Return of the Curse: the Story of a Human Boy and His Adoptive Mother with a Curse Spirit

"You're a curse that plays tricks on humans!" "How rude, we are mother and son."

Authentic Junior Wa, I can only say that Senior Go's move is too cruel [smile][smile][smile][smile]

To sum it up in one sentence: This is a cursed fanfic that plays with the idea of ​​turning a scary boss into a mother. It is both light-hearted and funny, as well as warm and redeeming. The greatest charm of this book is that the "sense of contrast" is played to the extreme. As a terrifying cursed spirit that kills people according to the rules in the original work, the Rift Girl was called "Mom" by the protagonist at the beginning, causing her brain to shut down. Later, she was forced to turn on the child-rearing mode - the cold sister-type cursed spirit said "kill you", but her hands were making you fried eggs and picking you up from school. This "tsundere mother under a scary shell" setting is too over the top. The protagonist's character is also very interesting. There is no cheat, and the main character is "thick-skinned makes you invincible". When faced with an undecided situation, he will step down first, and if he cannot defeat him, he will admit defeat, but at the critical moment, he can rely on his cleverness and newly awakened magic to defeat the general. This kind of "bottomless survival flow" combined with the "forced development" of the cracked girl creates a full sense of interaction. Every chapter is looking forward to what trouble this pair of enemies will cause. The author's rhythm control is very sophisticated. In the first three chapters, the world view, techniques, and contractual relationships are all clearly explained, and at the same time, the jokes are dense and not delayed. The writing style is relaxed and smooth, suitable for reading before going to bed or while fishing. It doesn't use your brain at all and is just for fun. If you like to go against the grain, like to watch horror characters being conquered and become "one of your own", or simply want to read a light-hearted, funny and sweet cursed return fanfic, this book is worth a try. I look forward to the author's continued updates and want to see more famous scenes of the slit-mouthed "mother"'s tsundere!

Compared with many invincible Shuang Wen Dou Nuo Liu who are eager and shameless, the author of this book gives a completely different direction. Life is not just about fighting and killing, but also about peaceful years. Whether it is between tasks or the relationship between characters (the interaction and relationship process between the Rift Girl and the protagonist), it depicts another living world of Curseback. It does not have as much violence as the author of the same track. It has warmth, humanities, and emotions. Of course, fighting is also an integral part. Rather than saying it is a fast-food article about Curseback, I prefer to call it a feast that satisfies the setting of the Curseback world.

The score is a bit too low, so I'll give it five stars to balance it out. It's super exciting, of course it's not really great, but for all the different types of fan fiction in Tomato, it's pretty good, really. I hope the protagonist's role can be increased in the future. Now this chapter is also very interesting, but the protagonist's participation is still too little. I want to watch the two protagonists. It doesn't matter if it's written a little bit, I actually want to watch it. Very good as a seasoning. It can be seen that the author has some control over the plot. Just write according to the plot you want to write. Don't stop, and you must finish it. Although there are many daily plots now, they are a bit bland. Moreover, the amount of text information is too little, and I don't know what I read after reading one chapter.

How can I put it this way? It's well written. It doesn't follow the original plot step by step like other spell fans, and it's not like a simulator (it's not that it doesn't look good, it's just that after watching it from Laoji, everything else feels like a copycat). The plot is novel, and it's quite comfortable to watch. I hope the author writes it well and doesn't end it.

The writing is still good, and the relationship between the protagonist and the slit girl is well written. However, it is a minor drawback that the protagonist and his relatives are still alive. Furthermore, the part about going to China is a bit dramatic and off-topic. If these changes are made, the rating should be improved a bit.

Ha, because of a repressed mother's sentence, the boy embarked on the path of curse. At the same time, the curse spirit who only knew how to kill also began to think about the meaning of life. "It might be more dignified if you don't call me mom." "But I'm useless."

It feels like it's a very new type of story about curses. I was a little uncomfortable with it at first, but it doesn't matter now that I'm used to it. It's identified as Hao Chi [face covering]

Looks good! ! ! The background of the original drama is introduced just right, the writing is fascinating, and the fighting scenes are well described! ! Hope this book sticks around! ! !

The plot is good. But why do all the book reviews smell like AI?

The book is pretty good, but I don't know why the comments and paragraphs all smell like AI.

Lizi is alive, and she is very helpful. This is why I read fanfiction.

Nothing wrong, overall good What! Be specific? Well, in the words of your uncle Shiliu Long That's it After eating a feast of mustard sword, Kinoshita, Fushiguro and other fighting pleasures Come and have such a delicious dessert It's so pleasant I'm full😋😋😋 [Has been planted][Bookshelf plus one][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for more explosive updates]

It's pretty good except that the main character is a bit weak. Everything else is pretty good.

It's pretty good to watch, although the emotional dialogue between the characters is a bit stiff. I hope it will improve in the future.

Without cheats, I have to rely on my brain to survive. The growth of the protagonist is super real, and getting along with one person and one magic spirit is super easy.

The writing is very good, I like this kind of matrilineal girlfriend the most [Adoration]

That's it for today's tomatoes [angry]

It's a wonderful and well-written story. The interaction between the male protagonist and the cracked girl is very interesting, and some of the plot changes in the original work are also unexpected and reasonable.

The kendo club has become a movie theater, and you can watch "Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon". This is so funny.

The cracked girl is quite good at taking care of others, and her daily interactions with the male protagonist seem quite healing.

I have read the first twenty chapters so far. The plot and setting are very good. There are no surprises. I look forward to the follow-up episodes.

I would like to encourage you to practice more on combat descriptions.

I didn't expect the setting of the girl with a cracked mouth. She is fierce and can cook and take care of the male protagonist. The tender scenes made my heart warm.

Very creative fanfic, good-looking, very OK!

The character restoration is acceptable, the story concept is innovative, some sections are insufficiently prepared, and the overall reading experience is stable.

I'm curious about such a subject, so I'll give it a try [laughing]

It looks okay, the content is pretty good

The storyline is compact and gripping