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I am a new author, hoping to write some interesting stories. There are inevitably some deficiencies in experience, such as the rhythm of writing, the speed of the main line, and plot design, which all require the accumulation of knowledge and experience. Therefore, the first book is prepared as a training book, trying not to focus on grades and focusing on persistence in learning. As long as there are still readers reading it, we will work hard to update it. —— The little nun is so cute, how can you blame me for abusing the master. It's normal for the early bumps to create difficulties, but things will get better and better later on, trust me.

The current progress is 71 chapters, which is worth reading. The protagonist, the Virgin, is also "slow-minded" and often says, "Let me see what's going on." But I say this is actually a bit more satisfying. Although it is quite satisfying to be underestimated and slapped in the face because of your appearance and acting style, it is not as good as being a saint among human beings, denying the rules of cannibalism, and applying the current joke, "This is the most proud thing." When I read it, I felt that this book was "very calm". No matter whether the protagonist is in crisis or the protagonist wins big, the protagonist's attitude and my mood as an audience are very calm. This is actually not a shortcoming, I think it is a style. There are well-thought-out settings, not random ones. I have won too many games and it looks pretty. There may be readers like me who don't like the world in the work to look too small. I think this size does not mean the area of ​​the world in the literal sense, but how broad and detailed the author's thinking about the setting is.

Full marks for value proposition I personally like the protagonist who has the core socialist values engraved in his heart It's okay to set the background The description of life at the lowest level, including church docks, gangs, workers, etc. Is quite detailed. The portrayal of the protagonist is a bit stiff The protagonist seems very calm in the early stage, and can easily break through various counter-routines. It is still possible to watch the protagonist as a fearless saint. I can also understand it as personal growth. Anyway, it's a good book [laughs]

The surprise is good, although the plot twist is a bit abrupt, but overall there are many interesting things to watch and it can attract people. Even if the protagonist is a pure Madonna, it's not bad. This kind of non-template Madonna is easier to create a three-dimensional character. It's just that the current market has more market than Madonna. Not to mention that the protagonist of this article will be deflated, which will make it easier to dissuade readers.

Generally speaking, it was only after chapter 30 that I entered the realm of fun. I have my own ideas. The protagonist has really engraved the core values ​​of society into his mind. It is quite refreshing to use kindness to put himself into danger to purify weak people and then slap those dangerous people in the face. But if I hit the sap a few more times, I will give the author a sap and turn him into a cat girl [smile]

The pace is fast, and the plot starts to get action in the first chapter. It's great. The protagonist is a Madonna type. It's a good review. I personally like it. Chapter 4: The first time I got the plague skill, I didn't use it on the opponent, but on myself. It was shocking. So if you don't like the Madonna type, don't read it. The protagonist's moral level is very high. Let me talk about what I personally think is not good, that is, the rewards and efforts are not equal. Although the protagonist can ignore the rewards, the author's will can give benefits, or treat the protagonist with kindness to reduce frustration. This atmosphere did not get better until the heroine had a saint career.

It's a pretty good work, but it's quite easy to persuade people to quit. The protagonist is a jerk who always gets frustrated. Every time, he can choose the one that is easiest to get defeated among countless ways. It gives people the impression that he eats without hardship and remembers to eat and not to fight. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

A very nice western fantasy niche work, I just want to eat something niche 😋😋 The author usually updates three times a day, oh that's enough😋😋 This book gave me a very good impression, surpassing those of old writers, maybe I'm in the wrong mood 😘😘 The protagonist is kind (or even a saint) and has normal outlook on life. The early stage of development is difficult, but the author said it will be easier later on. In terms of personality, he is rather cute, and it is not wrong to say that he is a college student (nonsense!). There may not be much tension or sense of crisis when in danger, which is also a major characteristic of the protagonist (suki) In the system, the number of occurrences is relatively small, it can be regarded as a guide, and there is no pretense or brainless plot. However, there will definitely be more scenes when the system takes the stage later. The writing is actually a bit fast (the author can ignore it. Just keep it up). For example, when I became an adventurer later, I actually felt that I was separated very quickly. Some things felt like I could write but didn't, but it doesn't matter👍🏻 (Oh, by the way, if the old author writes the adventure part for two people, there is a high probability that there will be two lines, but this disgusts me because the protagonist becomes the background. Compared with this article, the systematic adventure process does feel less, but it doesn't matter.) The emotional scenes and details seem to be more comfortable, and I have also buried a few details. I am looking forward to it ❤️❤️ The book review of more than 200 words is over.

I like the author's book very much, it just reminds me of the purpose of reading the novel in the first place. In fact, it was to improve some literary literacy and understand some hot memes on the Internet. But I was attracted by the content in the book unknowingly. To this day, I am moved by the bonds between those brave men and touched by the miraculous moments. There was a time when I fantasized that I could be like this. But as I grow up, this fantasy is gradually shattered. I also thought about writing a book to express my thoughts, but I was always a little timid. The protagonists in the book are a bit like virgins, but I think this is probably something that each of us can do in a different world. In a peaceful era, although we have seen many decisive protagonists, the softness in our hearts may have been permeated by peace. Come on, author, may our youth never fade [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]

It looks very good at the moment. The writing style is a bit like a few years ago or ten years ago (of course not in a derogatory sense), which is very suitable to my taste. The moral character of the protagonist really conforms to the standard saint template. At the beginning, the description was indeed a bit too Virgin-like, but after each incident, I can see the growth. Although I still have the Virgin-like heart, my actions have obviously become much more flexible. The writing is very real and natural. It is quite good. I hope I can maintain the current level in the future.

The story of a reckless young man from another world trying to change the world and save the people at the bottom At first he just wanted to survive, until he discovered that he could easily heal others and embarked on the path of becoming a saint. The protagonist is a character that everyone wants to save, and is targeted countless times and only fights back a few times. It is not a good story. Not everyone will be grateful for your help, and half of the people in this book are like this. Kindness is kindness, and kindness is also kind to the enemy. . . Does the protagonist really like to save people, or is he just trying to make himself someone needed by others? After all, at the beginning, he was no different from a wild dog, starving to death in an alley. Or maybe the protagonist is actually the agent of the gods in the world, and his thoughts are influenced by the gods. Otherwise, does anyone really want to save everyone after seeing the darkness? Finally, the main character is quite cute

Rating: Excellent work Tomato is a rare otherworld western fantasy novel with similar themes. I have only seen it in SF next door. The transformation theme basically doesn't look like a formality. It makes people feel that the protagonist is traveling to another world as a woman, but it's still very interesting. I really like the behavior and ideological character of the heroine in this article. She is decisive and compassionate at the same time. She has a good three-dimensional attitude and it is very comfortable to watch.

In fact, it's really good, but the protagonist is a true Virgin. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a Virgin bitch, but I really accepted it. If others want to kill him, the protagonist can forgive it. Those who can accept the protagonist's true fraternity can watch [rolls eyes]

Except that the protagonist always gets slapped, it feels pretty good.

It's acceptable, the writing and plot are okay, but the repetition of some scenes slightly affects the perception, but overall it's still a great work with its own characteristics, worth watching, I hope it can be continuously updated, keep up the good work.

Yes, but the author can add titles that are suitable to survive in the competition of Tomato online novels. Otherwise, it would be a pity for such a book to get lost...[Chigua][Chigua]

Chapter 4 turned over 3 times: (A sailor noticed the red spots on Yang Cheng's shoulders. He reached out and grabbed her collar and pulled it down. The sound of the tearing fabric was particularly harsh in the room) Can you change this paragraph? It's really poisonous~ [Crazy] (A sailor saw the red spots on Yang Cheng's shoulders and suddenly shouted in fear. It's a plague!) It's okay to change it to this ~ [crazy] [crying]

Interesting, I've read Chapter 32 so far. As for the novels whose protagonist is the Virgin, as long as the writing is good, I will basically not pick them. The protagonist will still attack those who are hostile to him, and the villains in the book so far do not have such outrageous moral kidnappings. Reading this gave me the feeling that the protagonist wanted to be a saint but was surrounded by villains and became the King of Elden[Thinking] What can I say, the front is very good. But the shocking speech that came out of Tedward was a bit weird at the beginning, and there was also a sea monster named Black Crow Harbor. According to the traditional saintly novel, shouldn't there be a big fuss in Black Crow Harbor? The nobles were so frightened that they cried for their parents and abandoned the people and just ran away. In the moment of despair, everyone was saved by the protagonist with gorgeous holy light magic. As a result, the BOSS was killed by the protagonist alone in an unknown cave. It's not that satisfying. As a giant monster and a BOSS, the sea monster doesn't have a strong sense of oppression. It's obvious that the seabed and the cave are all close-ups, but the ending is a bit bland. Although there are foreshadowings in the follow-up, people's expectations are not very high. Later, Mel asked her why she did it, and the protagonist said it was because "it was fun." The great justice I told the little knight before seemed to be withdrawn here. So, I went to the adventurers just for the experience and fun, and the leader of the adventurer team behind me also came in unexpectedly. It would be better to describe his struggle, pain, and unwillingness to regret after seeing the protagonist captured, which would make the character creation more natural. Moreover, other members of the team have their own sufferings. If the protagonist can add some guidance on the way to salvation, it will really taste like a saintly novel. Of course, the above is also my personal feeling. What the author has written so far is still good. I look forward to the follow-up development.

In fact, I have read this book many times. I am attracted to (may my compassion be stronger than my anger) every time. I have to say that I really feel it. But I was afraid that it was Dragon King's novel before, and I didn't have any books to read recently, so I came to read it. Shocking and delicious😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

Well, the few chapters I've read so far are okay. But I have some thoughts to share. I feel that the role and description of the city is still a little imperfect. There is insufficient description of urban functions and their characteristics. Second, I don't quite understand the structure of the worldview. If it is a grand world story, you can add some stories and legends from outside the area. To reflect the worldview

It's half-torture but not torture. When it gets better, it starts to abuse a little more. How can I put it? The author likes to write this kind of DM stuff. You can read it when the heart is over and it goes up and down. Those who have a bad heart are likely to snap [smile]

Although there are some aspects that need improvement, there is generally nothing wrong with it. Western fantasy? Moreover, the world view is quite attractive and quite innovative. It always feels a bit like Naruto. The manga is basically very fast from the beginning to Shippuden, with no daily pauses in the middle.

The abuser is real, but I think there is no need to take on the role and just be a silently appreciative bystander [blowing kiss]. The characters are three-dimensional and the details are realistic. And I prefer the protagonist's values ​​and behavior style. The writing style is acceptable and you can slowly chew on Agnes's life and suffering😋

A very nice book. Some people may feel that the protagonist described in some chapters is relatively cowardly, but I think it's okay and it fits the bill. The author's technique and the character's own personality are very good.

Hao Kan, the true saint protagonist, I like the rhythm of the narrative very much, and he constantly uses practical actions to save everyone in a harsh world.

Speaking of which, the protagonist fainted so many times, why didn't he turn into a puff?

It's an unconventional Western fantasy novel. It's a bit frustrating in the early stage, but it will get better in the later stage. The character's actions are in line with the character's logic. The protagonist is kind-hearted, so sometimes he seems "holy lady", but he does not lack determination when he really takes action. If you like mindless and cool stories, don't read this.

Be strict with yourself and be lenient with others Struggling in a dark environment, but still retaining his true nature after gaining strength Or is modern education too supermodel [shy] As for the plot of getting the first blood in the first place, it is understandable if you think about it carefully. After all, how could someone who has never killed anyone be able to do it casually? (Also, I actually like to see the main character deflated) Because only by being deflated can the protagonist grow, learn something, and learn how to survive in a different world with a completely different environment from the previous life. Looking forward to future plots!

It's pretty good. The writing is excellent and the plot is okay. The author just needs to keep updating.

I haven't read it (I'm not considering reading it at the moment, I'm just looking for it), but the author's attitude is rare on Tomato. Being able to reply to negative reviews is directly superior to me. I've seen too many authors only give likes and replies to 5-star reviews. Advantages of this book: The author responds to comments, has a good attitude, and can correct his mistakes if he knows them. Please like and reply to Tonic. I feel a little embarrassed to read the comments. ~(?)) I want to be a bitch