Start with a Blacksmith and Go Out to Pick up a Female Knight.

Good-looking, love to watch, good to kowtow [learned]

At present, it seems to be very satisfying. The male and female protagonists attack each other directly. The female protagonist will not be too crazy like the poorly written yanderes nowadays, but she has enough protection and the gravity expansion will not be too suffocating. The male protagonist is responsible, not submissive, and has a strong protective mentality. At present, the hook has not been opened very much. If the data is good enough, it can pave the way for a lot. The world view is medium, and the legal and other social constraints and social violence institutions currently have little sense of existence, and it is more of a game integration type. There is one thing, the author, you have figured it out, don't use the knife. Sister (although I am already receiving treatment), I am feeling a little stressed now.

It can be seen that the author really likes kittens, meow~ When the author writes about sadness, he seems to have become wise.

It's good-looking, the characters are well drawn, Yue'er and her sister are both good girls.

Having more female protagonists is a good civilization, please update quickly

It's very good. I don't see any problems at the moment. It's just that it's too short and not enough to read. Please add more.

Didn't you write that you are not a mechanic? Why did you build cold weapons at the beginning?

Update, can you update 50 times a day? The author [sends my heart]

It's great to read. The author will update more frequently.

The writing is good, good luck to the author

I don't understand why a day's turnover of several million should be sold to Su for 20% of the profit for one million. . . .

It's okay to have a clear idea, but there are too many descriptions in some places, which is a bit too much, and it's a bit embarrassing. Don't describe it deliberately for the sake of description. Five stars is okay, and I will continue to read your follow-up content.

Is my sister a relative? [Thinking]

Good luck to the author!

It looks good so far.

Looks good, I hope it will be updated in the future

Good, good, good

It's quite good, but the words are a little short now.

World background and world view always feel like there is a missing piece

You are already a mechanic, so just use explosives as omnipotence. What are you doing with a small pistol? Come up with a blueprint to build a production line (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) [Laughter]

Potential new book, please support the author [laughs]

Overall it's ok, more to my taste

It's good to watch, but the main character is a bit too miserable and is always targeted.

Good review! At least it seems to be well written so far!

The content is rich and interesting, and the writing is also very good. Recommended

It looks good, the female lead is great, it would be better if the male lead took the initiative

Goldfinger doesn't steal the show, but it's pretty good to watch. The plot is online

The chapters I've read so far are pretty good, and the content is quite interesting.

There are a lot of things to enjoy and watch, so be sure to see it to the end. The protagonist's relationship is maintained well. And being invincible is very reasonable. No discomfort was caused.