You Hired Me as a Scenic-Spot Extra, but I Wrote the Preface to the Pavilion of Prince Teng

Damn, I have only read Chapter 15 so far, but I found a very uncomfortable point, that is, the sentence fragmentation is too serious. It is not that there is anything wrong with that sentence, but that there are too many short sentences. I even counted it on purpose. For example, when I watched it on my mobile phone, the number on one page did not exceed 100. Although it was normal, it was still uncomfortable because if there were no more than 100 words on a page, I had to turn the page. Then every 10 or 20 pages, I had to watch the advertisement. This was very uncomfortable, so I think the drama is okay. Write it a little longer, at least not as short as now. Two words have to be separated. If you want to write, just write this paragraph directly. Don't insist on cutting those two words, and then the next sentence is less than 5 or 10 words long. This is really very uncomfortable. In addition, you have to watch advertisements, so you don't have the patience to wait, and the number of customers will decrease. (The above is what I wrote in the chapter review of Chapter 15. I have to add something here because I can't write it there.) In this case, it will be very troublesome to listen to the novel. The sentences are too short. When listening to the novel, I feel like I will break off after two words, and I will have to take a big breath before reading the next sentence, which is uncomfortable to listen to. (I don't know if other people are like this. Damn, but I abandoned a lot of articles because of this.) I just gave my opinions, and some of them were considered as suggestions, but absolutely no pointers. (I said a little bit, because I thought about it, and I probably don't have the capacity to give advice, so I just gave a little bit of advice, but this can be regarded as a suggestion.) I hope you can read my comments and improve them. However, whether this suggestion is accepted or not depends on the opinions of the general public. It's okay to drop one star, because recently I'm really disgusted with this kind of writing about male competition or female competition.

Let you be an extra in a scenic spot and write the preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion Author: I am spring breeze

Let you be an extra in a scenic spot and write the preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion

Well written, good job,