[No-Brainer] [Feel-Good] [Face-Slapping] [Comedy] [No System] [Passionate]
(Just started posting, so the rating will rise.)
Guys, who else can relate? The biggest surprise of my life and my most humiliating moment both hit me on the same day!
My dad remarried and brought home a beautiful younger sister. Lin Mo thought his happy life had finally begun.
But on the very first day they lived together, he spectacularly messed up and completely offended his new sister.
He thought it was just an awkward situation, but then he unexpectedly discovered that she was hiding an earth-shattering secret and was no ordinary person.
Their sibling relationship starts at -100 points.
Guys, is there any hope for me?
After a quick glance, I found that the subject matter is indeed attractive, and the beginning is indeed shocking, but the writing is still weak. Although the story unfolds, the rhythm is not well controlled, and the transition is a bit fast. It is a good beginning for a novice. If you continue writing without getting thunderous, you should be able to get a score of more than 7 points. Come on.
Author, you've done a great job. I know you won't care about these small comments when you become famous, but I hope to support you before you become famous. You have to know that there are many people who like your works. Don't give up!
It's great. The protagonist's secrets are revealed layer by layer, but there is always suspense. The control is very good, no worse than other books.
The author's writing is really good. Maybe there is something wrong with the title or cover of the book. You must stick to it 😢
Why is no one reading such a good book?
The disclaimer at the beginning has said it all. If you can do it, do it. If you can't do it, just run away.
The smart guy is here, the free and easy guy is here
I'll give it a five-point rating first to support it, and I'll review it later after watching the plot.
It's okay. Keep writing. 8. There should be a few.
One Punch Man