It’s Fine, I Just Became the Scabbard of a Yandere Little Sister

Not bad, give it 4 points first. So let me talk about the main issues. First, it is not clear whether it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. This will cause readers who want to watch a single female protagonist to give up when they see that there seem to be many female supporting characters. Or readers who want to see more female protagonists may give up when they see that there is no progress. Second, although the article depicts the saint-like image of the protagonist in the early stage, it does not tell whether it is his own choice or the choice given in the simulation cabin. This will create a sense of fragmentation in the protagonist's image later on. It makes people wonder, are they really the same person? For example, the technique of balancing demonic energy and spiritual energy, how did this happen? Curiosity and confusion Basic questions, that's all I've found so far. If you put your head aside, it actually looks pretty good. (However, I prefer the idea of ​​​​acting for the characters myself and thinking about what choices they will make to suit their current situation and identity)

The author doesn't post single or multiple girls [smiles] and gives four stars as punishment [laughs crookedly] In fact, I'm actually quite afraid that the single female protagonist Chang Ning will be swallowed by other female protagonists 🙂 👍 [laugh awkwardly]

Come on, author, please try to stop the protagonist from getting upset at every turn in the follow-up. In fact, I have several opinions about Lu Wang: Well, to make a long story short, you can write that the heroine killed Lu Wang with her own hands, and then held up his head to apologize. Well, then you can write about the daily life of the protagonist and the heroine. I think in the end I can write about the heroine breaking the barriers and entering the protagonist's world... Of course, this is my personal opinion... So come on, author! 😏😏

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It is undoubtedly a good book, with a compact plot and lots of laughs, but the speed is too fast. However, the shortcoming is that the plot could be more compact. Some places are still a bit protracted and lengthy. For example, the memories and Yuan's place actually took several chapters to just recall.

Not bad is good. But the protagonist is too tight. And obviously not like a normal person. Maybe for me. Click to give 10,000. 100 Clicks a day is 1 million. After 100 strokes. Just click and get 100 yuan. The first 100 times will leave no memory for the next time. Only the next 100 times are available. For me, just a few clicks of money may be enough. Pretty much the protagonist anyway. I have so much money and I don't know what it's for, so I just keep pressing it. Then in it, the protagonist is tortured and killed by the so-called heroine every time. It's almost equivalent to 100 ways for the protagonist to die. The main reason is that when I read Tomato, I just read cool articles. Ah, I am average, maybe I won't rate this book too high in the future. But the guarantee may also be triggered. Overall, the protagonist is finished.

The settings are quite interesting, very similar to a Douyin video I watched. It seems to say that if you get 100 million, you will stay in it for tens of thousands of years, but when you come out, you will forget everything. I actually couldn't accept it when I saw Yang Substitute, because I have always felt that there is no difference in shades of green. I really don't understand why the previous good literature had to be a substitute.

The pace is good, and there are indeed very few realistic plots. Compared with those realistic plots that have long been written badly by urban literature, I still prefer yandere 😄 Author, please don't stop updating. I have recently seen a lot of new books with amazing beginnings, but they abandoned them after dozens of chapters. I hope the author can continue to update. The pace of this book is indeed a bit fast. I also looked at the author's other novels. This one won't need more than a hundred chapters to be completed [Petrochemical]

It's good, but can the protagonist cultivate immortality? It's a bit frustrating. It's better to turn it into a combination of paradise and ghost in the later stage.

Nice~ What I love most about this kind of archive is that the yandere inherits the memory, and the action taken from the love from the heart is the most fascinating. I hope you can read it later. After reading other book reviews, I didn't really feel much about it. Lu Wang's part was really baffling, and I didn't feel cheated or anything. What I am dissatisfied with is that this innovation is too uncomfortable. The protagonist's external and internal memories are not synchronized. How long will this last... Also, it feels like the protagonist will suddenly disconnect and cut off the film. What should I do? What I want to watch is pure love instead of torturing the audience.