I Have a Ring That Turns Me into a Ghost

Author, do you know how disappointed I am? , You wrote it very well at the beginning, and you brought me in to read it, but the first book ended up like this? 1. There were so many scenes with the door-blocking man at the beginning. I thought he was a veteran villain who would die only after completing the level quickly, but he suddenly disappeared? There are also other supporting characters. There are more or less scenes in the beginning, but most of them died on the second night. Even how they died was explained briefly during the game. 2. How did the man who brought the newcomers into the book know the unlocking conditions of the evacuation point in the woods in such a short period of time? And he also collected five heads. How did he find those dead people. There is no detail in the book. After reading the first book, I felt like the long-awaited meal was actually steamed buns with chili sauce. Come on, author! I really like your subject matter. The writing in the first chapter is really touching. I have been hoarding it for more than ten days and have just finished reading the second copy. I have a few questions. First, why is the protagonist stronger than the ghost in the dungeon after becoming a ghost? Isn't the second one b+++? The protagonist is only C++, so there's a big difference between the two, right? The same is true for the first dungeon. Even if the protagonist becomes a ghost, the level is lower than that of the ghost, but the ghost still doesn't dare to mess with the protagonist. Could it be said that ghosts are inherently stronger than ghosts? Second, I remember that in the introduction, it was written in the first chapter that everyone in the apartment knew that the protagonist could become a ghost. However, after the second update in the book, the protagonist has not yet lost his horse. When will he lose his horse? It's not interesting to watch if you don't lose your horse. Third, why do we have to write about the protagonist being targeted and verbally attacked every time? And every time the protagonist would fight back, I felt it was really unnecessary to write it. First of all, they are enemies, and secondly, they are all going to die, so what do they care about their talk? I'm too lazy to pay attention to them, and it feels like it's superfluous.

It's very interesting. I haven't read this type of article for a long time. The writing is good and can create a scary atmosphere, which makes me feel a little bit involved. This book still has potential. It may also be because I have a relatively high poison resistance. I don't feel that it is too poisonous at the moment. At most, I feel that the protagonist is a bit hot-faced and cold-hearted when he first enters the dungeon and asks others questions. Of course, this is normal. I personally don't think it is poisonous. I think the character creation is quite good. At least when Lin Shu dies, I will feel sorry for it, so I won't be completely indifferent. In addition, I prefer that when they say their last words before they die, I can learn a little about their previous experiences. How should I say, it may increase the interest? I guess, I have nothing to say. Anyway, keep up the update 👍 I will ignore some details in the article. Generally speaking, it can be read. It is not particularly bad anyway. However, the author can describe more about the process of other supporting characters passing the dungeon.

It's okay, but the main character has a ring, why not wear it? He had to wait until the last minute to bring it with him, but he had to stab his benefactor in the back to force him to feel guilty. The evacuation point of the locust tree was opened, but the woman refused to leave and said she wanted to help the protagonist, so why not just give the prop to the protagonist? When I first looked at the title, I thought it was about the protagonist killing everyone, but it turns out that both As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is a Taoist and has a master. Doesn't it mean that a Taoist must have clear thoughts? It's both necessary and necessary, but the second copy is boring just looking at it.

After reading the first dungeon, how should I put it, the setting is a bit bland, and the ghost is actually conscious. Can it be understood that it is actually a game of world planes? It's not scary anymore, but there is one thing I like very much, that is, in the last few chapters where the protagonist kills Lin Shu, in a place full of weirdness, after experiencing so much, he finally clears the level and kills his savior. Of course, the premise is that the protagonist saves Lin Shu several times, but it is a fact that Lin Shu also saves the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist faces "living" "The choice to kill her is really amazing. This is human nature. There are no absolute good people. There are many loopholes in the plot. The other characters don't have much performance. It's not good for Niu Hang to make him a character with a little brain without too many details. If there is an explanation, that part of the plot is a bit abrupt. The final game is very exciting. I look forward to more performances [top post]

It's pretty cool. I feel like I could add one more setting. When the protagonist is a ghost, he can set his own rules. The harder the killing rule is, the stronger it will be. The simpler the rule, the weaker it will be. In this way, you can still explode when you encounter a strong ghost. Just a brief discussion 🍉

Okay, some details haven't been taken care of yet I still don't like this kind of protagonist. He claims that he is the most important, but he keeps working for women, just like a nanny.

The subject matter is good, a bit similar to the Trickster House. Regardless of the horror atmosphere, the characters are all very good, but there are too few. It is recommended to update more.

Very good, very beautiful, the subject matter is very novel! But is there a female protagonist? This is very important to me 💕

Very good, one thing is that if you take the golden needle, everyone in the dungeon will die, and no one will know, except the three people in your apartment. Unless there are deduction-type props on the opposite side, why should you return them? , And the apartments are all hostile, doesn't this mean returning powerful props to the other side? Pretty much no one knows that you took this prop, except for the three old people. Isn't this equivalent to two special props? A powerful prop that can turn into a ghost at any time, and turn into a ghost to evacuate patients. Other ghosts won't kill you, and they can retreat even if you turn into a human. It's quite strictly confidential. There's also a golden needle, a power-attack prop. Aren't you invincible at the start? Why return it to the other side? Why don't you keep it for yourself? The protagonist's character belongs to the sinister type. Unlike the Heart of the Holy Mother, speaking human words means having these two props. The second sub board can trick everyone to death and get a lot of props.

To be honest, some of the small designs in it are relatively new (the male protagonist's ring). I have never seen similar designs before, maybe because I haven't read many books. But overall it is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep updating.