty good for my radio waves now However, the development of the subsequent plot will also test the author's skill. If the writing is not done well, it is likely to create a big surprise or poisonous point. The settings of the heroines are indeed not that flattering on Tomato.

I've read a hundred chapters, and I'd like to give you a rough outline of the book for new bookworms. It's a golden finger of a time-travel system, and inside it's a sweet daily routine of love, interspersed with some little bits of bad taste [shy]

It was well written and I found it quite interesting. Next, I will give some suggestions to the author, or my opinions. First of all, this is definitely a novel with multiple female protagonists. Secondly, I feel like the character of the protagonist is. The difference between the two before and after is quite big, especially the first time when he got along with the school beauty, he was more cynical. Later, when he came into contact with Lin Yi, he felt all kinds of reserved. It was well written and I found it quite interesting. Next, I will give some suggestions to the author, or my opinions. First of all, this is definitely a novel with multiple female protagonists. Secondly, I feel that the protagonist's personality is quite different between the two, especially the first one when he got along with the school beauty, which was more cynical. When I came into contact with Lin Yi later, I felt all kinds of cautious. This kind of protagonist is a gentleman, but because of the system, he has to make an elaborate plot or setting, which is quite good. Hope the final ending can be better.

Bai Xun'er, who was portrayed first, is very sweet, a little crybaby who gets angry, but she still has her spirit. She has transformed from a transaction into a normal relationship. Lin Yi also accepted the deal. He didn't see the turning point yet, but this kind of cold reaction was the best. The little mute hasn't described it in detail yet, it should be nine points of beauty. I read it in one go, it's so short~~~~

Although the plot advancement depends on the system, it does not affect the storytelling and the narrative is well done. Maybe the progress of the male protagonist and the female protagonist has been very slow so far, which is not good in the eyes of some readers, but to me, a male protagonist who may have pure love (leaving aside the system) is more approachable. The character descriptions are all vivid and vivid.

As long as you don't give away your daughter, qcqs is a sacred book. The current Bai Lin sisters and President Shen. Gu Xiaoyue and An Lanlan and Li Guanqi don't know what's going on. If it's a harem, write about it. If not, just skip it. The emotional drama is written with great detail, but it is not the kind of care that a woman would complain about, but the kind that can be felt by an outsider reader. Keep it up, there are too few updates Don't try to do anything that is not consistent with reality. Sisters Bai, Lin, Shen, Li Guanqi, An and Gu, don't miss it, stock trading will not compromise your character.