Why Are All the Girlfriends I Paid for Taking the Pretend Romance Seriously?

The emotional scenes are wonderful and the plot is smooth. There are no surprises, but there are a few depressing points: 1. Bai's early setting is to be a companion, and he will have physical contact with the guests, including massage, knee pillow, and ear picking. 2. Bai was stared at by men when he was soaking in a hot spring in a swimsuit, and had his legs hugged by other men in the hospital. 3. Lin has a boyfriend, and they have a true relationship, so they separated only out of necessity. That's all I can think of for now. The third point is difficult to change. If the author can modify the first two points and reduce the physical contact between the heroine and other men, I believe the results will be better. Finally, this should be a harem with multiple heroines, not stock trading [smile]

It's quite good to watch, and the plot is also good. I'm used to the plot of using money to find someone who is sincere and then giving up. How can anyone fall in love without the daily companionship [Note][Note]

It's beautiful, I especially like the character Lin Yi. As an aside, the description of Lin Yi in the book made me always imagine my face to be like Mo Ning in Ming Chao. I don't know why, but I feel that it fits [face covering] (personal opinion). When will the author release the final update [smile]

The author is very good, and the emotions are very delicate. Is the author a girl? Very nice to look at. (The description alone is very good) I read in the comments that there are only 2 female protagonists? Are there no Li Guanqi and Lin Yan? Looking at the 4 paragraphs of the introduction, there are exactly 2 sentences describing each person, so are there really 2 of them? The book is very good. I read it in one sitting. It's good in every aspect. I finally found gold. There are just a few problems for me. Lin has a boyfriend who likes each other, and we did everything a couple should do... We had to separate because of my sister's illness, but there was still a bit of a estrangement... But it was okay for me. The scene where Bai and the protagonist express their love for each other is very touching (so the author is really not a girl?) But overall, it seems that this relationship is a natural and natural relationship, and I feel that there is no deep memory point (maybe the protagonist is portrayed more powerfully, and all the villains are kicked to death?) Looking forward to the next development [shy]

Shen Nong is here to review it. I have read over a hundred of the latest chapters in one go. This book is generally good. The plot is not too cliched and has some innovations. The emotional line is well written and has concrete progress. It is not as perfunctory as other tomatoes. There are some setting problems. If the author changes these settings, it will definitely be more than 7 points. It will definitely go up to 8.5. The early setting of the system is too outrageous. It would be too embarrassing to directly erase it. Accepting someone, there is no choice at all. Later Bai Laizhang has a second choice, which is okay, but this may dissuade some people in the early stage. Then in terms of character design, the male protagonist is very good, knowing that he is rational and decisive, but the early stage setting of the female protagonist is not good. I still don't know what the motivation is for being a fake socialite for nothing. She is accompanying an uncle and using money to support poor students, so it is just vanity? There is no logic and the character is destined not to be completely clean. Although it is emphasized that it is the first kiss or something, holding hands and holding hands and shouting twice will definitely be unavoidable and will dissuade many people with psychological mysophobia. Then Lin is the biggest setting problem. The childhood sweethearts who are in love are forced to separate, and the protagonist takes the opportunity to accept it. People with a little emotional mysophobia can't stand it. If the setting is changed, it will definitely be a good book.

It's a very interesting harem story. My favorite heroine is Lin Yi. Although I still think that some of Lin Yi's settings are failures, but overall the flaws are not concealed. Lin Yan's character design after recovery is even more amazing. This kind of humble girl who uses her brains to compete for position is really touching.

It's well written. After reading 100 chapters, I even feel that the author has evolved [like] It's getting better and better. The description of emotions is very good except that the name Li Guanqi seems too dramatic. This is my problem [face covering] He boasted 150 chapters too early and then resorted to a classic way of writing [face covering] The very classic author of pretending to be a boyfriend has degenerated again. The first female protagonist with a (real) love line actually has the courage to commit suicide. A person who has just started dating actually agrees to such a request. No matter where you look at it, the character is ruined. It is appropriate for you to introduce the senior sister from other places who need to pretend to be a boyfriend. However, this line is introduced from the beginning of the heroine's first love [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical]

The plot is very novel, and it is rare to see a male protagonist with such a low emotional bottom line. At present, this kind of flawed setting of female protagonists is also very rare in Tomato. For me, this level of flawed setting makes me feel very real, or at least interesting in terms of plot development. Some chapters also have one or two sentences or a paragraph that are very bright and outstanding. Brothers with medium defense will find it interesting to read it, but those who pursue an absolutely pure and perfect heroine may find it uncomfortable to read. At least it's pretty good for my radio waves now However, the development of the subsequent plot will also test the author's skill. If the writing is not done well, it is likely to create a big surprise or poisonous point. The settings of the heroines are indeed not that flattering on Tomato.

It's really good. I've watched many similar ones but none of them are as good as this one. The classic bloody plot can be written so well. The author is really great. I rarely comment on Tomato. Thank you for the author. If you keep this quality, you will definitely shine.

There are some minor exceptions, for example, Girl 1 has raised fish, and Girl 2 has had a boyfriend. The author of the record has made changes and explanations, and it looks pretty good. The advantage is that the protagonist is so in line with normal human values ​​that most things are the choices and actions of normal people, and the sense of substitution is better. At the same time, the other characters are not mentally retarded and do not open their eyes like lobsters. [Awkward laugh] I've read Two Million Words next door, and I'm still holding back on my underground love affair, and I'm using my elder sister as a mentally retarded persona. I've also read One Million Words, and I'm still pretending to be this way and that, but I haven't solved my knot yet. I feel a lot better after reading this book. In addition, the writing style is good, there is no obvious trace of AI in the plot development, and there is no boring detailed description of AI water injection in the writing.