At the Beginning, the Dragon Clan Sister Was so Angry That Her True Colors Were Revealed.

After a quick glance, I found that the subject matter is indeed attractive, and the beginning is indeed shocking, but the writing is still weak. Although the story unfolds, the rhythm is not well controlled, and the transition is a bit fast. It is a good beginning for a novice. If you continue writing without getting thunderous, you should be able to get a score of more than 7 points. Come on.

Author, you've done a great job. I know you won't care about these small comments when you become famous, but I hope to support you before you become famous. You have to know that there are many people who like your works. Don't give up!

It's okay. Keep writing. 8. There should be a few.

Why is no one reading such a good book?

The disclaimer at the beginning has said it all. If you can do it, do it. If you can't do it, just run away.

The smart guy is here, the free and easy guy is here

I'll give it a five-point rating first to support it, and I'll review it later after watching the plot.

The author's writing is really good. Maybe there is something wrong with the title or cover of the book. You must stick to it [crying]

It's great. The protagonist's secrets are revealed layer by layer, but there is always suspense. The control is very good, no worse than other books.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This is the real invincible flow [laughter]

Interesting, opening lightning strike

Is it an old girl with a single heroine?

One Punch Man

The male protagonist is on the roadside. Not strong enough.